DopeyAngel
Literotica Guru
- Joined
- Jun 25, 2001
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Hello all,
I have just written my second story, and would, like most writers appreciate some feedback from you if you have the time.
I am a very new and probably terrible writer, but I am hoping that my literature will increase in 'readability' as I practice and get more experienced in writing. I will be grateful for any feedback - harsh or otherwise!
It is a sequel to my first story 'Alexie All Alone' and is called (very original!) 'Alexie All Alone Again'. However, they are stories in their own right and you do not have to read the first before the second or vice versa.
Here is the link:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=37026
I thank you all for your time and help and let me know if there is anything I can do for you!
DopeyAngel
I have just written my second story, and would, like most writers appreciate some feedback from you if you have the time.
I am a very new and probably terrible writer, but I am hoping that my literature will increase in 'readability' as I practice and get more experienced in writing. I will be grateful for any feedback - harsh or otherwise!
It is a sequel to my first story 'Alexie All Alone' and is called (very original!) 'Alexie All Alone Again'. However, they are stories in their own right and you do not have to read the first before the second or vice versa.
Here is the link:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=37026
I thank you all for your time and help and let me know if there is anything I can do for you!
DopeyAngel
