JuanSeiszFitzHall
yet another
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This is a story that might get torched once it’s posted, no matter how many advance warnings I provide about the sex. I think the best category would be Mature, but there are aspects of interracial, anal, and group (male-female-male), with solo female masturbation, and a history of bisexuality with one of the male characters. Also, nobody in the story is conventionally attractive, and everybody has flaws. Lots of light-hearted fun, right?
With all that this has going against it, I’d still post it if I think that the story is genuinely good. I’d like your opinions on whether the story is good now, or how I might make it good, or if it’s hopelessly bad. I haven’t done much with PMs on Lit, so I’m not sure how I’d get the draft to you (if a Word file can be attached, for instance). The draft is 8517 words, and I’d also send a set of questions for you to answer. The edit is fairly rough (first draft, after all), but I don’t think the current wording creates misunderstandings.
I’ll be open to expressions of interest for the next three days (to Feb. 13). Thanks.
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=5116173&page=submissions
With all that this has going against it, I’d still post it if I think that the story is genuinely good. I’d like your opinions on whether the story is good now, or how I might make it good, or if it’s hopelessly bad. I haven’t done much with PMs on Lit, so I’m not sure how I’d get the draft to you (if a Word file can be attached, for instance). The draft is 8517 words, and I’d also send a set of questions for you to answer. The edit is fairly rough (first draft, after all), but I don’t think the current wording creates misunderstandings.
I’ll be open to expressions of interest for the next three days (to Feb. 13). Thanks.
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=5116173&page=submissions
