(Article) for writers: Endings

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This article has given me much to think about. I know just what the author and those quoted mean (also notes 3 of my fave endings from: The Dead, Tristan und Isolde, and The Searchers). For me, finally writing just the right ending to a story or poem has usually been the most satisfying part. - Perdita

Endings are a catharsis. They give meaning to what comes before, and change us from the way we were.
- Steven Winn, SF Chronicle, January 1, 2005
When I was a junior in high school, our English teacher showed the class a film called "The World, the Flesh and the Devil." Or rather, I should say, he showed us most of it. Fifteen minutes before the credits, Mr. LeFever turned off the projector and told us to get out our binders. The assignment was to write an ending for the film. The story, set in New York City after a devastating nuclear war, turned on three survivors. After the woman (Inger Stevens) chose a black man (Harry Belafonte) over his white rival (Mel Ferrer), presumably to replenish the species, a deadly manhunt through the vacant streets of Manhattan ensued. At the peak of suspense, the screen at Springfield High went blank. If students can riot and still remain in their seats, that's about what happened.

As it turns out, the ending of "World," a 1959 Cold War artifact, is something of a letdown (the three stars wind up strolling off into the Atomic Age sunset together). But none of us knew that at the time. And in that pre- video store era, we weren't about to find out. In an inspired twist to his stunt, Mr. LeFever refused to show us the last 15 minutes of the film, even after our assignments had been handed in. He rewound the last reel and put it back in its canister for return. Whatever else this high school exercise was meant to do, it drove home some important truths about endings that all of us, even children, know intuitively. Endings, by their nature, are exquisitely torturous. We're all psychologically primed to crave resolving climaxes, and simultaneously inclined to doubt, mistrust, reject and even fear them.

Catharsis -- in drama or a therapist's office -- is both. Aristotle called it recognition and reversal. Theater audiences, readers, music lovers and filmgoers feel it in their bones, their flesh, their communal DNA. Endings define and disappoint, gratify and frustrate. They confer meaning and confirm the structure of what's come before -- in a movie, a sonata, a work of fiction. But they also kill off pleasure, snap us out of the dream and clamp down order on experience that we, as citizens of the modern world, believe to be open-ended, ambiguous and unresolved. It's a delicious paradox. Fairy tales, adventure films, mystery stories and Mozart symphonies all gain velocity by pointing us at one ending, toying with our biology of anticipation and racing off toward some new false conclusion and then another and another before finishing themselves off. "We enjoy, it seems, teasing our tensions," writes Barbara Herrnstein Smith in "Poetic Closure: A Study of How Poems End," "deferring the immediate fulfillment of our appetites and expectations."

The box office hit "National Treasure" is a little more than a series of false cadences, one door in the plot opening into another and another until we finally reach the treasure room. We see it all coming and recognize how we're being handled. But we're also hardwired for this stuff, and every Hollywood director knows it. Patently artificial as they may be, fictional endings behave in satisfying ways that events in real life often stubbornly refuse to. Deaths, divorces and assorted other partings happen -- suddenly (or sometimes far too late), messily, incoherently. Even innocently arithmetic endings often remain opaque. The last day of the year comes whether we're ready to make sense of it or not. We bully ourselves into musing retrospection and halfhearted resolutions, inventing a story to fit the end.

A great artistic ending, by contrast, is both startling and inevitable, mysteriously certain. It clarifies even as it complicates, crystallizes and expands. Think of the snow that falls across Dublin in James Joyce's short story "The Dead," or the ravishing last scene of "Der Rosenkavalier." Think of Rosebud in "Citizen Kane" or "Ode to Joy," that exultant crown of Beethoven's Ninth Symphony. "The finale of 'Tristan,' " says Robert Cole, director of Cal Performances, without a pause. "It's the ultimate ending." His explanation touches on the opera's subject matter, on its synthesis of Wagner's score and settles, finally, on the ineffably glorious orchestration of the final chord.

For David Thomson, author of the New Biographical Dictionary of Film, the last image of John Wayne in "The Searchers" comes to mind. The shot of Wayne silhouetted in the doorway, deciding whether he might stay or must move on, telescopes the film's action to a single moment. "Extraordinary," says Thomson, his voice hushed. "When he walks away and that door closes, we know this man is an endless wanderer, doomed to never live indoors."

"The good ending dismisses us with a touch of ceremony and throws a backward light of significance over the story just read," wrote John Updike in his introduction to "The Best American Short Stories 1984." "It makes it, as they say, or unmakes it. A weak beginning is forgettable, but the end of a story bulks in the reader's mind like the giant foot in a foreshortened photograph."
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We all have our well-stocked private libraries of treasured endings, and plenty of exasperating ones as well. Who hasn't felt that total-body shiver as the lights fade on a play's beautifully made last scene or when a piano concerto races toward its triumphant exclamation point? And who hasn't fumed, like a spurned lover, over some book or film that defied our yearnings? I hated the ending: It may be the single thing that gets said more than anything else about works of art.
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Be that as it may, artists have probably always struggled with endings, adding codas, epilogues and postscripts or dodging the matter altogether by setting up sequels. When Shakespeare harshly punishes Malvolio at the end of "Twelfth Night" or divides the couples by means of an offstage death in the last act of "Love's Labour's Lost," he sends a complicating cloud into otherwise sunny skies. Beethoven agonized mightily over his endings, rewriting many of them. He strongly considered replacing the choral "Ode to Joy" with an instrumental last moment of the Ninth Symphony. By leaving it in place, says McGegan, symphonists who followed had a formidable model of endings to match. "It screwed up Brahms terribly. Mahler's solution was to write great big slow movements or great big choral movements."

Endings took on a special cast in the 20th century, when world wars and the specter of nuclear holocaust gave finality a darker shade. Every ending, however distant, held the seeds of ultimate destruction. Beckett spun out an infinite, unresolved slow fade in "Waiting for Godot." Charles Ives composed his "Unanswered Question." Joyce spooled the last line of "Finnegans Wake" to the first, as if to evade the essential anxiety of beginnings and ends. Endings became provisional, fraught and charged with deeper meanings. Frank Kermode, in his 1965 book "The Sense of an Ending," sees the conclusions of "Othello," "Macbeth" and "King Lear" as a kind of obligatory punctuation, "human periods in an eternal world." In her study "Equivocal Endings in Classic American Novels," Joyce Rowe calls the ending of a good story "a mixed blessing." Even as it completes a narrative arc, "an ending, like its real life counterpart, also entails a sense of loss, of emptiness -- a little death, as it were."
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Thomson believes that film endings are inherently wrenching. "One of the reasons I think movies are often reluctant to end," he says, "is that we're so reluctant for them to end. It's not just the story, but the complete sensory immersion of the form that's so compelling and absorbing. Because the audience is encouraged to participate on the level of fantasy rather than on an intellectual level, there's always this sense that the story might linger on. It's no wonder sequels are so prevalent."
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In a lovely poem about failing to record the end of a movie on her VCR, Mona Van Duyn laments:

'I can't bear it! I have to see how it comes out!'
For what is story if not relief from pain
of the inconclusive, from dread of the meaningless?


The poem ends with a wishful vow to follow "past vacancies of darkness" and in doing so, "to find the end of the story."

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perdita said:
This article has given me much to think about. I know just what the author and those quoted mean (also notes 3 of my fave endings from: The Dead, Tristan und Isolde, and The Searchers). For me, finally writing just the right ending to a story or poem has usually been the most satisfying part. - Perdita

A good article, Perdita, and a very good point of iscussion for the AH.

One kind of ending seems to have been ignored in the article and that is the "Cliffhanger Ending" made popular by Saturday Matinee Serials.

Good endings have many purposes and places and each story/chapter needs an ending tailored to the author's purpose.

How many of the authors here have been deluged with requests for a sequel to a good story they never intended to write a sequel to?

How many have struggled with revisiting characters because they wrapped up the original story too tightly to permit a sequel?

How many of us even really think about the endings to our stories -- either to pique the readers' interest in the next story or to preempt requests for a sequel?
 
Endings for porn stories are especially troublesome, because most good fiction is the story of how a character changes and the events that cause that change. Your normal sex story usually neglects that, and so the stories often end with something like “It was a night I’ll never forget”, or the two people end up falling in love.

The fall-in-love ending is probably the most common one in porn. It not only provides a happy ending, but redeems and justifies whatever kind of kinky sex went before it too. It’s okay that he tied her up and whipped her and then had anal sex with her: they fell in love after all, so it all turned out all right.

Despite its shock value, porn is a very conservative form of literature. People don’t like experiments and they don’t like weird or ambiguous endings. In women’s porn especially, I think the readers usually want to see the heroine’s travails redeemed by love at the end. In men’s porn the story pretty much ends with the sex. Those are the ones that end with “It was a night I’ll never forget.”

There’s another kind of ending that I think a lot of writers search for as if it’s a holy grail, and that’s the shock ending. O. Henry specialized in these in straight lit, and you see this in porn too: the mysterious rapist turns out to be her husband in disguise, or the hot babe someone picks up in a bar turns out to be Miss Unpopular at school, newly made over. Shock endings tie things up very neatly and put everything that’s gone before into a new light. It’s a very satisfying feeling when you pull one of these off, but when badly done it just it can be gimmicky and turn the whole piece into a kind of shaggy dog story. I think they’re over-rated.

---dr.M.
 
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Mab., I really appreciate your comments. Except for my humor/satire pieces I worked hard on my endings here. Perhaps the main intent in my erotica is just that, erotica, but I am no less conscious of trying to write well than when I write other fiction, poetry or my one-and-a-half novels. I think my fave ending is from "Drunk on Wednesdays".

I keep getting requests for more "elevator girl" stories but I just can't get back to them, perhaps because I like good endings and I'd have to write too much more to get to one for the e-girl. My 'new waitress' story has a gimmicky ending and it's my least fave piece here.

I personally like ambiguous endings, or subtly msyterious ends. I'm not sure what I'll write next for Lit. but I think I'll keep this essay in mind.

Perdita
 
dr_mabeuse said:
There’s another kind of ending that I think a lot of writers search for as if it’s a holy grail, and that’s the shock ending. O. Henry specialized in these in straight lit, and you see this in porn too: the mysterious rapist turns out to be her husband in disguise, or the hot babe someone picks up in a bar turns out to be Miss Unpopular at school, newly made over. Shock endings tie things up very neatly and put everything that’s gone before into a new light. It’s a very satisfying feeling when you pull one of these off, but when badly done it just it can be gimmicky and turn the whole piece into a kind of shaggy dog story. I think they’re over-rated.

---dr.M.

Totally agree. There's so many times when a story on Lit is trying to set up the world's most cliched twist ending and suddenly the entire story seems to have been wrapped around this one single bit that the author's struggling to crowbar in. Shaggy dog story is the perfect description. Waiting, waiting, waiting... oh. Anticlimax. Better than a premature climax I suppose :)P), but only just.

Excellent article Pear and one that has really made me think. What does make a really good ending for people? Is it one that ties up every single loose end? One which leaves room for the future? Happily ever after, make everyone miserable? Not just talking about Lit stories as well. What makes people think - wow, that was a good ending?

The Earl
 
I recently finished a non-erotic where I was torn and thoughtful about the ending for days. It was a brilliant surprise twist idea that was written well. After loving, laughing and going through so much, and thinking the two main characters would finally get some well deserved happiness, to find that one would have to go on without the other, on the last page, at the last moment, made me mad.

I wanted to e-mail the author, and tell him he made me mad. Then I realized he did his job so well, he tricked me, he intriqued me, he put me into the story and moved me like a pawn. Then he made me trip and fall down at the last minute, endings are the end sometimes ...... not the beginning of the next book, or happily ever after, but the end.
 
Lisa Denton said:
I recently finished a non-erotic where I was torn and thoughtful about the ending for days. It was a brilliant surprise twist idea that was written well. After loving, laughing and going through so much, and thinking the two main characters would finally get some well deserved happiness, to find that one would have to go on without the other, on the last page, at the last moment, made me mad.

I wanted to e-mail the author, and tell him he made me mad. Then I realized he did his job so well, he tricked me, he intriqued me, he put me into the story and moved me like a pawn. Then he made me trip and fall down at the last minute, endings are the end sometimes ...... not the beginning of the next book, or happily ever after, but the end.

I considered doing that at the end of my novel. All the way along I planned to kill off one of the main characters, giving her not an honourable, plot-driven death, but one which was random and sudden and cruel, leaving the other character completely alone, yet stronger somehow. When it came to the crunch however, I just couldn't do it. It would've left the book too hollow, with a feeling of 'Well, what was the point of them struggling then?'

I think that kind of ending runs the risk of making the reader completely deflated and not wanting to ever read the story again. I ended up with a happy-ever-after with all ends tied up, but enjoyed putting the reader through a bit of pain with the threat of death :D.

The Earl
 
TheEarl said:
I think that kind of ending runs the risk of making the reader completely deflated and not wanting to ever read the story again.

The Earl

Having said that, Flowers for Algernon remains one of the best books I've ever read simply for the beautiful conclusion and the fact that it's heartbreakingly sad.

The Earl
 
TheEarl said:
I considered doing that at the end of my novel. All the way along I planned to kill off one of the main characters, giving her not an honourable, plot-driven death, but one which was random and sudden and cruel, leaving the other character completely alone, yet stronger somehow. When it came to the crunch however, I just couldn't do it. It would've left the book too hollow, with a feeling of 'Well, what was the point of them struggling then?'

I think that kind of ending runs the risk of making the reader completely deflated and not wanting to ever read the story again. I ended up with a happy-ever-after with all ends tied up, but enjoyed putting the reader through a bit of pain with the threat of death :D.

The Earl

Thats kinda like where I was going with that other post, for a while I felt I was cheated by what I, the reader, wanted for an ending reather than what the author wanted.

I am editing, and will be for a while, a decent non-erotic. It has a happy but also slightly sad, ending. When I had peoples looking at it I couldn't believe the wildly differing responses. It went from Never, ever, ever, have the dog die to other Lassie, quick, Timmy fell down the well and needs help to stuff more serious You made me cry, then gave me some hope all of the responses was what I wanted to hear, not that I intend to change anything major in the story, or the end. I am editing because I wrote it in frenzied bursts over a couple years.
 
Saturday Serials

I liked the cliff-hanger endings of the Saturday matinee serials.

The hero or heroine is left in an impossible position until next week. Will he/she die? Has the villain succeeded?

The mythical solution to one of these had the hero chained down in a sealed cellar with the tide rising inexorably. The scriptwriter fell ill and no one could work out how the hero was to escape.

When the scriptwriter recovered he walked up to his typewriter and wrote 'With one bound he was free..."

From Sherlock Holmes death at the Reichenbach falls to other fictional deaths, authors should learn that it is not wise to kill off a popular character. The public demand resurrection even if apparently impossible.

Og
 
Re: Saturday Serials

oggbashan said:
I liked the cliff-hanger endings of the Saturday matinee serials.

The hero or heroine is left in an impossible position until next week. Will he/she die? Has the villain succeeded?

The mythical solution to one of these had the hero chained down in a sealed cellar with the tide rising inexorably. The scriptwriter fell ill and no one could work out how the hero was to escape.

When the scriptwriter recovered he walked up to his typewriter and wrote 'With one bound he was free..."

From Sherlock Holmes death at the Reichenbach falls to other fictional deaths, authors should learn that it is not wise to kill off a popular character. The public demand resurrection even if apparently impossible.

Og

I liked the Buffy resurrection idea actually. Planned years in advance to kill off the title character 5 years into a 7 year contract and then bring her back to life in a situation where she wasn't thrilled to be alive.

Also from the same author was the bloody cliff-hanger at the end of every Angel series. That used to drive me absolutely spare and the ending to the last series still does as they won't be making any more :mad:.

The Earl
 
I'm old-fashioned about endings. The recent tendency in high-lit to seemingly just stop writing as opposed to creating an ending has always struck me as an intellectual cop-out.

Perhaps it was an over-reaction to tidy, happy-ever-after endings. But a good ending doesn't have to clean up all the loose ends. However, it should give some sort of closure.

A story has a beginning, middle, and end. The excuses for leaving the reader in mid-air somewhere between the last two elements because: that's real-life, the reader should be involved and free to make their own endings, etc., are just faddish alibis for wrting long vignettes instead of true stories.

Rumple Foreskin :cool:
 
I think Rumple's hit the nail on the head. We shouldn't be thinking about 'endings' just 'closure'. Their (the characters)life goes on but without us, 'the media' who have lost interest in them.

From big-dollar movies to lit stories you see the problem when a 'one-off' story is spun out until even the author is sick and tired. The key point surely is telling a story. I don't care if it is Shakespeare or 'Petticoat Perverts', to keep me reading you have to follow the basic rules of interest in the characters, plot development, reaction between the main protagonists and 'denouement'. That's what the ending is.

We all worry about the first paragraphs, "Another opening to another show." How do we hook them? Quite honestly, if you've told a good story and kept them on the edge of their seat, they'll forgive you the ending.

How many times have you watched a mini-series that's held you gripped until the last two minutes when the complicated plot has been cleared by the equivalent of, "in one bound he was free," Crocodile Dundee, Indiana Jones? Total failures weren't they?

Let's not get above ourselves. We are not writing Hemingway here, we're writing good, well-crafted erotic fiction that satisfies our creative juices and, hopefully, connects with people.

Hey, lecture over and I've put my ruler back in teacher's drawer. Rumple, stay in for extra coaching. I hear you want to be haunted by naked elves.
 
elfin_odalisque said:
... The key point surely is telling a story. ...to keep me reading you have to follow the basic rules of interest in the characters, plot development, reaction between the main protagonists and 'denouement'. That's what the ending is.
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Let's not get above ourselves. We are not writing Hemingway here, we're writing good, well-crafted erotic fiction that satisfies our creative juices and, hopefully, connects with people.
See, this is what I was getting at in Charley's 'intelligently fucking' thread. What is with this "not get above ourselves" attitude. Why shouldn't erotica writers seek more than well-crafted fiction?

I love the prose fiction of Samuel Beckett. He has great stories and characters, but they're not set out like Hemingway's or TV sitcom plots.

Perdita
 
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