Awakening Eve Ch. 01

[myantonia2]

Sorry, I don't know how to create a hot link. To read this story, please go to
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=237491.

I would love feedback on this story and the next chapter, which is posted at http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=255474.

I'm working on Chapter 3 and don't want to get much farther without more comments, suggestions.

Thanks.