BDSM expert/author to write a story based on my idea

[tw_holt]

Firstly, i'm not qualifed to write a BDSM story. Secondly, I do have a thing for minor and major plot twists. I have an ending to a story featuring a dom female and her male sub floating around in my head. The plot twist is either offensive, sad, or really neat - I have no idea. Im hoping an expert in that lifestyle will message me and I can go over my story premise with you. Perhaps you could write it. Private messages are enabled, feel free to send me one if interested.

 

[HeyAll]

What's the story about? The basics I mean.

 

[tw_holt]

A guy has been seeing a gal for a few months. she opens up to him about this lifestyle, wondering if he'd like to try it. he agrees. they talk about it and over the course of a month, she breaks him down and he is her sub (this is where my ignorance about the subject matter comes into play - why i'm hoping someone will write it for me).

at the end of the month, she lets him be a dom for her - as a reward for him trying it out. she says he can do whatever he wants to her. well....he's secretly been quite angry with her over all this. he's lasted an entire month though and now its his turn to be a dom and "punish" her.

that's where the twist comes in - how he punishes her.

 

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[tw_holt]

Industrial_bondage, that's where the twist at end in occurs. When she hands the reins over to him to have his turn at domming her - through a series of questions he asks her, while slamming her against the wall, regarding what she wants him to do to her, all her answers are "yes!!" - he calms down, says hes going to punish her. He blindfolds her, gathers his clothes, and leaves her, sitting on her bed in the dark, alone. That's how he punishes her. Do you get it?

She does minutes later. But he's already left, his car is gone. Too vague? Too much of a riddle? In the D/s world, isthis highly offensive?

 

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[tw_holt]

He would be denying her what she wants. The reader would think he's going to go all out on her, because he secretly hates it, but instead he just leaves her there - not giving her what she wants, to be dommed. Maybe shes in love with him and it hurts that he left.

 

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[tw_holt]

Ok, can you write it for me?
My original post in the thread was asking someone else to write it. Maybe the guy hates being talked down to or discipline but goes along willing etc. Maybe he really wants it to work with this woman, but she really gets into her Dom role. He gets angrier etc.

 

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[tw_holt]

Totally understandable. I have the same issue. Backlog for mostly incest and IR stories, hence why I was hoping someone could take this idea and run with it. Thanks tho.

 

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[lovecraft68]

It's not offensive, just don't fall for the images shows like CSI and 50 Shades have told people are BDSM.
I'm not sure his leaving her is punishment. Frustrating, certainly. Anti climactic, certainly. But punishment?

Though, if you wrote it from the point if view of the ex boy friend sdhe calls when her favorite vibrator just don't do...

Truth!

 

[Erochic]

I have read this thread on and off - and I have to say I find this story idea really disturbing.
I like being dominant - but in my mind it's something that I need to know is okay with the other person... I also find it very scary and threatening to give up control - and have only ever let one person tie me up ... Someone with whom I had complete trust... And we still had to be careful because things easily got too much for me.

This story idea pushes my buttons in all the wrong ways. I feel angry that somehow her dominance is seen as something wrong and that he is going to punish her for it - even if he agreed to it - and it makes me feel fearful and sick to my stomach.

The bottom line is that men are always going to be stronger than women, and women really do have to live with potential fear and danger. Even if a woman is dominant she knows that.

 

[lovecraft68]

I have read this thread on and off - and I have to say I find this story idea really disturbing.
I like being dominant - but in my mind it's something that I need to know is okay with the other person... I also find it very scary and threatening to give up control - and have only ever let one person tie me up ... Someone with whom I had complete trust... And we still had to be careful because things easily got too much for me.

This story idea pushes my buttons in all the wrong ways. I feel angry that somehow her dominance is seen as something wrong and that he is going to punish her for it - even if he agreed to it - and it makes me feel fearful and sick to my stomach.

The bottom line is that men are always going to be stronger than women, and women really do have to live with potential fear and danger. Even if a woman is dominant she knows that.

welcome to man town.

Women on top/femdom is not widely accepted here because although there are many female readers/authors here and in general far more women are into porn and erotica than before, the vocal majority on this site and others like it are men.

NOt just men, but the "real men" and in order to make them happy every woman here has to be one pf two things.

1-a cum starved slut who can cum at just the thought of sucking a real man's cock and tells him to invite his friends because she can't get enough cock, ever.

2-a begging, pleading, whimpering victim who is either being raped, sold into sexual slavery, or is the victim of a Dom who is not a dom, but a sadist.

That is what that faction wants and whether they are the majority or not they are the trolls and the ones who will trash and bomb and threaten any author who dares have a woman in control(even if the male character very much enjoys it)

Sad, but true. To the point that femdom is relegated to the fetish section rather than BDSM where it has every right being.

As for the thread...any "BDSM expert" who will write this as is....is no expert, its a sick sadist who has no clue of any lifestyle other than that of abusing women.

This is a valid story idea, but for Noncon/reluctance, not bdsm...too bad many writing on this site don't know the difference and there is no screening process to place them where they belong.

 

[tw_holt]

But he consents. He goes along with it. When it's his turn to be a Dom he does absolutely nothing. He leaves.

Perhaps the guy is a jerk and that's his way of telling her that he's not into BDSM. It's just an idea. Just a different way for him to say it isn't for him after agreeing to try it out with his girlfriend.

You know what? Doesnt have to be a guy doing thjs. It can be 2 women. Or 2 men.

Person A is into something. They share this interest with their significant other: Person B. Person B goes along with it to appease PersonA. After a month its Person B's turn to do the thing to Person A. Person B doesnt and leaves Person A - its mean and hurtful bc Person A was in love with Person B. Simple as that.

Insert BDSM as the thing Person A is into. Insert whatever genders you want for persons A and B and there it is. They dont have to be humans for all I care. I picked a male doing this bc men typically have issues with dominant women.