Any Ideas?

[sweet_lusciousdesire]

I'd like to write a story about a butler that is more like a Master. I'd like to see him be a bit sadistic in his approach, almost a life coach, but one that is getting paid to direct the female character in the story. He would tell the rich horny woman exactly what she needed to do everyday and everystep of the way.

Do any ideas come to mind on how he might direct her? What might he make her do?

 

[Ldy_Sea]

I like this idea. She could start off as a spoiled rich girl who inheritied all of daddy's money and starts to run the family business and possessions into the ground. The Butler having served the family for decades is heartbroken and pissed. So he begins by making suggestions to change her behavior and slowly begins to take control of her life. To the point of what she wears, eats, and even who she dates. The Butler and the woman don't have sex, he just controls her life and everything she does. He even finds her a man to marry who will continue the control he started, and is able to run the company once the butler leaves this mortal coil.

 

[MichaelWest]

The idea that formed in my head was that she is genteel in a Retro-modern Victorian world where her Mother has decided she needs a proper education through strict discipline overseen by the Butler, assisted by the Footmen and Maids. I was thinking something rather Steampunk in literary terms, filled with "behind closed doors" kink.

 

[sweet_lusciousdesire]

Those are excellent ideas. My initial idea is that he wraps her in his web of power making her do all sorts of wild and depraved acts with strange men, that he profits from. Your innocent approach is cute though lol

 

[kill666]

logic sense black butler

if black butler with great dick indeed the story can expand longer u can imagine.

when u say the butler coaching the rich wife hm....... sounded interesting. the butler can tell her wear more seductive dress and make good image for her husband.

so most important is the rich wife what kind of dress she wearing????? this would make the story more interesting. from the polite gentle rich wife become nasty hottest wife rich slut.
-tight mini dress
-lingerie
-seductive robe
-latex
-corset

 

[subwannabe]

I also like the idea of a butler blackmailing his rich employer's daughter after finding out something she doesn't want daddy to know.

 

[Himself128]

I magine that she is aritocratic and somewhat young. He has been in the family for years. Maybe the father passed away and he has begun to overstep his bounds, in part because it is in his nature. He starts by giving fatherly advice which gets more and more directive.

The other approach is that he is the head servant and there are a efw other servants but they report to him. Hence he has the opportunitity, no he has the responsibility of providing direction. He starts by having the underling do simple things and that leads to more and more risque things. I will watch for your story.

 

[sassysasha89]

I like MichaelWest and a part of SeaUrchin's idea along with your initial one.

 

[sweet_lusciousdesire]

outstanding ideas

and I'm looking forward to writing it....Excellent ideas...thank you very much...what risique things might she be asked to do?

 

[mythtrav16]

It all depends on what kind of dynamic you're after. If you're into old guy/young woman stories, then a simple, effective storyline would be about a young heiress whose parents both die, and nominate their trusted family butler to be the legal guardian for their spoiled daughter, also giving him control of her trust fun until she's 18. As a foster parent, he disciplines her harshly, primarily just to make her bearable to live with. But the disciplining works remarkably well, making her respectful and obedient. By her 20th birthday, she's become a very sexy young woman, who the butler finds arousing, and uses his dominant relationship with her to have his way with her.

But, if like me, you find a young butler/young woman dynamic much more arousing, then how about this:

You have a young butler hired by a noble family to replace their old, retiring butler. Shortly after he is hired, the family's adult daughter returns from finishing school. Though she is able to effectively mimic the grace and dignity of a royal, she is in fact, an unruly, Paris Hilton-type party girl.

One night, well after midnight, she stumbles in to the manor, completely wasted and very distraught. The young butler was awoken by the noise and goes to assist the woman. He manages to get it out of her that she accidentally ran someone over with her porche a few hundred yards down the road. The butler helps the woman in to her bed, where she promptly passes out. The butler goes out and walks down the road to where her porche is stopped, engine still running, in the middle of the road. In front of its dented fender lies a dead dog - the woman was too drunk to tell the difference. The butler disposes of the dog, drives the car back to the manor and cleans the blood off it.

Somewhere along the line, he thinks about how he can use this to his advantage. The next morning, after the woman wakes up, the butler tells her that he "took care of" the problem, and that she doesn't need to worry about it. He neglects to tell her that it wasn't a human she killed. But the catch is that now he owns her, because he knows where the body is buried (literally!), and with one phone call to the cops she could be looking at 20 years in the slammer. She is to be at his beck and call to service him sexually whenever he desires.

An alternate scenario is one where at first he covers up the crime like a dutiful butler, but then later, he comes to the woman and facetiously tells her that "his conscience is bothering him," fishing for a bribe. The problem is that the woman has no money of her own, and there's no way for her to draw a significant amount from her family fortune without inconvenient questions being asked. As an alternative, she seduces the butler and manages to buy him off with sex. But what she at first assumed would be a quick screw soon becomes an ongoing arrangement. I like this idea because it motivates the woman to be more seductive and eager to please.

Regardless of the storyline, here are some good scenarios that I think would work in a story like this:

* A blowjob with the butler standing, and the woman kneeling. Anything with the noble woman kneeling submissively before her manservant would be hot. Especially if he was grabbing her by the hair and controlling her movements.
* Bending her over something like the lord's ancestral desk, the main dining table, or one of those islands you see in those grand manor kitchens, and taking her aggressively from behind.
* The woman being made to wash the butler in the shower. Possibly using her tits as loofers.
* The family hosts a ball where they intend to set her up with an eligible nobleman bachelor. The pompous suitor spends much of his time flirting with the young woman, acting as if their eventual engagement is all but a sure thing, because it's expected of them. In the middle of the party, the butler demands the woman meets him in a side room, where he immediately screws her. Thus he is content that while the young nobleman thinks the woman is his for the taking, the butler is the one who actually got to screw her that night. (I guess this idea is kind of an upper-class rip off of the "I got her phone number, so how do you like those apples?" scene from Good Will Hunting.)
* The butler manipulates the family so that the woman is betrothed to a young nobleman that he knows through the grapevine is secretly gay and looking for a sham marriage to cover it up. That way, she is given the facade of marriage and, seeing as her husband has no sexual interest in her whatsoever, the butler is free to keep screwing her at his leisure.
* The butler insists on being in the room and watching the woman get dressed for any engagements, which at first disturbs her greatly, but she soon gets used to it. Also, she could do a private fashion parade of lingerie at his insistence, to determine which pieces please him the most.
* Forcing her to model for nude pictures or make a sex tape with him, which only increases his blackmail leverage over her.
* Tension whenever she's at her midpoint between periods. It would be an unforgivable scandal if she fell pregnant out of wedlock, so she is desperate that the butler doesn't come in her pussy during these days. He uses this to assert further dominance over her; He fucks her vaginally, but depending on whether she'd been a "good girl" or not over the past month, he will either blow his load in her mouth, on her face or her tits, or he will come deep in her pussy. Of course, the butler doesn't want to be a father, so he secretly grinds up birth control pills into the tea he serves the woman every day. Even if the woman tries to get birth control pills herself, the butler always finds where she's hiding them (as a good butler always knows everything about their house), and steals them, leaving her to believe she's always fertile.
* A "dignity debt" arrangement between the woman and the butler, in which any instance in which she bosses him around or looks down her nose at him to keep up appearances in public, is later repaid by an extra-attentive, or humiliating (for the woman) sexual performance.
* Watching the way the woman loves to rub her clit when he's screwing her gives the butler a fresh idea about how to assert dominance over her. The next time they screw, he ties her hands behind her back and fingerfucks her until she is desperately begging for him to take care of her excited clit. Alternatively, tying her hands could be a punishment he uses when she displeases him, "If milady does not behave herself, her clit shall go wanting."

Hopefully, you should be able to do something with some of those ideas, at least.

 

[ottohauser1977]

Very good stuff here.

 

[sweet_lusciousdesire]

Very good stuff here.

Yes......outstanding!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[sweet_lusciousdesire]

It all depends on what kind of dynamic you're after. If you're into old guy/young woman stories, then a simple, effective storyline would be about a young heiress whose parents both die, and nominate their trusted family butler to be the legal guardian for their spoiled daughter, also giving him control of her trust fun until she's 18. As a foster parent, he disciplines her harshly, primarily just to make her bearable to live with. But the disciplining works remarkably well, making her respectful and obedient. By her 20th birthday, she's become a very sexy young woman, who the butler finds arousing, and uses his dominant relationship with her to have his way with her.

But, if like me, you find a young butler/young woman dynamic much more arousing, then how about this:

You have a young butler hired by a noble family to replace their old, retiring butler. Shortly after he is hired, the family's adult daughter returns from finishing school. Though she is able to effectively mimic the grace and dignity of a royal, she is in fact, an unruly, Paris Hilton-type party girl.

One night, well after midnight, she stumbles in to the manor, completely wasted and very distraught. The young butler was awoken by the noise and goes to assist the woman. He manages to get it out of her that she accidentally ran someone over with her porche a few hundred yards down the road. The butler helps the woman in to her bed, where she promptly passes out. The butler goes out and walks down the road to where her porche is stopped, engine still running, in the middle of the road. In front of its dented fender lies a dead dog - the woman was too drunk to tell the difference. The butler disposes of the dog, drives the car back to the manor and cleans the blood off it.

Somewhere along the line, he thinks about how he can use this to his advantage. The next morning, after the woman wakes up, the butler tells her that he "took care of" the problem, and that she doesn't need to worry about it. He neglects to tell her that it wasn't a human she killed. But the catch is that now he owns her, because he knows where the body is buried (literally!), and with one phone call to the cops she could be looking at 20 years in the slammer. She is to be at his beck and call to service him sexually whenever he desires.

An alternate scenario is one where at first he covers up the crime like a dutiful butler, but then later, he comes to the woman and facetiously tells her that "his conscience is bothering him," fishing for a bribe. The problem is that the woman has no money of her own, and there's no way for her to draw a significant amount from her family fortune without inconvenient questions being asked. As an alternative, she seduces the butler and manages to buy him off with sex. But what she at first assumed would be a quick screw soon becomes an ongoing arrangement. I like this idea because it motivates the woman to be more seductive and eager to please.

Regardless of the storyline, here are some good scenarios that I think would work in a story like this:

* A blowjob with the butler standing, and the woman kneeling. Anything with the noble woman kneeling submissively before her manservant would be hot. Especially if he was grabbing her by the hair and controlling her movements.
* Bending her over something like the lord's ancestral desk, the main dining table, or one of those islands you see in those grand manor kitchens, and taking her aggressively from behind.
* The woman being made to wash the butler in the shower. Possibly using her tits as loofers.
* The family hosts a ball where they intend to set her up with an eligible nobleman bachelor. The pompous suitor spends much of his time flirting with the young woman, acting as if their eventual engagement is all but a sure thing, because it's expected of them. In the middle of the party, the butler demands the woman meets him in a side room, where he immediately screws her. Thus he is content that while the young nobleman thinks the woman is his for the taking, the butler is the one who actually got to screw her that night. (I guess this idea is kind of an upper-class rip off of the "I got her phone number, so how do you like those apples?" scene from Good Will Hunting.)
* The butler manipulates the family so that the woman is betrothed to a young nobleman that he knows through the grapevine is secretly gay and looking for a sham marriage to cover it up. That way, she is given the facade of marriage and, seeing as her husband has no sexual interest in her whatsoever, the butler is free to keep screwing her at his leisure.
* The butler insists on being in the room and watching the woman get dressed for any engagements, which at first disturbs her greatly, but she soon gets used to it. Also, she could do a private fashion parade of lingerie at his insistence, to determine which pieces please him the most.
* Forcing her to model for nude pictures or make a sex tape with him, which only increases his blackmail leverage over her.
* Tension whenever she's at her midpoint between periods. It would be an unforgivable scandal if she fell pregnant out of wedlock, so she is desperate that the butler doesn't come in her pussy during these days. He uses this to assert further dominance over her; He fucks her vaginally, but depending on whether she'd been a "good girl" or not over the past month, he will either blow his load in her mouth, on her face or her tits, or he will come deep in her pussy. Of course, the butler doesn't want to be a father, so he secretly grinds up birth control pills into the tea he serves the woman every day. Even if the woman tries to get birth control pills herself, the butler always finds where she's hiding them (as a good butler always knows everything about their house), and steals them, leaving her to believe she's always fertile.
* A "dignity debt" arrangement between the woman and the butler, in which any instance in which she bosses him around or looks down her nose at him to keep up appearances in public, is later repaid by an extra-attentive, or humiliating (for the woman) sexual performance.
* Watching the way the woman loves to rub her clit when he's screwing her gives the butler a fresh idea about how to assert dominance over her. The next time they screw, he ties her hands behind her back and fingerfucks her until she is desperately begging for him to take care of her excited clit. Alternatively, tying her hands could be a punishment he uses when she displeases him, "If milady does not behave herself, her clit shall go wanting."

Hopefully, you should be able to do something with some of those ideas, at least.

I love your ideas! Very, very stimulating. Every idea is an incredible turn on! Thank you...thank you...thank you............sweet......Your ideas are so hot! I can't wait to get started!!!!

 

[sweet_lusciousdesire]

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[sirhugs]

I'd like to write a story about a butler that is more like a Master. I'd like to see him be a bit sadistic in his approach, almost a life coach, but one that is getting paid to direct the female character in the story. He would tell the rich horny woman exactly what she needed to do everyday and everystep of the way.

Do any ideas come to mind on how he might direct her? What might he make her do?

polish all the silverware. when she thinks she's done that, he makes her polish the doorknobs. When she thinks she's done that, she makes her polish HIS knob...

 

[sweet_lusciousdesire]

nice idea......a little spit and shine should polish him up real good...

 

[sweet_lusciousdesire]

Just Visting

So I wrote the story and I would love to hear what people think of it. It's called Just Visting. Thanks for your input. It really helps form ideas.