Another one to add to your collection!

[DopeyAngel]

Hello all,

I know that there are always so many people begging you to read their new stories, and i am no better than the next person, especially since i want to take up writing professionally, I know its a bit of a pain but could you please take a minute to read and let me know what you think? It would be really helpful to me!

It is in the new stories section and also the Exhibitionist/Voyeur section so it should be pretty easy to find! It is called 'Alexie All Alone', which is a pretty awful title, but then i am quite inexperienced at this sort of thing so don't judge me yet!

If you have trouble it should be here

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=37026

Thanx to everyone who appreciates my lack of IT skills and refrains from giving me unhelpful criticism!!!

DopeyAngel

 

[PAUL C]

I read it.

Your first submission but not, I think, the first story you have written.

It was very good. I enjoyed it.

I did find it a little hard to follow at times who was doing it to themselves at any particular moment but that might just be me.

The story line itself has been done before but it stood another re-telling.

Well worth a read.

 

[DopeyAngel]

Thank you very much for actually bothering to read it, I know there are many people vying for attention about new stories. It is in fact my first story as well as my first submission, but thanx again for the compliment! I think that is probably why I stuck to a simple, tried and tested storyline, I think I can afford to be more adventurous with my storylines in future stories.

 

[Guest]

New story......(first story?)

I have to agree with Paul entirely. Perhaps your first story here, but you've written before. Very similiar to my first posted stories, but I didn't show that degree of experience until I'd received ALOT of help and constructive critisism.

And yes....its a basic variation of the same old theme. With your ability...venture out and try something really daring and wild.

Thesandman

 

[DopeyAngel]

Re: New story......(first story?)

Thesandman , "Perhaps your first story here, but you've written before.."

Thank you Thesandman, I am so chuffed. But seriously this is the first thing I have ever written (EVER!), I am only young yet! Thank you for your comments they have been very helpful!

 

[Bob Peale]

Angel,

Took a look, sent my feedback

 

[RisiaSkye]

Yep, what Bob said

Me too. Check your email.

Risia