SlaveMasterUK
Really Really Experienced
- Joined
- Jan 4, 2003
- Posts
- 339
Hi all,
I very rarely visit this little part of the Lit forums, but hopefully I'll find one or two people here who fancy a read.
For around 8 months last year I was working flat out on a novel I have called The Fallen. It's over 60,000 words, that's 19 Lit pages; as you might expect, reads have been few and far between. Since mid-October I've had 7 votes and no feedback at all, other than an 'E' from Laurel and a really nice comment from the literotican who edited for me.
I won't spoil the plot, but the story is about a female space marine captured by aliens; sounds a little cliche, but hopefully doesn't read that way. It contains lesbianism, teasing, and orgasm control/denial.
So anyway, if you fancy something a bit more committed than your usual Lit stuff, give it a try. It might convince me to write something else later on. I was hoping to start work on something I could push to a publisher next, but lack of interest/feedback seems to have quenched my creative fire.
I promise to respond to any and all feedbacks received and am truly grateful for any honest comments or votes left by those of you who have the time to take on this epic task
thanks for looking,
Ax
SlaveMasterUK
The Fallen
I very rarely visit this little part of the Lit forums, but hopefully I'll find one or two people here who fancy a read.
For around 8 months last year I was working flat out on a novel I have called The Fallen. It's over 60,000 words, that's 19 Lit pages; as you might expect, reads have been few and far between. Since mid-October I've had 7 votes and no feedback at all, other than an 'E' from Laurel and a really nice comment from the literotican who edited for me.
I won't spoil the plot, but the story is about a female space marine captured by aliens; sounds a little cliche, but hopefully doesn't read that way. It contains lesbianism, teasing, and orgasm control/denial.
So anyway, if you fancy something a bit more committed than your usual Lit stuff, give it a try. It might convince me to write something else later on. I was hoping to start work on something I could push to a publisher next, but lack of interest/feedback seems to have quenched my creative fire.
I promise to respond to any and all feedbacks received and am truly grateful for any honest comments or votes left by those of you who have the time to take on this epic task
thanks for looking,
Ax
SlaveMasterUK
The Fallen
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