captainb
Driving You Mad
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Closed for CaptainB and Maid of Marvels. Read and remember...)
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The car was a work of art. Sure, it was older than he was. Sure, it had a few trails of rust forming along the bottom of its two large doors and outlining one wheelwell. Sure, it could be heard two blocks away as it rumbled through the trailer park. But to Nick Simmons, his ’75 Gran Torino was nothing short of priceless. He’d spent 2500 of his hard-earned dollars on the car (if you’re going to work at McDonald’s, you might as well have a goal in mind), and traded his weekends for the past year working on it in his cousin’s garage. The car was clean, wide off-white vinyl seats gleaming inside and the new paint job shining outside, a deep maroon lovingly hand polished so your reflection seemed to sink several inches deep. The rust? A few more weekends with fiberglass patches and the power sprayer would take care of that. The noise? It was a purr to Nick’s ears, and he liked to boast that the 400 cubic inch V8 could drive his car faster uphill than down.
He’d finally gotten permission to park it at school last week, and it had been pouring buckets yesterday when classes ended. She had been standing inside the front door of the high school, dubiously eying the buses lined up at the puddled curb. Nick had been in love with her for over a year, something that he was apparently the last to realize. Her friends recognized it though. She was popular, a natural beauty with a body as sharp as her mind. From time to time she dated a few of the guys who hung out in her clique, but he’d never heard any of them referred to as “boyfriend.” Still, they acted territorial, and he heard the snickers when he was caught staring at her from down the row of lockers, or when they teased her about it in plain sight of him. He'd transferred in two years back, a lean, quiet kid with a shock of dark curly hair and secondhand, but clean, clothes. She was friendly enough when they did talk in passing, but she never encouraged him. Still, she filled his dreams and her face distracted him during classes, although he’d never had the nerve to do anything about it. Until yesterday, when it was pouring buckets, and he’d stopped at the door next to her and they'd both watched the rain come down. It happened so quick…
“So, um, I’ll give you a ride home if you want.”
“Okay, thanks.”
And they’d talked as he drove her home, and she laughed at something he said (he had no clue what it was, but it didn’t matter), and she’d smiled right into his face when he pulled up in front of her parent's Victorian house with the wraparound porch, and he’d just gone for it before he could think and asked her if she wanted to go to the drive-in Friday night and she’d said sure! Sure! And he’d roared home in his beloved ’75 Gran Torino and spent the evening dusting the inside and cleaning the windows and wiping down the seats and vacuuming the floor and between the cushion cracks, and when the rain stopped later that evening he’d slapped on a fresh coat of wax even though it didn’t need it, then sat in front of the TV for an hour watching… something. He was going on a date with her! Suddenly, anything in the world seemed possible.
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The car was a work of art. Sure, it was older than he was. Sure, it had a few trails of rust forming along the bottom of its two large doors and outlining one wheelwell. Sure, it could be heard two blocks away as it rumbled through the trailer park. But to Nick Simmons, his ’75 Gran Torino was nothing short of priceless. He’d spent 2500 of his hard-earned dollars on the car (if you’re going to work at McDonald’s, you might as well have a goal in mind), and traded his weekends for the past year working on it in his cousin’s garage. The car was clean, wide off-white vinyl seats gleaming inside and the new paint job shining outside, a deep maroon lovingly hand polished so your reflection seemed to sink several inches deep. The rust? A few more weekends with fiberglass patches and the power sprayer would take care of that. The noise? It was a purr to Nick’s ears, and he liked to boast that the 400 cubic inch V8 could drive his car faster uphill than down.
He’d finally gotten permission to park it at school last week, and it had been pouring buckets yesterday when classes ended. She had been standing inside the front door of the high school, dubiously eying the buses lined up at the puddled curb. Nick had been in love with her for over a year, something that he was apparently the last to realize. Her friends recognized it though. She was popular, a natural beauty with a body as sharp as her mind. From time to time she dated a few of the guys who hung out in her clique, but he’d never heard any of them referred to as “boyfriend.” Still, they acted territorial, and he heard the snickers when he was caught staring at her from down the row of lockers, or when they teased her about it in plain sight of him. He'd transferred in two years back, a lean, quiet kid with a shock of dark curly hair and secondhand, but clean, clothes. She was friendly enough when they did talk in passing, but she never encouraged him. Still, she filled his dreams and her face distracted him during classes, although he’d never had the nerve to do anything about it. Until yesterday, when it was pouring buckets, and he’d stopped at the door next to her and they'd both watched the rain come down. It happened so quick…
“So, um, I’ll give you a ride home if you want.”
“Okay, thanks.”
And they’d talked as he drove her home, and she laughed at something he said (he had no clue what it was, but it didn’t matter), and she’d smiled right into his face when he pulled up in front of her parent's Victorian house with the wraparound porch, and he’d just gone for it before he could think and asked her if she wanted to go to the drive-in Friday night and she’d said sure! Sure! And he’d roared home in his beloved ’75 Gran Torino and spent the evening dusting the inside and cleaning the windows and wiping down the seats and vacuuming the floor and between the cushion cracks, and when the rain stopped later that evening he’d slapped on a fresh coat of wax even though it didn’t need it, then sat in front of the TV for an hour watching… something. He was going on a date with her! Suddenly, anything in the world seemed possible.