carsonshepherd
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OhMissScarlett said:Same here. I'm posting nude pictures on LJ when I should be writing this sex scene.![]()
I went and looked. Me like
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OhMissScarlett said:Same here. I'm posting nude pictures on LJ when I should be writing this sex scene.![]()
Wow, you're harsh.carsonshepherd said:Needless to say, I stopped reading right then even though the story had about a million more chapters.
JamesSD said:Wow, you're harsh.
I read for plot, so the occasional screwed up detail doesn't phase me. But I'm not really a details kind of guy.
And you are... right?entitled said:Only if you're into that type of thing.
sssshhhh... That was supposed to be our little secret.Stella_Omega said:And you are... right?
Meh, only if I'm being gangbanged by bmx bikers and that hardly ever happens anymore.entitled said:Only if you're into that type of thing.
Omg, he's such a well-endowed little whore, ICarson said:I went and looked. Me like
him.Rumple Foreskin said:I leave author's notes whenever they seem appropriate. Due to the limits of Lit's category system, I feel readers should be alerted if a story contains elements some might find distasteful.
Mix & Match was, intentionally, a multi-categoy story which was placed, after consulting with Laurel, in Erotic Couplings. I opened with this note:
This is a work of fiction (no, really?) that contains elements of: incest, group sex, interracial love, anal, lesbian sex, and romance. You have been warned.
IMHO, if a story has no sex, but is not in Non-Erotic, it makes sense to let readers know up front, especially for a contest entry such as, The Belle of Catawba Street, which I put in Humor instead of Non-Erotic:
Warning: This story has NO, I say again, NO, sex. It does have KKK wannabe's, the "N" word, a cross burning, and a vicious dog attack. Oh yeah, it's supposed to be funny.
All that said, I totally agree with Carson. If a writer won't take the time to do a little research, why should I that the time to read their stuff?
Rumple Foreskin![]()
Is all right, your friends like naakt pixturesOhMissScarlett said:Same here. I'm posting nude pictures on LJ when I should be writing this sex scene.![]()
Authors note: please ignore the authors note at the end of Ch.04 where I said Marie was Leonn’s jealous and neglected mistress. I’ve since changed my mind. : )
Please note: there have been some artistic licence taken with the conversations between Carly and Miriam to ease the flow of the story.

wishfulthinking said:omg, am I the only one who is really really guilty of this? I mean reeeaallly guilty![]()
2 that come most readily to mind are:
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Originally she was his mistress. She ended up his dad's second wife. Shit happens. My readers applauded my decision.
When I say artistic license, I mean I sort changed the conversations in the previous 2 chapters. No one said boo.
I think authors notes are a tool that should be effectively used [unlike me].
Perhaps Mr Corvette should have kept his mouth shut. You reached the end before back clicking, didn't you?![]()
MichelleLovesTo said:Corvette guy would only bug me a little. I'd allow him the dramatic license, but he would have been smart to label it such, instead of admitting to shoddy research.
Writers change geography all the time when writing about a real place or town. There was a vampire novella set in a town around here, and the author chose to move a particular lake closer to the town.
elsol said:I don't even like to give 'good' descriptions.
Disclaimers make me stop reading... even when they are disclaimers in the 'description'...
"The first few chapters don't have sex in it... but I promise it gets hotter later."
You're telling me you KNEW there was a problem with the story being slow at the beginning... not 'sex' slow, but slow.
Trust yourself or do it better.
Sincerely,
ElSol