Available Editors - November 2010

[snoopercharmbrights]

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[Sanichi]

I am a English literature college student

Rachel, Rachel, Rachel.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

Bump.

 

[Guest]

Willing to trade Edit services....

Hi,
I write and have a little bit of time to edit.
I am willing to trade editing with another budding author...
Not sure how it will work but PM me and we can discuss.

I have a story (several) but one in particular that needs a fresh set of eyes!!

Thanks
FM

 

[soflabbwlvr]

Hi,
I write and have a little bit of time to edit.
I am willing to trade editing with another budding author...
Not sure how it will work but PM me and we can discuss.

I have a story (several) but one in particular that needs a fresh set of eyes!!

Thanks
FM

What is the length and category of your story?

 

[Guest]

What is the length and category of your story?

7700 words - 28 pages
erotic coupling

Just needs a review for comma and semi-col abuse....

Sample/Snippet:

That summer, our company planned a team-building beach party for all the managers. I was very excited because I was in much better shape than every other male manager at work. Between playing hockey and being a volunteer fireman, I have managed to keep my middle-aged body in really good shape. I was extremely eager to show it off., especially to Kasey. As we played beach games, I noticed a few jealous stares at my muscular torso and perhaps a few ogles too. I was feeling good about myself but, overall, the beach day was uneventful…except for the non-stop opportunities to stare at Kasey’s very nice body.

She had an awesome set of tits, abundant and firm; filling her modest once-piece bathing suit. Ironically, I actually preferred that style because it highlighted a woman’s ass; and, in contrast to a bikini, a one-piece suit took the focus off of a woman’s tummy. In my experience, I’ve never met a woman who was happy with their waist-line but Kasey’s looked just fine to me. I watched her from every angle I could and was amazed that she was in such good shape. Yes, her front was very nice, but it was her apple shaped ass that made my imagination run wild. I had to be careful not to get an erection while watching her play on the beach. I was equally amazed at my ability to manage contain myself considering that every movement she made drove me crazy with desire.

 

[duskyalpha]

Hey I am avialable for review/editing things if someone needs it.

I have a preference for doing scifi and I am a grammar Nazi, so you been warned!!!

I really don't like to do any BSDM or nonconsentual stuff ... but anything else is ok
If you would like me to review something please contact me via pm or e-mail.

Sincerely,

duskalpha
Volunteer Editor

 

[Amela]

I am available for editing. Any kind of story is fine. Please send a request to [personal info prohibited per our forum guidelines] or a private message here in the forum. Thank you.

 

[unregex2020]

7700 words - 28 pages
erotic coupling

Just needs a review for comma and semi-col abuse....

I would be glad to offer editing services; I am also a grammar Nazi, and a spelling one as well.

 

[etoile_noir78]

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[SecretSubmissive]

I am available to edit this month!

I'm a year old French with English student from London who at the moment specialises in creative writing. I'm an amateur proof reader and editor, hoping to pursue a career in publishing when I graduate. I'm not yet brave enough to submit any of my own work but would be more than happy to take a look at your good writing and help make it great. I'll admit being a language student has made me somewhat of a grammar fiend and I boast an extremely wide vocabulary that comes from a voracious thirst for reading anything and everything. I also possess a darker sexier side that has lead me to dabbling in the less 'vanilla' side of sex (in theory if not yet in practise .

 

[Mousie762]

SecretSubmissive, I would like to ask for editing help but you do not seem to have private messaging turned on. To quote snoopercharmbrights in the instructions at the top of the page,

"Please ensure that you have switched on your Private Messages. Go to User CP (top left of this page) then click on Edit Options (in the left hand column) and then tick Enable Private Messaging in the second box down. Make sure that the next box down (Receive Private Messages only from Buddies and Moderators) is NOT ticked. Finally click Save Changes at the bottom of that page."

 

[shyanalvirgin]

my submissive side needs an outlet

i just wrote this off the top of my head, though it was a fantasy i wanked through last night. if it turns you on at all, please PM me and ill keep it flowing. normally im straight, and ive only been with women in real life, and the only men that turn me on are the porn stars that are but fantasy, so i play it out... its a turn on if it turns on, otherwise i can keep these fantasies to myself


There I stood, naked, water running down my body knowing I was being watched, groomed and cleaned for a very hard purpose. I had never actually been fucked, dominated before, and I soon realized my passion in one direction can go just as intensely in another. Sometimes being a piece of ass is exactly what you need.
It all started with anad in the paper for male model audtions, adding that they wanted lean-musclar boyish features and an email to send a picture and phone number. deep down I knew what this was, probably porn and definitely gay. but something drove me mad and that night I put on a thong one of my exgirlfriends had left behind and just stared at my ass, with my back arched, perfectly fuckable. so I put a pair of jeans way too small and took a picture of my ass and sent it. a man called about twenty minutes after I sent the email, asking for an interview by him and his producer.
Next thing I know, im at this huge house, where im met by C. who seemed to be a photograhper, and E. who seemed to be a producer. I came wearing that gstring and tight jeans with a plain white tshirt. apparently, the producer really liked what he saw, and after a few poses that seemed harmless he had C. escort me to the bathroom to clean up for the audition. I must have been high with

 

[Stentorian]

Hello!

I am currently a student attending a university and working towards a degree in English. If there is anyone who requires assistance in editing or proofreading stories about Same-Sex (male) encounters, I'm almost always available.

Thank you for your time.