impressive
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Peeking in from the AH to ask if anyone is interested in doing a beta read of a story in development. Finished the 43rd first draft this evening.
It's just under 9,000 words. Haven't decided on the category yet -- perhaps Romance, perhaps Mature, perhaps Group.
I want to know:
(a) if there is anything specific about the characters (4 of 'em) that annoys you -- missing details, out-of-character behavior, etc.;
(b) if the ambiguity at the end is just too damned frustrating;
(c) any glaring technical errors;
(d) spots that need more "show" and less "tell."
Reply here or PM me your e-mail address. I'll be happy to reciprocate down the line.
Best,
~Imp
It's just under 9,000 words. Haven't decided on the category yet -- perhaps Romance, perhaps Mature, perhaps Group.
I want to know:
(a) if there is anything specific about the characters (4 of 'em) that annoys you -- missing details, out-of-character behavior, etc.;
(b) if the ambiguity at the end is just too damned frustrating;
(c) any glaring technical errors;
(d) spots that need more "show" and less "tell."
Reply here or PM me your e-mail address. I'll be happy to reciprocate down the line.
Best,
~Imp
