Attention Carson

[TheEarl]

You know that m/m story you said you'd bombard my PM box with mails for if I didn't submit it to Lit?

It's up.

The Earl

 

[carsonshepherd]

Damn you. I need to leave for work five minutes ago. Will catch it this evening....

 

[logophile]

And I'll be on it the minute I get home from taking the kids to school.

 

[rikaaim]

I read it Earl. It's very good, but these stories seldom stir me. I did learn quite a bit a flavor though, which I'll be sure to spice up Carson with. I didn't vote yet, not sure exactly what my thoughts are, but I'll do it later when more solid opinions have formed. It's great writing, as always from you, but I'm just not sure about the story. I would have liked to seen more. I think everyone does. I would have voraciously devoured a full scene and I hope you get enough encouragement to do one.

 

[TheEarl]

Thank you Rika. Always appreciate a good bit of feedback. I will admit that this is not a new story; it's something I wrote a couple of months ago to set Svenska going D). Hence the vignetteness of it, which is something very new for me. Borrowed quite a bit from my experience of real-time story-writing over instant messenger, giving it something of a 'direct' feel as though it happening right here and now. Interesting experiment I think and I do think I will have to explore the genre further with a full story at some point.

The Earl

 

[tolyk]

This is too funny Good writing though Earl

 

[TheEarl]

This is too funny Good writing though Earl

Names were changed to protect the guilty

The Earl

 

[tolyk]

Names were changed to protect the guilty

The Earl

Heh heh.. well, I left you a PC anyways

 

[TheEarl]

I saw. And I'll think about it.

Depends how nice you are to me .

The Earl

 

[tolyk]

I saw. And I'll think about it.

Depends how nice you are to me .

The Earl

That made me want to say all kinds of odd things, stop doin that to me Earl, its disturbing

 

[Guest]

You tarts.

 

[TheEarl]

That made me want to say all kinds of odd things, stop doin that to me Earl, its disturbing

Stop? Oh, but you don't mean that. And you make such pretty little noises when I do.

<whimper>

Where is Svenska when you need to wind her up?

The Earl

 

[tolyk]

You tarts.

Righto, now you've gone and done it.. You twat


and as for Svenkska, I haven't a clue, I've not seen her yet today.

 

[Guest]

Righto, now you've gone and done it.. You twat

Oh yeah? You and whose army?

I have the Top Twat on my side.

 

[tolyk]

Oh yeah? You and whose army?

I have the Top Twat on my side.

I don't need an army, I've got a good piece of artillery that I know how to use..


I couldn't even _type_ that with a straight face.. god I'm lame.. heh

 

[Guest]

I don't need an army, I've got a good piece of artillery that I know how to use..


I couldn't even _type_ that with a straight face.. god I'm lame.. heh

PMSL!!!!

Is that a loaded shotgun in your pocket, or are you pleased to see me?

 

[tolyk]

PMSL!!!!

Is that a loaded shotgun in your pocket, or are you pleased to see me?

Naw, its a 6 shooter hand gun, but thanks for noticing.

 

[carsonshepherd]

Stop? Oh, but you don't mean that. And you make such pretty little noises when I do.

<whimper>

Where is Svenska when you need to wind her up?

The Earl

Holy hell! I missed this. Why won;t somebody pay me to sit around and write porn all day?

 

[minsue]

Holy hell! I missed this. Why won;t somebody pay me to sit around and write porn all day?

Coz I'm broke.

 

[yui]

Coz I'm broke.

Maybe if we pulled our resources, min, we could keep him in beer. Think he would go for it?

 

[carsonshepherd]

Maybe if we pulled our resources, min, we could keep him in beer.

Don't count on it. You don't know how much I drink

 

[Vermillion]

Tit for Tat

You've inspired me....I think I'm going to post a little action of my own. I had held it because it was "just action". But from your piece I can see sometimes that stands on its own.

Thanks,
V

 

[carsonshepherd]

Re: Tit for Tat

You've inspired me....I think I'm going to post a little action of my own. I had held it because it was "just action". But from your piece I can see sometimes that stands on its own.

Thanks,
V

It does. Believe it.