Attractive, Organized Girl Falls for Messy, Fat Slob

[PSZer0Dark30]

Hey everyone! So, I had this idea for a story that plays with the idea of attractive girls and unattractive guys. We've all seen a hot girl with a fatter guy before that seems like a jerk. This plays with the idea of the why, while admittedly focusing on the hotness of certain scenes of humiliation and degradation. Anyway, here's the idea:

Shannon has always been really cute but also very reserved, innocent and kind of quiet. She's not drop dead gorgeous but definitely well above average. She has a sexy face (long dark hair, heart-shaped face), dark, almost black eyes, and a wide mouth with a somewhat smug smile. She has nice sized breasts, wide hips and kind of a small ass but with large thighs from running. Along with her looks, all the guys were in to her because she was so reserved and appeared innocent. She didn't drink or smoke. She's very organized and clean and volunteers for stuff at school. She also doesn't date much, until she meets Miles.

Miles is the exact opposite of her. He's over weight and is very messy and loud. They get partnered up for a project and she has to go over to his house. He drives her and his car is covered with trash and his place is also very messy. But he's really confident. While she sits all prim and proper, he pops a beer, eats a slice of pizza and leans back with his legs kicked up. He starts complimenting her and is very direct about it. Even though he's fat and a slob, she gets turned on. She gets turned on because of his fat messiness, because he's so unlike her. His clear inferiority turns her own and how he treats her.

Things can escalate from there. I imagine a scene where while he's sitting there eating, she gets up after he essentially seduces her and takes off his clothes, kneels in front of him and starts blowing him. He just eats his pizza and even after he cums, he just tells her to clean up his place and his kitchen. He of course fucks her and she gets off on how fat and unattractive he is. But even afterward she goes and cleans up after him while he continues to act like a slob. But she loves it. She loves using her cleanliness to clean up after him but loves being treated so nonchalantly even more.

 

[Hypoxia]

I can see a cycle of Beauty+Beast / Babe+Slob stories, each episode exploring the 'why' of a different coupling. Framing device might be a group of babes with slobby BFs and/or a group of slobs with hot GFs, in round-robin sessions of tale-telling. Girls may be shy, or oppressed / abused at home, or manipulative / conniving, or driven by faith or ideology, or genuinely star-struck / obsessive, or mind-controlled, whatever.

For fun: siblings. Ferdie was a fat lazy annoying slothful slob but his sleek younger sister Salma always worshiped him as her protector, mentor, friend. His love life is nil because everyone but Salma sees only his repulsive manifestation. Yes, Salma catches Ferdie with net.pr0n. Yes, she gives herself to him. Can she clean him up? Would she even try?

The gold-digger: Obese flatulent Otto, school janitor, doesn't know he's about to inherit a shitload of something like a chain of chinchilla ranches er I mean tanning salons worth zillions. Model-quality paralegal Luisa sees and hides the inheritance papers and sets out to conquer Otto's heart. She attends his sleazy clubs, laughs with his brain-dead jokes and buds, does a girl-on-girl to amuse him, etc. Will she wear his wedding ring in time?

Aliens / tentacle monsters: Lovely athletic Alicia finds herself paradoxically attracted to Hal, a Hawi'ian trainee sumo wrestler. (Biggest sumos can't wipe their own asses; their trainees get that job. 40% run off in their first year. Hal was a survivor. Keep that in mind.) Alicia can't help herself -- because giant radioactive telepathic squids or playful Martians send mind-control beams at her.

The missionary: Sheila was raised to worship bodily perfection. Her life's sacred mission is to convert fat slobs into magnificent hunks. She loves the blobs only as targets, not as people; once they get 6-pack abs, they're gone and she's onto the next luzer candidate.

The victim: Breathtakingly beautiful Bari's family of fat slobs abused her since childhood. She feels she's only fit for abusive fat slobs. Does Bari's current slob-BF undergo a personal transformation and try to shrink himself and raise both their self-esteems?

 

[prettynun2010]

someone also have the same taste on erotic stories as same as me.

 

[Hypoxia]

someone also have the same taste on erotic stories as same as me.

When I'm no longer distracted by 1) an online course (mandatory), 2) communications research (necessary), and 3) travel prep (upcoming), I may just write that up as a series of episodes in one story ala A Taste of Spirits. Further episode collections may follow. But hold not thy breath. I really *am* distracted and preoccupied now.

 

[PSZer0Dark30]

Glad to see some people interested in this story. Would love to work on it with someone

 

[loquere]

This would only work for me if she was secretly an alien or a serial killer.

 

[Hypoxia]

This would only work for me if she was secretly an alien or a serial killer.

Hmmm, those are different takes. La Aliena targets fat slobby nerdy geeks with tech chops who might undermine her race's gizmo advantages. She slurps their secrets from them before they develop. Variant: She's a tentacle girl, totally irresistible by the usual geeks.

The serial killer may target a similar demographic, or maybe she's only cleansing the gene pool. She's been at it awhile -- or maybe that was her mother. She got Herman Kahn some decades ago. Maybe she did Mama Cass too. Rush Limbo and Chris Christie are next. If only she'd clean out my local WalMart...

 

[PSZer0Dark30]

Still hoping someone might be interested in exploring the original idea. Would love to work on it

 

[sirhugs]

This would only work for me if she was secretly an alien or a serial killer.

mmmm...tentacle sex?

 

[Badfather80]

A smart professional woman only dates equally smart, equally professional men, but she's always left unfulfilled and sexually frustrated. Nice meals and pleasant conversation are all well and good, but these gentlemen take their gentleness into the bedroom and it just leaves her unsatisfied.
In desperation, she ditches her regular dating website for something much more down-market, and ends up with a fat slob who cleans toilets for a living. She is appalled by his crude ways, foul language and lack of hygiene, and realises she's made a mistake, but the fat slob already bought her beer and pizza and he's not splashing out that sort of cash without getting something in return. So he basically forces himself on her, fucking her in a back alley over some dirty bins and she has the most amazing sex of her life. She never looks back.

 

[Hypoxia]

A smart professional woman only dates equally smart, equally professional men, but she's always left unfulfilled and sexually frustrated. <snip> So he basically forces himself on her, fucking her in a back alley over some dirty bins and she has the most amazing sex of her life. She never looks back.

That fits quite well into the story cycle I outlined above. He dirty-fucks her into a string of screaming orgasms. Fortunately the back alley is in a warehouse district where screams in the night are not rare. After poking all her orifices and unloading into her, he whips out his cell and calls his equally-ratty cow-orkers at the septic-pumping service. A few disgusting guys appear a few distressing minutes later for hours of wonderfully disturbing fuck-a-thons. No, she never looks back. As she tells her story at their regular gatherings, her slob-fucking sisterhood gasps, and imagines themselves there.

 

[PSZer0Dark30]

Massive thanks to Perileyes, who actually decided to give this idea a shot and make it a reality. Absolutely loved how it turned out! Thanks so much!

https://www.literotica.com/s/beauty-and-the-slob

 

[Black_and_White_Writer]

Hey everyone! So, I had this idea for a story that plays with the idea of attractive girls and unattractive guys. We've all seen a hot girl with a fatter guy before that seems like a jerk. This plays with the idea of the why, while admittedly focusing on the hotness of certain scenes of humiliation and degradation. Anyway, here's the idea:

Shannon has always been really cute but also very reserved, innocent and kind of quiet. She's not drop dead gorgeous but definitely well above average. She has a sexy face (long dark hair, heart-shaped face), dark, almost black eyes, and a wide mouth with a somewhat smug smile. She has nice sized breasts, wide hips and kind of a small ass but with large thighs from running. Along with her looks, all the guys were in to her because she was so reserved and appeared innocent. She didn't drink or smoke. She's very organized and clean and volunteers for stuff at school. She also doesn't date much, until she meets Miles.

Miles is the exact opposite of her. He's over weight and is very messy and loud. They get partnered up for a project and she has to go over to his house. He drives her and his car is covered with trash and his place is also very messy. But he's really confident. While she sits all prim and proper, he pops a beer, eats a slice of pizza and leans back with his legs kicked up. He starts complimenting her and is very direct about it. Even though he's fat and a slob, she gets turned on. She gets turned on because of his fat messiness, because he's so unlike her. His clear inferiority turns her own and how he treats her.

Things can escalate from there. I imagine a scene where while he's sitting there eating, she gets up after he essentially seduces her and takes off his clothes, kneels in front of him and starts blowing him. He just eats his pizza and even after he cums, he just tells her to clean up his place and his kitchen. He of course fucks her and she gets off on how fat and unattractive he is. But even afterward she goes and cleans up after him while he continues to act like a slob. But she loves it. She loves using her cleanliness to clean up after him but loves being treated so nonchalantly even more.

My husband is 20+ years my senior. He loves wearing very nice clothes and is very dapper.

But after a very hot sunny day out gardening or washing the car I do love him taking me. Feeling his fat, clammy, hairy, flabby and undefined mass pushing up against my smooth, slim frame gets me so aroused.

I love that being added into stories too.