'Baby sister' - Stories by Teflon

[Teflon]

Hi people,

could anyone give me some feed back on my stories, any comments would be most appreciative.

the office
just good friends
the baby sitter
Baby sister
sex before christmas

i dedicate my next story to Julie. you know who you are, sexy.

 

[Xander]

Hi ya' Teflon. Just finished reading Baby Sister. Excellent story. I like it a lot.
One thing though. There was a few spelling mistakes that annoyed me. Especially because they were placed in the heated parts of the story

 

[Crystal]

Hi Teflon,
I loved your 'Baby Sister' story - it was incredibly hot and I envy your ability to sustain a love scene in prose for so long. It was really descriptive and god what a pussy Tammy had!
I'll need a bit of time to recover from that one but I'll definetely read the others at some point and let you know what I thought. Its true that there are some mistakes that the spellcheck wouldn't have picked up upon but I wouldn't worry - it is a mistake that we are all guilty of making. I would advise you to make at least two read throughs before you submit a story in future.
Well done and keep it up (as it were!)
Lots of Love,
Crystal
xx

P.S. I presume you're a UK writer - there will be enough of us to make a netball team soon!

[This message has been edited by crystal (edited 01-05-2000).]

 

[Skitten]

hi Teflon ;
Loved you story it was greatly written and one of the best I've read in a long time thanks for the story I am sure everyone who reads it will enjoy it

 

[Teflon]

Thanks for the replies! Admittedly I don't tend to read through my work much, but it is very easy to overlook something so small. If you have anymore helpful hints please drop me a line. Also please be sure to read the other stories.

Waiting for your comments.

P.S. I don't they would let me play netball! Shame though, all those girls in short skirts, now there would be a story or 3!!

 

[Teflon]

See another overlook, its so goddamn easy to do. my brain must work about three times quicker than my fingers, bollocks.

it meant to read:

'P.S. I don't THINK they.....'

 

[Guest]

Babysitter story was good, do you have any about a babysitter doing it with a dog?