Hi I am trying to get help on having a story done by someone because I suck at stories but I started to try to do it anyway so here is the basic premise: a guy is forced to swim naked in front of girls.
There are a LOT of elements to the story I wanted to capture featuring taunting body language and motions as well as comments dialogue from the girls as they tease the guy him whilst sitting opposite him, about the dreaded upcoming lesson but I really struggle to find the right ways to put them across. I would REALLY appreciate an experienced writer to give me some idea's on how to execute these ideas on "paper". They do not had to be as I say them but some awesome ways of telling how they would be said or what would be said with each element I added, would be great! I would give a lot more details on story.
Please if any story creators have any time to spare could they help me out? I don't need a whole story just general idea's for parts so I can do it right. Preferably in PM. Message me and we can talk about how to go about parts of this particular story part.
There are a LOT of elements to the story I wanted to capture featuring taunting body language and motions as well as comments dialogue from the girls as they tease the guy him whilst sitting opposite him, about the dreaded upcoming lesson but I really struggle to find the right ways to put them across. I would REALLY appreciate an experienced writer to give me some idea's on how to execute these ideas on "paper". They do not had to be as I say them but some awesome ways of telling how they would be said or what would be said with each element I added, would be great! I would give a lot more details on story.
Please if any story creators have any time to spare could they help me out? I don't need a whole story just general idea's for parts so I can do it right. Preferably in PM. Message me and we can talk about how to go about parts of this particular story part.