Anyone got time for a quick edit?

[CrimsonMaiden]

I just finished my holiday story (which I had no intention of writing, but I got this idea and couldn't shake it, so I had to write it.) Anyone got time to give it a look over? I'm not really worried about spelling or grammar, just content.

And I'm also not entirely sure which category to put it in. It could probably go in anal, crossdressing, or toys. Any help would be greatly appreciated, and I would be glad to return the favor at any time.

 

[hugo_sam]

I just finished my holiday story (which I had no intention of writing, but I got this idea and couldn't shake it, so I had to write it.) Anyone got time to give it a look over? I'm not really worried about spelling or grammar, just content.

And I'm also not entirely sure which category to put it in. It could probably go in anal, crossdressing, or toys. Any help would be greatly appreciated, and I would be glad to return the favor at any time.

If you can allow for lack of abilities, I would be glad to if you would like Crim.
Email it ifyou would. You already have my address. gmail please.
*GBH* If not I understand as well.

 

[Tom Collins]

If you'd be interested in more than one opinion, you could count me in too. My address is on my profile. Paste, or .doc would be just fine, Ma'am.

 

[CrimsonMaiden]

If you can allow for lack of abilities, I would be glad to if you would like Crim.
Email it ifyou would. You already have my address. gmail please.
*GBH* If not I understand as well.

Thanks, Hugo! It's on its way.

 

[CrimsonMaiden]

If you'd be interested in more than one opinion, you could count me in too. My address is on my profile. Paste, or .doc would be just fine, Ma'am.

Thanks! Another pair of eyes is always welcome.

 

[hugo_sam]

Thanks, Hugo! It's on its way.

Cool Sweetie. Back soonest. Editing is much easier and a good excuse to not be writing. LOL
*GBH*

 

[gauchecritic]

Editing is much easier

You must be doing at least one of them wrong!

 

[hugo_sam]

ON it's way back Crim.


>>GC
I don't doubt it. If you have ever tried to muddle through one of my messes then that would answer that question fast. Plus when you start with really good writers then a quick look through edit is easy. I don't envy when someone tries to edit one of my ramblings.

 

[gauchecritic]

>>GC
I don't doubt it. If you have ever tried to muddle through one of my messes then that would answer that question fast. Plus when you start with really good writers then a quick look through edit is easy. I don't envy when someone tries to edit one of my ramblings.

I just really meant the way I do it. I'd find something I didn't like with Steinbeck if he asked me to look.

 

[hugo_sam]

I just really meant the way I do it. I'd find something I didn't like with Steinbeck if he asked me to look.

So far I have only actually looked at some of the better writers around so not much to find. Yes I sometimes catch a flow thing, or an occasional spelling/homonym thing. But usually the quility of writing precludes any major finds. Of course, I make no claims at my editing skills either, as you will note in my first post.