Another Unfinished Story

[Ambrosious]

It was a dark and stormy night.



That's all I got so far. Where should it go from here?

Maybe add some characters?

 

[Mackdaddy_74]

Ambro

Just add some feet, and it should be fine.

 

[R Nitelight]

Ambrosious

You mean it's not finished?

 

[Ambrosious]

Just need some polish here and there.

 

[Nobody Special's wife]

Men!!!

http://www.gif-world.com./maingifs/adultgifs/26.gif

 

[R Nitelight]

Ambrosious

Why tinker with perfection?

 

[Juliangel]

Ambro

Great story. Loved it, read it twice. What about a sequal?

 

[Nobody Special]

You know Nightlight, that is why God Created Eve from Adam.. but then again the First woman couldn't handle Adam so god had to create another from one of Adam's ribs.. YOu from perfection in hopes of getting perfection back..

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[R Nitelight]

Nobody Special's Wife

Who are you talking to?

 

[Nobody Special's wife]

we will never know

both of you!!

 

[sariethebrat]

okay...you all made me forget the storyline....grins....love the exploding head tho....nice reflection on men in general...KABOOM

 

[DriveSouth]

Re: we will never know

both of you!!

Xander maybe????

LOL

 

[Ksss]

*standing ready with my bottle of Mop & Glo* Polish??? Who???What???Where???

 

[R Nitelight]

Ksss

When you come up with a title, send it to Laurel. She'll post it as soon as she can.

 

[Ambrosious]

Stories?

 

[KillerMuffin]

It leaves me with some questions. What sort of storm? Showers? Thunderstorms? Electrical storms? Monsoons? Tornadoes? Hail? Ice? Blizzard? Cats and dogs? Women's undergarments? Toenail polish? Descending police officers at a Van Halen concert?

What kind of dark was it? Pitch dark? Was there enough light to see past the end of your nose? Was there a need for headlights? Were the streetlights on? If there were streetlights, would they be on?

What kind of atmosphere? Dry? Humid? Barometer rising? Falling? Would the weatherman be sexually excited by the barometer?

Overall, I think you have a fabulous manner of conjoining two adjectives.

 

[KillerMuffin]

A second reading, couldn't resist another peek, helped me realize that you have a really good handle on working the object of your sentence minimally. Masterful.

 

[DarkAngel]

I got lost after it was a dark and ....

 

[Ambrosious]

KillerMuffin

I thought so too! Thanks!

 

[Ksss]

Nitelight

Nope, not gonna do it and you can't make me! LOL

 

[R Nitelight]

Ksss

Well, if you think of one, let us know.