"ATKINS DIET DISASTER" is now appearing at the Story Discussion Circle

[Rumple Foreskin]

Over at the Story Discussion Circle, moderator KillerMuffin is still on sabbatical and temporary, fill-in, substitue, relief-for-the-time-being moderator Pure has left us for a couple weeks. In their absence, Black Tulip and I have been placed in charge. That's right, the POWER is ours!

With the "grown-ups" out of pocket, this is the perfect time for those who've never had the nerve or inclination to critique someone else's story to take the plunge. This week's offering is, "Atkins Diet Disaster," a Lesbian Sex story by rising young Literotica writer, Lying Eyes.

Slide over there and check out his note about the story, then click on the link he posted, read the story, and finally leave a note back at the SDC about what you did or didn't like and why. You can also leave Public Comments and vote if so moved. It's painless and will help both you and LE become better writers.

For those who've never been to the SDC, here's the link to:

ATKINS DIET DISASTER

Rumple Foreskin

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

Just a bump with a reminder that anyone interested in having one of their stories critiqued, whether it's already posted or a work-in-progress, should check out the Story Discussion Circle.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[MLyons]

Bump.

 

[Black Tulip]

We don't bite, only bark ... occasionally.

Do come over and have a look. I know, it scared me too at first, but it really helps you to take a closer look at what you're writing.