Anyone know of more stores like mine?

[gorgeousgypsygirl]

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=96403


I'm looking for more stories like the one (see link above) I just posted the other day, simply titled 20-Year Reunion Ch. 01... I have a 'thing' for reunion stories and I'll read them any chance I get. Also, I have another story out there if you want to read it: called Elementary, My Dear ( http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=96395 ), and I hope to be getting more out here soon.

I enjoy getting feedback, so let me know what you think! Thanks a bundle!

gorgeousgypsygirl

 

[requerdos]

a new venue perhaps?

Gypsygirl...

I think Beth is a good girl: highschool sweetheart, no dates after David's death, working mom, etc...So it's hard to see her doing these things (very hot things) in the cab of a pick up truck in the parking lot behind the industrial plant. She's a much more worthwile character than this (based on her longstanding devotion to her husband) and deserves a better venue for the rendezvous.

Doyle, likewise is a good guy: never removed his wedding ring after divorce, sensitive to David's death, etc...But he should have been sensitive enough to take her somewhere else. In other words, Beth's image of Doyle would not have allowed him to take her like a "lot lizzard", would it?

At least not without some compelling reason....

Perhaps Beth, while longing for a man's touch, has been dreaming about the chance to see Doyle at the reunion. She could recount the fantsies she had about him while a teenager (in that innocent, puppy-eyed love sort of tone). It will give her something to dream about on the way to the reunion. Then...SURPRISE...he's there and completely unattached!

Doyle could confess, in detail, the feelings he has always had in his heart for her, but was afraid to admit because of the fear of her rejection. Show her satisfaction and his relief when she makes it clear that she will not reject him this time.

Develop their dialogue into a steamy fantasy that gets them both ready to leave the reunion...having both found what they came looking for. That way, Doyle's thoughts move him (and the thing in his pants) rather than the quick flash of panties.

Then the scenario in the parking lot becomes believable because the only other choice was to stop traffic on the highway! In this way the parking lot venue becomes an added excitement for the element of wrecklesness....A definite indication of the level of passion between them .


requerdos

 

[gorgeousgypsygirl]

Thanks for the feedback!

Hey, thanks for letting me know what you honestly think... I truly appreciate it! Because this is an ongoing series, I hope I can take some of your suggestions into consideration in the future chapters. Sincerely,

Gorgeousgypsygirl