Aunts and Nephew Story idea

[Sailorvenes]

I have an idea where at a fire an 18 year old male and his aunt start flirting and end up going back to her cottage. She's really slutty and up for just about anything (including anal) and gets off on the fact that he is her nephew. Then when they are finishing they realize that two of his other aunts and his cousin have been watching and the other aunt convinces them to join and there is a sort of reverse-gangbang. I even have body types for the aunts:
Jen (first aunt)- 5'5", 32C, nice big firm ass
Sheri- (other aunt)- 5'7" 34D, big juicy ass
Kara (other aunt) - 5'8" 32B, smaller but perky ass
Maddy (Cousin and Sheri's daughter) - 5'6" 32B, big juicy firm ass
Logan (Nephew) - 6'2", In decent shape, 7.5' cock

 

[Carnevil9]

At a fire? What does that have to do with it?

 

[Sailorvenes]

At a fire? What does that have to do with it?

It was just my little setup idea for them being together. It can be anything though.

 

[BurningMonkey]

Family reunion. The family that plays together, stays together...

 

[Hypoxia]

If aunt-nephew are blood (she's his parent's sister) then it's incest, otherwise it's merely taboo. And blood cousins are barely incest. But when various cousins and aunts get mixed in, there's bound to be some motherfucking etc. Have fun!

 

[atariblue]

At a fire? What does that have to do with it?

I was thinking this same, kinda like yeah you just had a tragic fire destroy your property and now you're boning your relation. Only in Lit.

But I do realize the OP is talking about a bon fire get together.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I just glossed over the fire part to be honest. I'm a Southern Californian. Fires are not for gathering they are for fleeing. And all joking aside I would never call it a 'fire' probably camping or a bonfire but I just glossed over it.

The first part of the story is fine if fairly standard incest set up. Nothing wrong with it. The tail end in my experience is a clusterfuck looking for a place to happen. Here is one of the many places where the written word is simply inferior to visual mediums. Four women and one man fucking together is going to lead to a lot of either repeating of names or the pronoun game getting difficult to follow. Either way it shant be fun. It's great on a movie. Keeping Britney Spears, Xtina, Jessica Simpson and Miley Cyrus straight on screan is simple. Knowing which 'blonde' or who 'she or her' is can get real exhausting real quick and for relatively little pay off in my experience. So I'd probably simply cut that part out.

 

[Hypoxia]

I just glossed over the fire part to be honest. I'm a Southern Californian. Fires are not for gathering they are for fleeing. And all joking aside I would never call it a 'fire' probably camping or a bonfire but I just glossed over it.

I flashed on the image of a medieval witch- or heretic-burning and accompanying public festivities. It's traditional. An incestuous orgy? No problem if their rye bread was infected with ergot fungus. (That's an original source of lysergic acid.)

The first part of the story is fine if fairly standard incest set up. Nothing wrong with it. The tail end in my experience is a clusterfuck looking for a place to happen. Here is one of the many places where the written word is simply inferior to visual mediums. Four women and one man fucking together is going to lead to a lot of either repeating of names or the pronoun game getting difficult to follow. Either way it shant be fun. ... So I'd probably simply cut that part out.

Easy. The two blondes are big & little sisters; the redhead and the black girl are easy to distinguish. He takes turns with two whilst the other two are busy with each other. Then they switch around. Easy.

 

[Sean Renaud]

You are such a goddamn nerd. Ergot fungus. The fuck is the matter with you and werewolves?

You still hit the pronoun game pretty aggressively. There are of course ways to get around it by making them all visually distinct. I'd still probably skip it if you didn't have some kinds of visuals.

 

[lovecraft68]

You are such a goddamn nerd. Ergot fungus. The fuck is the matter with you and werewolves?

You still hit the pronoun game pretty aggressively. There are of course ways to get around it by making them all visually distinct. I'd still probably skip it if you didn't have some kinds of visuals.

I wrote a FFFM scene once.

I won't do it again, serious PIA and for the reasons you gave. Either naming them to death or to many she and her. Even having the three women be distinctively different didn't help all that much, as they are all still "she's"

Also difficult to keep track of whose tongue and fingers were where and when and I was the one writing it, who the hell knows if the reader could follow it?

 

[Hypoxia]

You are such a goddamn nerd.

Thank you.

Ergot fungus. The fuck is the matter with you and werewolves?

I don't do werewolves, or vampires, or zombis, or golems... well, maybe a golem, but it stops there. No more revenants, even with ergotamine.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Thank you.

I don't do werewolves, or vampires, or zombis, or golems... well, maybe a golem, but it stops there. No more revenants, even with ergotamine.

Lies! Ergo rye is one of the leading 'explanations' for lycanthropy in Europe! You know because it's part of your family's ancient recipe. I'm on to you Hypoxia. I'm on to you.

 

[BurningMonkey]

I've done a story with four women and eight men, and the she/he thing was a challenge... I got around it by naming the women and putting labels on the men: Green Shirt, Earring, Thick Dick, Grey Hair, etc. But to constantly be referencing names/labels is, indeed, a PIA.

And there's nothing wrong with lycanthropy that a good pair of Wahl clippers can't fix.

Tentacles, on the other hand--well, that's a little more difficult. And of course there would have to be tentacles involved...

 

[Sean Renaud]

But I like tentacles!

And I didn't mean to say that an orgy is impossible to right. Simply as both writers who've tried it (and i have as well) it's just a pain in the ass. And even if you get right it's still visually confusing for the reader unless you're damn good. It's great visually. I have been toying around with writing an FFFM scene where the FFF is essentially treated as a single entity. Kinda like how the Three Sisters always are in Dracula stories. Whatever personalities they do have melt away when they seduce or go in for sex. To the point that that they often start completing each other's sentences.

 

[BurningMonkey]

You mean like the Morrigu, the triune goddess of the Celts? In her aspect as goddess of fertility?

I sorta like it...I dunno...

 

[Sean Renaud]

Nothing quite so supernatural and I'm still working on the details. The important part being that they are working together towards a common goal and you shouldn't really be thinking of them as separate entities. I think the best examples would kind of be like team sports. You rarely refer to anybody in particular on the defensive line in Football. You refer to the Defensive line because they are one entity for all intents and purposes.

 

[MyRubiLips]

I even have body types for the aunts:
Jen (first aunt)- 5'5", 32C, nice big firm ass
Sheri- (other aunt)- 5'7" 34D, big juicy ass
Kara (other aunt) - 5'8" 32B, smaller but perky ass
Maddy (Cousin and Sheri's daughter) - 5'6" 32B, big juicy firm ass
Logan (Nephew) - 6'2", In decent shape, 7.5' cock

You posted these same names and measurments in Fetish where you were posting their pics... These real people or just fake ones for fantasy?

 

[BurningMonkey]

Skating on thin ice, here...

 

[MyRubiLips]

Skating on thin ice, here...

Yeah... In Fetish the pics were deleted and he took flack from other members; some even asking if he was pimping the women.

 

[BurningMonkey]

Well, there's a fine line between fantasy and reality in the minds of some.

 

[fma20fma]

hi

can we have talented writers write stories about mid aged aunty with not very erect husband,craving sodomy,lure her young college stdnt tenant to fulfil her craving daily,and when confronted by her husband,gag him and teach him with a strapon,and then motivate the boy to do both of them daily.

 

[BurningMonkey]

can we have talented writers write stories about mid aged aunty with not very erect husband,craving sodomy,lure her young college stdnt tenant to fulfil her craving daily,and when confronted by her husband,gag him and teach him with a strapon,and then motivate the boy to do both of them daily.

Uh, that one's by me...anyone else want to pick it up?