Another Incest Idea

Another_Bad_Girl

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woman, 18+ obviously, begins talking with an older man (lets say 40s) online. after talking a while he askes her to call him daddy, and he begins questioning whether or not she would have sex with any family members, when she admits her brother(for example, feel free to replace with anyone else) he begins telling her how she could seduce him, what to wear, how to move, what to say, etc. I have never ever seen this done, and would really like to.
 
This reminds me of the modern myth of just such an encounter on the internet which they take to its logical conclusion and there she is, lying in a motel, on the bed, naked, when he walks in and really is her father.
 
that would be interesting and it could indeed happen. maybe she lacks courage do try and do anything with her brother and daddy shows up to lecture her?
 
Actualy I think the idea of it the poster either accidently or on purpose really is her brother/father.
 
Lit can fix it

Another_Bad_Girl said:
I hope you're not talking to me. I couldnt write if my life depended on it

Anyone who can think of a story can write it, maybe not very well, but with the help and resources available on Lit, you should give it a try. What do you have lose
 
Mikro said:
Anyone who can think of a story can write it, maybe not very well, but with the help and resources available on Lit, you should give it a try. What do you have lose



the time I spend trying to write it?
 
Another_Bad_Girl said:
you sure about that?

not in a faithbased or theory of relativity way, but as a principle based on economic theory, stretched....
 
Another_Bad_Girl said:
the time I spend trying to write it?


But think of the satifaction you get from:

Thinking of the idea
Building the story
Writing the story
And publishing it on Lit

If you write a little and put it on here you will soon either be told it's rubbish, or encouraged to continue, even given guidance.
 
Mikro said:
But think of the satifaction you get from:

Thinking of the idea
Building the story
Writing the story
And publishing it on Lit

If you write a little and put it on here you will soon either be told it's rubbish, or encouraged to continue, even given guidance.

most likely all three
 
Another_Bad_Girl said:
the time I spend trying to write it?
As an old Irish friend of mine is wont to remark, "When the Good Lord invented time, he made plenty of it."
 
Keeping this...

Another_Bad_Girl said:
woman, 18+ obviously, begins talking with an older man (lets say 40s) online...

...described part of my life. Except I was 21 (and 8 mos. pregnant waddeling into a bar when we met in person) and He was 39. Even the whole "incest fantasy/role play" was there. But then my life takes a drastic turn from your idea. :eek:
 
Another_Bad_Girl,

Some posters feel the need to bring out the writer in everyone who visits this board. It's just encouragement and I hope you don't find it frustrating.
 
More?

No. I have had feedback asking for more, but I like the way it ends with a question. I want the reader's imagination to run wild. Now if there is someone who would like to "take the baton" and add a chapter to it...I have no problem with that.
I am glad you took the time to read it and reply. For me the enjoyment is thinking up different and unusual plot twists, while still maintaining a certain amount of believablilty. Of course my two stories "Body Snatch" and "Changing Reflections" are out there, there is still a sense a realness to it that I think makes it more erotic.

once again - thanks and thanks for not mentioning I need an editor. I know I know I know....just that sometimes I am rushed and can't wait to get it out there.
MW
 
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