Basically I'm posting this to get that...

[nakdsub]

stupid cuckold story off the front page. I'm getting tired of seeing it there.

In case some of you LW fans missed it, there is a story that has intrigued me and may you as well. Most of the time LW stories come and go. I read them and forget about them the next day because I know they are stories and not real people in real life.

But this story caught my attention. See what you think. Here is chapter 1, chapter 2 is running right now. I'm not sure if there will be a chapter 3 or not.

http://www.literotica.com/s/nice-guy-ch-01

 

[Mostera1]

Hopefully

There is another chapter. I found the premise different. I did not particularly care for Jan she changed too much for me, from loving wife to concerned friend to an over the top vindictive "loving" wife and total bitch. Gail is sweet, and I liked the empathy for Jan, the sex with Greg and voluntering to assist him with the next chapter in his life if the author decides to continue. I enjoyed it.

 

[nakdsub]

The stories have

really intrigued me. Like I said, most of the LW stories I simple read. This one actually has me stirred up. Which is strange because I always wondered why some people take these stories so personally and so serious, I find my self almost in the mode with respect to these two.

 

[Mostera1]

Yep

This one has stirred a lot of emotion. The second chapter was great. Will the good guy finish first? Will the ex get torched? Are there signifiant extenuating circumstances enabling reconciliation??? Will Greg cause Robert to rollover in his grave? (yes!!) I don't trust Joe. I agree the character portrayals are superb. I hate Robert! Jan is mentally unstable, was she drugged? Stay tuned...

 

[Mostera1]

Just read

The third chapter.......??????????? An utter disappintment.

 

[nakdsub]

I was going to try to get to you before you read it

Sorry. I couldn't believe it myself. I was like two different people. One wrote chapters 1 and 2, and then got someone else to write 3.

 

[Mostera1]

Thanks

For trying, but unfortunately I was up early. If anything I should have warned you! Still I would have read it anyway. BUT with a warning I wouldve had a barf bag standing by.
This was so bad I cancelled the favorites on the first two.

 

[bogert]

no 3

Looks like some one else has written the chapter number 3...
The writer of chapter 1 and two was lost

 

[nakdsub]

Yup...

I can't remember being more disappointed. It was so great for such a long time, then...well