anyone throw in a few idea's for an embarrassed naked male in front of girls story?

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Hi I am trying to get help on having a story done by someone because I suck at stories but I started to try to do it anyway so here is the basic premise: a guy is forced to swim naked in front of girls.

There are a LOT of elements to the story I wanted to capture featuring taunting body language and motions as well as comments dialogue from the girls as they tease the guy him whilst sitting opposite him, about the dreaded upcoming lesson but I really struggle to find the right ways to put them across. I would REALLY appreciate an experienced writer to give me some idea's on how to execute these ideas on "paper". They do not had to be as I say them but some awesome ways of telling how they would be said or what would be said with each element I added, would be great! I would give a lot more details on story.

Please if any story creators have any time to spare could they help me out? I don't need a whole story just general idea's for parts so I can do it right. Preferably in PM. Message me and we can talk about how to go about parts of this particular story part.
 
A situation comes to mind where that might happen:

A guy has grown up on a rural farm, but LOVES to swim. He's good at it, and it's given him a great body. He grew up with one sister (that he can't stand!), and she has two friends (and he hates those too!) from just about next door. His bigger problem, though, is that neither of his parents want him going off to college. He's got two chances to try out for swim teams at not-so-near colleges, but no real money.

His other big problem is that his father is very strict about "His house, his rules", and the son happened to have a *bad* cramp one day while out with the family to a river, not long back, and Dad was so scared at this that "No more swimming alone." is now a rule. His sister has gone out with him to watch him swim exactly twice since then. The first time, she was so bored that she demanded to bring her friends next time. The second time, sis & friends have demanded that next event he can't wear a swimsuit. He'll have to strip as soon as they're out of sight from the house, or they won't go to the creek with him...

Does that get ya started?
 
ummmmm... no not really lol that is totally on another tangent completely. I like that you have some creative thoughts though you think you could give me a few idea's and pointers/advice if I asked you them in PM? would appreciate it a lot. Its hard to get feedback on this seemingly. Thanks :)
 
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