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Dingus Guy

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I was challenged to write an erotic story about a midget from my girlfriend. She thought it was more of an oxymoron to link eroticism and midgets, but I was up for the challenge. I got some decent feedback from the story thus far, so I guess I succeeded in some small way. (No pun intended) ;)

Have anyone of you challenged yourself to write something more as a mission than to write for the sake of writing? Like if I said I would like you all to write an interracial lesbian scene with 2 deaf nuns. You might think of it as a mission to succeed, but you wouldn't be writing it to turn-on yourself unless you digged that scenerio. It is a bit of a stretch as an example, but have you written a story for a goal such as this? What is the weirdest thing you ever wrote and would you do it again?

I am thinking of a new challenge since I had so much fun trying to do this one, and the feedback has been inspiring to say the least.

Marty the Midget's Erotic Christmas
 
DG

The Alien Incest story was written as a direct response to the Incest thread that was 'hot' a couple of months back.

I challenged myself to write and incest story, found I just could not visualize it between people because it always kept sounding like Male / Female just with Brother and Sister for names. So I ended up with Aliens and concocted a scenario that resulted in incest, or the species failed.

It was an interesting exercise. There is a lot of merit in challenging yourself to write along a particular path, it forces you in new directions. If you want to run this challenge here, it is similar to the photo challenge and there has been a good response to that, why not set a subject AND restrict the word count to say 750 words, that should be just enough to allow room for development. Also can I suggest you include other elements, for example, a bunch of flowers, or a book, include the time of day and the weather.

This may sound a bit daunting but it adds elements to build a story around rather than just two deaf nun's getting it off.

If you don't think it can be done, see Laurens challenge to Perky on the poetry thread, a really daunting task, supremely executed in less than 24 hours.

Will's (Alway's up for a challenge)
 
The first story I published here, was to meet a challenge.

Could I write a story only using dialogue, no speaker tags, just the actual words spoken?

Yes, I could :)

Could I make it an exciting, steamy, erotic story?

No, I couldn't :(
 
I do not have many stories yet. But my story for the contest was exactly that. A challenge if I could write a sexy story about the Dutch version of Santa Claus.

The man is holy and totally associated with little children, therefore to me not in the least connected with sex.

Well, I think I succeeded. And that was real fun to do. So, if you want to throw out a challenge, please do.

:D
 
Quasimodem said:
The first story I published here, was to meet a challenge.

Could I write a story only using dialogue, no speaker tags, just the actual words spoken?

Yes, I could :)

Could I make it an exciting, steamy, erotic story?

No, I couldn't :(

Funny you should mention that Quas. I Included a whole scene in the second part of "Panties" which I thought I managed to convey in words only, quite a hot little piece.

I cheated a bit and made it only a scene where the protagonist is remembering the office party.

Read it and weep. (at how frustrating words only are to read).

Gauche

P.S Seems to be a few exercises about lately Dingus, the more the merrier I say. Do it.
 
Challenge

I wasn't offering a challenge out to anybody, but some of you seem eager to take one on, so I offer this idea:

Write a story about 2 people who are private/instant messaging each other online. So this will primarily be a conversation. It must include the following items somewhere within the chat:
1- Mention of blackmail
2- "honey" as in the condiment
3- liquid latex
4- deja vu
5- fishing

Can not contain:
The words "Cock" and/or "Pussy"

We can set a minimum word limit of 1000, and a time limit of 1 week. By next Tuesday.

Anyone up for this?


Marty the Midget's Erotic Christmas
 
Jeez Dingus,

You play hardball don't you? Or is that hard balls? Can I use that word?

I'll see what I can come up with.

:catroar:
 
I like a challenge. Sometimes I rise to it; sometimes
I don't. My latest, except for some flash things, was a
long time in coming to fruition. A couple of years ago
somebody posted in ASSD a comment that someone else's
description of a story sounded better than the usual
ASS "story of incestuous bestiality." A couple of us
took up the challenge of writing a story of incestuous
bestiality. I let mine lie fallow for a long time, and
then finished it; it's "Bottle" on my ASSTR website.
I've written a couple of stories using nothing but
dialogue; that doesn't turn out great stories of themselves,
but it helps you learn to write dialogue.
 
gauchecritic said:
Read it and weep. (at how frustrating words only are to read).

Gauchelately

They were not. At least I didn't find them that bad.

I haven't done anything wildly experimental yet but I try to write my stories in a way which challenges something all the time. One I tried as a pure description and no dialogue. (I cheated and added one line of dialogue :( )
 
Here is a first shot, story just flowed out of your 'key words'

Velvet Black

No, you cannot do that; it simply will not work that way. If you try to take short cuts, you won’t get a stable mould. We have tried the direct application in the past. Even with the new liquid latex compounds, you still have to work from a mould.

Forget what the manufacturers say. The product is good, but it is not the solution the company claims; particularly for the type of work that we do. Fine for stable objects but people are different. Stick to the tried and tested, plaster mould first and we latex off that.

How is she by the way?
Everything the photographs suggested?
Wish I was there, we need to get this right; people are begging us for this item. I know you can do it just stick to the old methods.

It is a buggar being in Aus, time zones screw everything up. Let me know how it goes tomorrow.

Miss you, Love and Kisses.




Thank you for your mail Darling, I miss you too. I am sitting here reading your mail over breakfast. I will do just as you suggest.

She is absolutely beautiful by the way, I knew she would be, it’s beautifully detailed, of course you knew that from the photographs, but when you see it close up, it really is the most beautiful one we have used, explicit and yet delicate. We won’t have any problems with the clit, apparently she has done this before, she says the heat of the plaster setting keeps her clit engorged.

Whoops, now I’ve dripped honey on my cunny, wouldn’t you like to be here, to lick that off for me. It is ages since we did that maybe if you don’t get back here soon, I will get her to do it for me. Don’t worry, I will set the video, we might even be able to make a special out of it. LOL.

We will do a first mould today; I’ve booked her for tomorrow as well just in case of problems. Maybe she can stay with me overnight.

How is the sales promotion going?
Hitting the targets?

Gosh, I’d forgotten just how nice honey and cum tastes.

Thinking stickily of you, Kisses.





Just what I need you blackmailing me with a bit of black pussy. LOL. I have enough to do without you acting the slut; and working yourself off while your sending me e-mails. And yes, I do remember honeyed cunny, one of life’s distinctly decadent pleasures.

Seriously, if you want to set that up with her, have a chat, see if she’s up for it and get Bob to sort a script, could be fun for all of us, it will definitely make money, you haven’t lost a any sexual screen energy and the pair of you on screen would look great together. We could call it something like Miss Honeypot Cleans Up.

How did the cast turn out?
Everything we wanted?
Was she a good girl, didn’t wet the cast did she?
Let me know DETAILS.

Sales have gone well, about 15% over projections, I’ve given the agents feeders on the new product range, Velvet Black is going to go down really well so you make sure you get it right.

You will never guess what I’m doing today, our lead distributor has organised a day’s game fishing off the Gold Coast. I think it’s just an excuse to get out on the sea with a load of topless girls myself, can’t see there will be much fishing done, well maybe a bit of fly fishing. LOL There was one girl there yesterday that would get any guys fly twitching, I’ll check her out, if she is any good, maybe we could use her.



Just got your other e-mail.
What are you doing up so late?
Christ, that’s uncanny “Miss Honeypot Cums Clean” LOL, I like it, don’t tell me you two are practicing.

DETAILS - GIVE ME DETAILS

Love to ‘both’ of you, Sticky Kisses.





Oh, Darling, talk about déjà vu! It’s scary how we think of the same things at the same time.

DETAILS – Ehmm… I’m not sure how much I should tell you since you have been off playing with your fly’s. Fishing trip, honestly the things you men think of just to get a bit of bonking.

Vanessa is gorgeous, in every way. She is sexy, flirtatious, and intelligent and knows how to please a woman, as only a woman can know. She was wonderful. I know how much you want details so here goes. We set the video in the sitting room, near the fireplace, I turned up the gas so we got lots of nice fire shadows off our bodies, we watched it over breakfast, she looks incredible, that luminescent dark skin glowing and flashing in the firelight.

She wore a black Basque; it was as if she knew, very sexy silk and lace, I wore white silk panties. She took the honey into her mouth, warming it, and drizzled it from her mouth down across my breasts, stomach, and panties. She had to take several mouthfuls; we can edit those out. Anyway, she dripped honey all over me holding opened my panties and filling them with honey then slowly, ever so slowly she worked down from my breasts, her puss squishing the honey into me as she licked me clean.

By the time she took off my panties I was a mess, honey and cum. She is an expert, knew just what I wanted, turned on the pressure when I needed it, fucked me with her fingers until I screamed, holding onto my hips, lips glued to my clit as I came and came.

It was pretty exhausting night. She might agree to a threesome if you’re interested.

Now I bet that got your attention.

Hurry home, or might have to ask her to stay.

Love and Kisses.

PS. The vaginal cast was perfect, Velvet Black is on the road.



Will's (1000 words)
 
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Very Sweet Will

When I said Tuesday, I didn't mean Tuesday, Tuesday. I meant next Tuesday. Well, I won't be as fast, but I did type out a little. Might submit it when I am finished if it is any good. Enjoyed the honey drippings, keep up the good work.

Marty the Midget's Erotic Christmas
 
Sorry to be that annoying person who seems like she's missing the point, but as midgets are human beings, I don't see why they can't be erotic beings as well.
 
You are exactly right Nikki...

and I mean no disrespect to them in anyway. They might be to the average person more of a fetish than the usual sex partner. I have seen a midget porn video and I can truthfully say I am in no way, shape or form attracted to midget erotica. Not to say it is unacceptable. I wrote the story because I wanted to make a romantic tale with an unusual character in it. I think I pulled it off. I am not sure how many stories are in Literotica that have midget sex in it, but I bet you can count it with both your hands.

Marty the Midget's Erotic Christmas
 
Dingus

I did that last night whilst waiting for someone to get back to me. I remain at my most creative between 11.00pm and 3.00am, partly from old work habits and I guess the world just shuts itself out after a certain hour, no distractions.

Be interested to see what you come up with, particularly after reading your Christmas story, I thought you tackled the task you set for yourself very well.

Will's
 
Hai guys,

I think I managed "something".

About the word count: is that at least 1000 or no more than 1000?

If it's the latter I have to chop off a few things here and there. :eek:

;)
 
Black Tulip said:
Hai guys,

About the word count: is that at least 1000 or no more than 1000?

If it's the latter I have to chop off a few things here and there. :eek:

;)

Ooh, that sounds painfull.

I stopped at 1000, if that's any help, we need the man, DG. Probably too busy spending his winnings :D

Will's
 
1000 or more

I am somewhere around that mark now, but I haven't had time to finish it yet. Too busy between work and shopping. ;)

Thank you Wills for your kind words. You alerted me to the fact that I was one of the top winners, so much appreciated. Both you and Black Tulip gave me a helpful boost to my winning, so a special thank you to the both of you.

I will finish the story by Tuesday, see you all then. Now time to get ready for Football.
 
Ok here goes.

Total wordcount is 1000. Grade Level below 1. Does that mean even a moron can understand it?

:D

Hi, nice to catch you online.

Hello darling. How are you doing?
Not working at the moment?

Yes I am, this is boss time. I have to watch out.

Can you explain that, please?

I have a funny job today; I have to wait right now.

Oh? Why?

Well we are making lifelike objects, remember? Using plaster casts and stuff.
Objects for the big exhibition in four weeks time.


Yea, I know that. Go on.

There’s this guy in the workshop right now.
He heard about us.
And he wants a cast of his genitals!
But here’s the really weird part. He brought his own liquid latex.
He’s sitting at the workbench right now, with his dick coated in the stuff,
waiting for it to cool down. [giggle]


Did you put it on? What is it like? Is he stiff?

[giggling again] Yes I did. It’s huge. It felt great painting it.
Sticking out like a tree trunk at the moment. I would really like to,
you know.


Are you turned on? You better watch out.
Suppose your boss finds out your chatting?

WTF
It’s not as if he could blackmail me.
I’ve seen him doing it lots of times.
He goes to kinky sites too. Japanese stuff I think.

He does? And he lets you see it?
Are you sure he does not fancy you?

Yea, don’t think so. He never said anything.
This customer does. His looks are like little flames.

Looks? How? Up your skirt? Down your shirt?

Up my skirt. Shut up. You make me horny.
That guy is really looking me up.

You’re not wearing panties?

[squirming] You know I don’t.

Can he see you? Where’s the boss?
Hitch your skirt up a bit.

Yes, he can. My boss is in the shop, in front.
Don’t know what he’s doing.
BRB

Checked on my boss. My skirt is up a bit.
This guy has a nice view. His eyes are popping.
[giggling]
Are you stroking?


[groaning] You know I am, baby.
Are you?
Let your fingers trail your legs.

OMG
Are you serious?
Do you want me to do it?

Baby, you know I do.
Just tell me all about it.

Remember, you said it.
LOL AFK


***

Sweetheart? I’m back.

Tell me all. Don’t make me beg for details.

This is so horny.
Never mind we did this a thousand times before.

Stop stalling. Start talking.
I need my fix. [grin]

OK.
The guy got an eyeful first.
I let him see right up my skirt.
The latex nearly turned liquid again.
[grinning]
I started stroking my legs.

How far up? All the way?

No, I stopped just before hitting home.
Then I turned to get stuff from the bottom drawer.
I thought he would get a stroke.
His head turned all purple.
Maybe both heads!
LOL

I had to check the latex.
Stroking him the entire length.
It was dry, but nearly cracking.
[licking my lips]

I peeled it off, very slowly.
Then I cleaned him with warm water.
He appreciated that. [grinning]
By then his hands were under my skirt.
BRB

Sorry, customers in the shop.

Are you alone right now?
Where is your boss?

I am alone. Stop fishing for details.
I’ll get there.
Now, I lost my way.


He had his hands under your skirt.

Oh yes.
That was very nice.
He had big, warm hands.
They were the right size to cup my buns.
He massaged them very thorough.


Did he touch your lips?

Which ones?
LOL

Stop teasing me. I can come over you know.

OMG, would you do that for me?
Sorry.
Yes he did, all of them.
He was a lousy kisser.
You are a lot better.
But his fingers were heaven.
I had him in my mouth
as he was stroking me.
I was standing bent over him.
You never guess what happened.

FFS, go on!

[grinning]
My boss came in.

WTF
Did he join in? The little bastard.

No. ROFLMAO
He wanted to watch.
It was weird though,
kind of deja-vu feeling actually.
The customer was fingering me.
Me giving the customer a blow job.
The boss watching us and jerking himself off.

OMFG
I just squirted across the monitor.
LOL

Save some for me, will you?
I had a great morning.
But not nearly enough to last the day.

So, what happened next?

Well, the latex cast was all right.
LOL
I swallowed the customer and I came as well.
The boss did too.
After the customer left the boss had a great idea.

Feeling you up him self, huh?
I knew it. Who would not want to.

Will you stop distracting me?
I’ll never finish this way.

Finish? What do you mean?
Are you pleasing yourself again?
WTF
I’m coming over.

No, not today.
Just shut up.
I’ll tell you all about it.
That liquid latex did a great job.
The cast turned out very beautiful.
The boss figured to do a whole series.
You know, sexual objects.
All done with a coating of latex.
And guess what?
Who will be the model?

What do you mean?
You will be?
All your beautiful parts in latex?
On show during the exhibition?
OMG
I love it!

I knew you would.
That’s why the boss is away.
He’s buying supplies.
He wants to do my breasts.
And of course my vagina.
He also wants to make one of my nipples.
And he says he will try to make one of my clit.
The thought of that warm latex all over me, hmmm.
OMG
I’m getting all turned on again.

Maybe I’ll come over after all?
Sounds like you need it girl.
[grinning]

Just save it. I can manage fine.
You know I can.
LOL

BRB

Sorry, customers again.
I think the boss will be back soon.
I'll better sign off.

BTW
Have you done the shopping yet?

Not yet. Why?

Bring back some honey.
That warm latex got me thinking.
[wink]
BFN

Kiss, kiss.
BFN

Hope you guys like it. Took a hell of a time putting in all the italics. ;)
 
edited

So, who is the moron?

Posted the damn thing twice.

:D
 
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Hey BT

We should get your guy and my gal together :D
(See Velvet Black - up the thread)

That was fun to read, you obviously enjoyed writing it. ;)

There is a female artist in London who's whole work is casting penises, she has more than 1,000 including mine :D. Until recently, before developers turned them all out, they had Open Studios every tear when Family, Friend & Public visited. No secret life for her, her dicks were on display for all and sundry to admire. Hers was always one of the busiest studio's, can't imagine why. :D

Will's
 
Will's

Yes it was fun, but bloody difficult as well. Not writing anything extra to create atmosphere or whatever. That really was a challenge.

I read your's so maybe that stuck in my mind. Sorry, no plagiarism intended. :D

I remember seeing something on tv once about edible penises. Chocolate and marzipan I think. Shop was in Amsterdam. They looked beautiful.

You know, to good to eat. ;)

Can't remember if they did anything else as well. Probably.
 
Hey BT

You've only got to mention Latex and there really isn't much choice :D

I know there is shop in US that makes Genital shaped cakes male & female, authorities tried to close them down but the good old Feedom of Expression got them through. Understand you have to order a year early for Valentines Day.

Will's
 
Very Well done

I liked your story B. Tulip, well crafted. Gave me a woody. :p I hope my story turns out as well as yours and Wills has.

I am not going to write tonight so I will have to put it all together for tomorrow and Tuesday. Boss called me and I have to be at work at 4am, bummer. I should write a grinch tale about working for the post office.

Anyway, maybe we should rotate the challenges, Wills, you and myself. If you are up for it. Might be our own story group with open Membership.
 
Thanks a lot. I feel very flattered.

I am not sure about a story group or something. What do you have in mind?

Three would be too little I think. But who knows how many people turn in a piece by tomorrow. :D

Curious about your piece Dingus.
 
Ok guys time is up...

I am afraid you won't be seeing my story just yet. Yes, I finished it on time, but it was too long to post here. It was just shy of 3500 words, so I decided to submit it here. The story title is "The Roleplayers", and I will alert this thread when it is posted. I hope you like it.

On another note, if you want to do this again, I will start a new thread to see if we can get a new club, jump started. Let me know, and I will set it up later and call it "THE CHALLENGE CLUB". Has a certain ring to it doesn't it?

I figure the rules would be similar, 1000 words or more in a weeks time, and a different person chooses the challenge on a rotating basis.
 
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