Bare Butt

[Guest]

The story entitled Bare Butt was awful. There was not a thing good about this story. I love the exhibitionism stories most, but not even the idea was good, there was no character development (i.e. what they look like, what their personalities are like etc.). The author moved from one part to another of this story with no plot or story behind it. Two thumbs way down for this pitiful excuse for a literotica story!

 

[Guest]

I couldn't agree more!!!

 

[X-Hero-Brandon]

ya the story sucked but so what experince is the best teacher

 

[Guest]

Boy, what constructive comments! And what class and grace with which they were delivered! I just hope that you people are lucky enough to have your stories trashed in a similar manner as you have done to this author's.

I could be wrong, but I thought the "Story Feedback" section was a place for readers to give input to help the writers, not to crap on another's work. Assessments like "the plot sucks" are not constructive - they are idiotic at best and mean at worst. If you have something helpful to say, then say it. However, if you just feel the need to say something rude and mean, then keep it to yourself. No one here wants to deal with your lack of manners.

For the record, I have read the story in question and don't think it's all that bad - it's cute, even. Why all of you would pick that story, out of all the stories, to pick on is beyond me.

 

[Guest]

I guess that Litcrit's point is fiar enough. I felt that there was an element of sweetness or innocence in the story. I reckon the author is probably very young so it is interesting to be given an insight into what goes through the mind of a young person.
Apologies for the nastiness!!!