Another one

[CeriseNoire]

So... my latest submission was posted today. Of course you know what that means: time for me to beg and plead for reads and feedback. Pretty please?

Reunion Ch.02 is the conclusion to my previous submission.

If you haven't, you may want to read Reunion first to get to know the characters.

Thanks a lot,

Cerise

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Wow. You have come a LOOOOOONG way in a very short time. This story is about as good as any on lit.

From a critical point of view I would have opened the story a little differently, but what you did works.

Just keep it up. You are doing fine.

JJ

 

[CeriseNoire]

Wow. You have come a LOOOOOONG way in a very short time. This story is about as good as any on lit.

From a critical point of view I would have opened the story a little differently, but what you did works.

Just keep it up. You are doing fine.

JJ

Thanks as always for your kind words. And thank you for clarifying the issue with the opening - I totally missed that.

 

[CeriseNoire]

A little *bump* before bed.

That's right, I'm not above bumping my own begging thread.
I have no shame

 

[elfin_odalisque]

A little *bump* before bed.

That's right, I'm not above bumping my own begging thread.
I have no shame

Doesn't work to have shame round here. As Jenny said, authors are just egos on legs.

Sent you a PM, but will say it here as well. Reunion 2 is very good.

Well done.