Phantom300
Phucking Phantastic
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- Nov 23, 2018
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I am going a little outside my normally storytelling strengths here, I have written a pretty dialogue heavy story this time. So I think a second set of eyes is much needed.
Right now I am at just over 10k words, so it is not super long at this point.
Looking more for continuity and clarity issues, again because it is so much more dialogue heavy, I want to know that it reads smoothly. Grammar and spelling work is helpful, but I am less worried about that aspect right now.
This one Probably gets submitted as Incest/Taboo, although Exhibitionism is the overarching theme. There is a brother and sister involved. No direct sex, right now the final 'scene' is a mutual masturbation bit.
Any input is helpful, especially on the female voice in the story.
Thanks for considering it.
Right now I am at just over 10k words, so it is not super long at this point.
Looking more for continuity and clarity issues, again because it is so much more dialogue heavy, I want to know that it reads smoothly. Grammar and spelling work is helpful, but I am less worried about that aspect right now.
This one Probably gets submitted as Incest/Taboo, although Exhibitionism is the overarching theme. There is a brother and sister involved. No direct sex, right now the final 'scene' is a mutual masturbation bit.
Any input is helpful, especially on the female voice in the story.
Thanks for considering it.
