Any stories like Story of O here ?

[KarlvonBahnhof]

Hi everybody
I like the first part of Story of O, can you recommend me a story like that here on literotica ?

I would like to read a good erotic story set on some erotic castle/island, like the Roissy in Story of O, where pretty girls are being kept as naked erotic slaves, being trained and used by
dominant older men and so. Seem to be no such stories here...

Or the other way around, boys kept as naked slaves for women, like the Femdom island stories.

I dont like, when the story got just one girl+one male, should be more persons in there.

I really dont like, when the submissives really suffer, or are being abused too much. No shit like pissing, bestiality, pedophilia, mutiliation, transgender please.

Cheers

 

[Liberavivas]

Don't know of one, but I am willing to write one. I've been looking for a project.

Anything else you'd really like to see in it? I already have her her tied to a chair, stripped to the waist, being put through a test by a man in black and mask, with a chained male slave in attendance. When she passes the test, she will be sent for training....

 

[KarlvonBahnhof]

Wow, that would be cool, if you try

I actually dont like people in rubber masks and such latex stuff
I dont like piercings, tattoos - if you have a pretty girl, why cover her pretty face or damage her body ?

I want a story set on some island, bdsm resort, ship, castle -
something like that. An exclusive and expensive institution, that keeps hundreds or at least dozens of naked slavegirls to satisfy their male members or contributors.
The story "How Amanda spent her summer vacation" on bdsm library is this type of story, but it was never finished unfortunately.

Girls should be naturally pretty, young, around 18 - 20, naked, willing to serve and please, submissive etc... - but no sluts or prostitutes. Any clothes are forbidden for them. There could be a lot of lesbian love of course

The males should be older, 40ties, 50ties, 60ties - well dressed, experienced, they care well for their girls, they are connossiers, collectors, lovers, protectors, not abusers or rapers. Rather than in rubber, they are dressed in expensive tuxedos.

There might be some element with young males, like unexperienced sons of the members who are being teached by older men how to dominate and how to satisfy a girl.

There shouldnt be any submissive males, I think if you got a dominant male and submissive male in one place, its kinda gay.
There might be sex between more dominant males and one submissive girl, like a gangbang or sandwich. Or one male and more girsl, or a orgy between many men and many girls - but never gay sex.
A man should never touch other man´s weenie.

There might be some older, dominant lesbians - like wives of the members, or teachers or former slavegirls, who help with the training.

The girls should not be really abused or suffer badly. There could be a new, unexperienced girl, who at first doesnt like it, has to be forced a bit, but then she starts to like it.

The girls might be humiliated a bit, but not in a perverse way - as I said in first post, no pissing or shitting, no asslicking, no bestiality and such disgusting stuff.
The girls should be treated with some respect, should be called "young lady", rather than a "slut". I think, when in a story a girl starts to be called "slut" or "whore" or "brat", when the story starts to be really vulgar, it kills the fun of story.

And of course, lots of hot sex
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So that is the type of story, I would like to read - anyone knows of such story ?

Its a pity, that I cant find any. I am trying to write one myself and would like to publish it here on literotica once, but that is a project for long time, especially because english is not my birth language and because its very long, like a book already.

 

[Lizzie_Borden]

Chances are you're not finding anything to suit your tastes because you are being way too specific.

The issue with porn is that it is *never* going to be exactly how you like it, unless you make/write it yourself.

So stop cranking it, and start cranking the keyboard and see what you come up with.

PS: How come two women together isn't "kinda gay"?

 

[KarlvonBahnhof]

Male+male = gay (for me as a straight guy its disgusting, so I dont want to read about it)
on the other side, girls are sexy, so girl+girl = double sexy

 

[Lizzie_Borden]

Male+male = gay (for me as a straight guy its disgusting, so I dont want to read about it)
on the other side, girls are sexy, so girl+girl = double sexy

You do realise that girl+girl=gay also, yes?

 

[ownedsubgal]

You do realise that girl+girl=gay also, yes?

exactly. gay and not in need of, or remotely interested in, his penis.

 

[seela]

Yes. A dominant male and a submissive male in the same bdsm castle island resort is definitely gay.

 

[DVS]

Oh, leave the guy alone. Sure girl+girl=gay, but to a hetero guy, it's not the same as guy+guy=gay.

But, I do agree that the posted list is a bit specific. It would be nearly impossible to find a story like this and very difficult to write one, staying within these guidelines. It has a strange 70s tilt like "The Love Boat" runs aground and is stranded on "Gilligan's Island" and somehow James Bond's Sean Connery gets involved. Aqua Pussy? Well, Sean would pronounce it Aquah Poosee.

Mary Ann and Ginger are the dominant lesbians who teach the naked captives to service any man wearing a tux. 007 would call in reinforcements and obviously, they all wear tuxedos. They never solve anything and they are never rescued, but who cares?

 

[CutieMouse]

You might get more interest/authors willing to write something along these lines in the Story Ideas Forum.

 

[Netzach]

I would like to read a good erotic story set on some erotic castle/island, like the Roissy in Story of O, where pretty girls are being kept as naked erotic slaves, being trained and used by
dominant older men and so. Seem to be no such stories here...

Why am I having an incredibly difficult time believing this?

 

[Stella_Omega]

Why am I having an incredibly difficult time believing this?

Same here. After 'O' and Anne Rice's Sleeping Beauty series (OP will HATE them because there is as much M/M action as there is M/F action) not to mention her "Exit From Eden" story which is probably the very first of those Island BDSM resort stories-- it's been so damn hard to get writers to move away from that fantasy.

 

[Kojote]

But, I do agree that the posted list is a bit specific. It would be nearly impossible to find a story like this and very difficult to write one, staying within these guidelines. It has a strange 70s tilt like "The Love Boat" runs aground and is stranded on "Gilligan's Island" and somehow James Bond's Sean Connery gets involved. Aqua Pussy? Well, Sean would pronounce it Aquah Poosee.

Mary Ann and Ginger are the dominant lesbians who teach the naked captives to service any man wearing a tux. 007 would call in reinforcements and obviously, they all wear tuxedos. They never solve anything and they are never rescued, but who cares?

I think I'd totally love this story.
Any chances you'll write it?

I'd even swallow my aversion for the true 70's masses of pubis hair involved ...

 

[CutieMouse]

Why am I having an incredibly difficult time believing this?

Same here. After 'O' and Anne Rice's Sleeping Beauty series (OP will HATE them because there is as much M/M action as there is M/F action) not to mention her "Exit From Eden" story which is probably the very first of those Island BDSM resort stories-- it's been so damn hard to get writers to move away from that fantasy.

Because the OP doesn't want a regurgitation of O - he wants HIS version of O, where all the slaves are 18, hot, and desperate to be used by 50-60 year old men... but not in a degrading or bad way, in a good way [as defined by the OP].

I'm starting to think I'm getting crankier as I age, because every time I see the "OMG it'll be so HAWT! And the girls in the story are all these REALLY HAWT 18 year olds! And they'll have mad skillz with the sexy and be lesbians too! HAWTNESS!" I find myself yawning - because (no offense to the 18-20 year olds out there) the idea that an 18-20 year old is hotter in bed than a woman who's been sexually evolving for a couple of decades does not compute. Which is probably why I don't read very much erotica... LOL

 

[midwestyankee]

Because the OP doesn't want a regurgitation of O - he wants HIS version of O, where all the slaves are 18, hot, and desperate to be used by 50-60 year old men... but not in a degrading or bad way, in a good way [as defined by the OP].

I'm starting to think I'm getting crankier as I age, because every time I see the "OMG it'll be so HAWT! And the girls in the story are all these REALLY HAWT 18 year olds! And they'll have mad skillz with the sexy and be lesbians too! HAWTNESS!" I find myself yawning - because (no offense to the 18-20 year olds out there) the idea that an 18-20 year old is hotter in bed than a woman who's been sexually evolving for a couple of decades does not compute. Which is probably why I don't read very much erotica... LOL

Well put. Besides, it has been my experience that the supply of nubile 18 to 20 year olds who are champing at the bit to have their bones jumped by 60 year old men is nigh on to nonexistant.

 

[Kojote]

Well put. Besides, it has been my experience that the supply of nubile 18 to 20 year olds who are champing at the bit to have their bones jumped by 60 year old men is nigh on to nonexistant.

What?
I was totally into this 'slowly getting older' thing exactly for that reason.
Can I get my invested years back, plz?!

 

[Netzach]

Because the OP doesn't want a regurgitation of O - he wants HIS version of O, where all the slaves are 18, hot, and desperate to be used by 50-60 year old men... but not in a degrading or bad way, in a good way [as defined by the OP].

I'm starting to think I'm getting crankier as I age, because every time I see the "OMG it'll be so HAWT! And the girls in the story are all these REALLY HAWT 18 year olds! And they'll have mad skillz with the sexy and be lesbians too! HAWTNESS!" I find myself yawning - because (no offense to the 18-20 year olds out there) the idea that an 18-20 year old is hotter in bed than a woman who's been sexually evolving for a couple of decades does not compute. Which is probably why I don't read very much erotica... LOL

It's not the age thing, it's that I can't believe the most overdone, commonly done, rehashed scenario in erotica is somehow missing from Lit.

I've solved the above problem by reading Annie Proulx for characters and anonymous for jollies. Most literary erotica isn't sufficiently either.

 

[Rad'l]

A Sugestion

There is a story on Lit, authored by SavannahMann, that comes close to meeting the requirements. "The Vassal Academy" is a story about a training facility. Unfortunately - SavannahMann has stopped posting chapters - the last chapter posted was in February, 2010. A well plotted story, good characterization, good character development with a cliff hanger at the end of each chapter. It is a shame that it has dried up.

 

[ImOnIt]

"OMG it'll be so HAWT! And the girls in the story are all these REALLY HAWT 18 year olds! And they'll have mad skillz with the sexy and be lesbians too! HAWTNESS!

'And they'll have mad skillz with the sexy'

One day I will use this phrase.