Backpacker spied on by hosts

[kisandra]

Thought I would get this down.

-A 23 yo backpacker is hosted by a nice couple.
-The host secretly install a camera in her bedroom.

The backpacker finds the camera and decides to put on a show for them. Even enticing the couple into room to watch her sleeping. Of course they turn up the air conditioning so she throws off the blankets. No sleep inducing drugs involved of course.

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[sirhugs]

wouldn't they rather have her awake?

 

[kisandra]

Awake?

wouldn't they rather have her awake?

Not if they want to watch her sleeping....

 

[sirhugs]

wouldn't they rather have her awake?

but don't they soon want to play?

 

[kisandra]

Oh now I'm with you.

My preferred genre for the idea is voyeur/exhibitionism so play not really a feature, for me at least.

 

[my_other_life]

Your first story is good, with a nice build up. But, then it kind of ends before much else goes on. Your new story idea has some interesting possibilities to extend it out - is the backpacker an innocent with a naughty streak, or just naughty to begin with? This could give you a chance to develop the character during a relatively short story. Does she let on that she knows she's being watched? I think you're suggesting she lets them know but you could draw out the teasing a bit which leads the couple to turning up the AC. The conversations at dinner should be a lot of fun to write, with innuendos and hints galore. Will she flash in person when one or both the couple might see her, like maybe walking nude to the kitchen in the middle of the night for a snack when she can hear that they're up maybe watching TV? Lots of possibilities here.

 

[kisandra]

Your first story is good, with a nice build up. But, then it kind of ends before much else goes on. Your new story idea has some interesting possibilities to extend it out - is the backpacker an innocent with a naughty streak, or just naughty to begin with? This could give you a chance to develop the character during a relatively short story. Does she let on that she knows she's being watched? I think you're suggesting she lets them know but you could draw out the teasing a bit which leads the couple to turning up the AC. The conversations at dinner should be a lot of fun to write, with innuendos and hints galore. Will she flash in person when one or both the couple might see her, like maybe walking nude to the kitchen in the middle of the night for a snack when she can hear that they're up maybe watching TV? Lots of possibilities here.

Nice, I think everything would be subtle manipulation of each other. The a/c gets turned up before she finds the camera....making her shed the bedclothes in her sleep......

of course she is initially very cross, that's the reality after all. then the fantasy part is she watches what they watched and finds it quite a turn on....what to do now, she thinks.

of course they could all end up in a 3some (yawn for me) but I'm looking to tease out the erotic and complex emotions that might arise....

 

[my_other_life]

If she's purely an exhibitionist you could have the couple introduce some toys and then describe the feeling the she feels as she uses the toys knowing she's being watched. You might even include a memory of the first time she was an exhibitionist by accident due to a rip or something that she didn't realize. If it's a relatively young age memory Literotica allows non-explicit flashbacks like that (but check the latest) - you'd probably want to emphasize her embarrassment mixed with the strange sensation of pleasure that she's feeling now.

For further adventures she might "accidentally" see either one of the couple and realize she's a voyeur and the couple might be exhibitionists themselves. Then you've got a game of all of them peeking and exposing. A possible finale might be a big mutual masturbation, maybe starting off accidentally, where they're all watching each other. That would keep it a voyeur/exhibitionist story while avoiding the threesome.

This story definitely has legs - have fun with it, I'm looking forward to see how it goes!

 

[my_other_life]

Forgot to add, you'll have to decide 1st or 3rd view - it'll depend on whether you want to really focus on the backpacker's experience or if you want to include the couple. Lots of possibilities here!

 

[kisandra]

Forgot to add, you'll have to decide 1st or 3rd view - it'll depend on whether you want to really focus on the backpacker's experience or if you want to include the couple. Lots of possibilities here!

mmm that's a thought.

of course parts of the story can be focussed on the backpacker and other times on the host....

I know some writers jump around that that....

 

[my_other_life]

How's the story coming?

 

[kisandra]

How's the story coming?

I've finished part one. But waiting to hear back from an editor. I had a go at putting some images in, I quite like experimenting

I found this software that turns images into sketches.....so gets around a lot of the rules.....

 

[ericrodman101]

Backpacker is a guy?

This scenario is fine where the backpacker is a guy too. The couple spy on the backpacker while he marsturbates. They watch him bang out a few , admire his fabulous cock, are amazed by the gallons of cum - but where does it lead. Just yoyeurism, do they stream him live online, invite their friends over to watch, join in?