auldmantime
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- Aug 2, 2005
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I'm looking for a very sensual and literate lady (or maybe two) to help me hone my erotic story writing.
I try to write erotic fiction that appeals to both men and women. These are not just suck and fuck stories. Hopefully they are the type of stories that couples can share. The type of story that unexpectedly comes to mind during a business meeting when the new female employee holds your eye for just a second too long, or when you see the passenger in the SUV beside you smiling at your exposed thighs where your skirt has ridden up.
I know that my stories appeal to at least some types of men because I get very encouraging feedback from them. But I suspect that the stories are not whetting the appetites (or wetting anything else for that matter!) of the female audience because I hear nothing back from them - even anonymously.
So what I am looking for is someone who, based on her own experiences and sensuality, can describe to me why particular situations and descriptions of situations are or are not erotic to her. My stories have no bestiality, no pain or torture, no illegal or underage situations, and no non-consensual sex in them. Some stories do describe sex with multiple partners.
Once I am more comfortable that I am actually having the required effect on my female readers, I will move into other areas. And, naturally, any thoughts on those directions will be most welcome.
I am not looking for story editing talents, just the ability to critique the eroticism of certain story situations and content from a female perspective. So breadth of sensual experience and background is what I am looking for. It is difficult for me to believe that anyone under 40 would have sufficient experience. But, then again, seeing as I am a man looking for help from a female perspective (meaning that I know I don’t know what women think), I could easily be wrong! Oh. Did I mention that a sense of humor would be good? If you are in a relationship where you can share the stories with your partner and report back on the effects they have, that would be even better.
Please note that I am not looking for anything other than an email correspondence so please don’t think otherwise.
If the above has stimulated your interest, you would like to read some erotic stories, and you would feel comfortable discussing them in detail through email, please drop me a line and let me know if there are any types of story you definitely do NOT want to read.
I try to write erotic fiction that appeals to both men and women. These are not just suck and fuck stories. Hopefully they are the type of stories that couples can share. The type of story that unexpectedly comes to mind during a business meeting when the new female employee holds your eye for just a second too long, or when you see the passenger in the SUV beside you smiling at your exposed thighs where your skirt has ridden up.
I know that my stories appeal to at least some types of men because I get very encouraging feedback from them. But I suspect that the stories are not whetting the appetites (or wetting anything else for that matter!) of the female audience because I hear nothing back from them - even anonymously.
So what I am looking for is someone who, based on her own experiences and sensuality, can describe to me why particular situations and descriptions of situations are or are not erotic to her. My stories have no bestiality, no pain or torture, no illegal or underage situations, and no non-consensual sex in them. Some stories do describe sex with multiple partners.
Once I am more comfortable that I am actually having the required effect on my female readers, I will move into other areas. And, naturally, any thoughts on those directions will be most welcome.
I am not looking for story editing talents, just the ability to critique the eroticism of certain story situations and content from a female perspective. So breadth of sensual experience and background is what I am looking for. It is difficult for me to believe that anyone under 40 would have sufficient experience. But, then again, seeing as I am a man looking for help from a female perspective (meaning that I know I don’t know what women think), I could easily be wrong! Oh. Did I mention that a sense of humor would be good? If you are in a relationship where you can share the stories with your partner and report back on the effects they have, that would be even better.
Please note that I am not looking for anything other than an email correspondence so please don’t think otherwise.
If the above has stimulated your interest, you would like to read some erotic stories, and you would feel comfortable discussing them in detail through email, please drop me a line and let me know if there are any types of story you definitely do NOT want to read.
