asking for feedback

[adultramblings]

Howdy! Just like everyone else, I'm looking for some feedback on my stories. I've been writing erotica since I was an early teen (since before I really knew what sex was, actually!). I have 3 stories here at literotica, and I have a forth story coming soon.

I'm looking for feedback for all of my stories. I don't particular care for my story called "Jean", I think it's a little flat and slow. I published it here only because I hadn't written much in a while, and I needed a boast to get me back on track and back writing. My favorite story that is published is called "the Shower," and I've gotten some lovely positive feedback on that story.

I'd like anyone who is willing, to read the story "My Love" and tell me what you think. I honestly don't know what to make of it, and I haven't received much feedback on it or many votes either, for that matter.

Feel free to post a comment here, or by email at adultramblings AT therapids DOT net, thanks so much,

Anastacia

 

[SexyChele]

I'll be looking at the story, "My Love" and give you my opinion. Just in case other people are interested, the link to your stories is:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=48880

The link in your sig line points to your profile, not your stories. Also, some folks have their settings so that they can't view sig lines. It's always helpful to include a link in the body of your message to help folks out.

Hope you get other feedback!