Another Incest Idea

[jessy19]

Ok now I was thinking of writing a story about a young woman about 18 or 19 yrs old that discovers that her parents are really brother and sister. I just don't know how to go around the fact that she will find out. Maybe reading mom's diary? Or knowing how much her grandparents loath her cuz she's an incest child? I know I just don't want the daughter to do anything sexual with her mommy or daddy. I do want however the story of the mommy and daddy going thru their struggle of their love and having a love child. What do you all suggest?

 

[Green_Gem]

Well this is an unusual idea you have come up with and I like the idea of the grandparents always being offish to her because of who she is; an accident that should never have happened. That adds some anguish to the girl and a need for her to understand and discover why.

Perhaps she could discover the secret about her parents by looking in on the hospital room where her grandmother is dying. Her mother is with the dying grandmother and is begging for forgiveness, or the grandmother, wanting to die in peace tells her that she forgives her for the shame she brought on the family.

Because the girl has heard this she is able to probe and ask her mother questions and that's where the 'confession' comes out and the story of the parent's struggle is revealed.

Not sure if this has helped but good luck. Thanks also for the response to my thread on incest ideas.

Green_Gem

 

[NASCARaddicted]

Ok now I was thinking of writing a story about a young woman about 18 or 19 yrs old that discovers that her parents are really brother and sister. I just don't know how to go around the fact that she will find out. Maybe reading mom's diary? Or knowing how much her grandparents loath her cuz she's an incest child? I know I just don't want the daughter to do anything sexual with her mommy or daddy. I do want however the story of the mommy and daddy going thru their struggle of their love and having a love child. What do you all suggest?

This sounds really interesting. Especially the fact that the daughter is not involved in the sex (if this would happen, it would be too unrealistic, I think)

I think about something like: The daughter is searching for some old stuff (photos, toys, books, etc.) in the attic. She stumbles across her moms diary. At first, she doesn't want to read about the secrets of her mom. But then she sees something: The diary was written between 1982 to 1984, while she was born in 1983. So maybe, there would be more details about moms pregnancy and her own birth.

At first, she is surprised to read something about a brother of her mom. She never knew that mom had a brother. No one ever talked about him. She keeps on reading. His name was Harry .... the same name like her father. What a coincidence ....
She keeps on reading. Then she discovers, that mom and her brother had sex. Not just once but many times. The daughter is shocked about this: Her mother had an incest relation with her own brother. So this was the reason why no one ever talked about this brother. Probably, he seduced her, and so the family dismissed him. She keeps on reading and suddenly, she is shocked again:Her mother got pregnant by her brother. She wants an abortion, but the grandmother (the mother of the mother) is against an abortion. She insists that the mother is having this incest baby, because: "after she had the fun (the sex) now she also has to take the responsibility (the baby).

The daughter is shocked. This would mean that her mother had another child, besides her. What happened to it ? Was it dead ? Was it adoped by someone ? She continues to read: the calculated birthday of this incest baby is somewhere in June 1983 .... and again she is shocked: She was born on June the 5th, 1983 ..... but this would mean .... that SHE is this incest baby.
After she got over her shock, she continues to read. The grandmother told the brother and sister, that they should live together like a couple (but of course, without marriage).

So now, the daughter confronts her mother with this knowledge. She wants to know more about the seduction and that stuff.

Of course, the mother doesn't tell her all the details. But it could be like: The mother was curious about anal, but she couldn't find a guy who was willing to do it with her. (but then, the mother wasn't very active when it comes to sex ... she just had like 1 or 2 boyfriends). She talked about anal sex to her brother and he was willing to do it with her. So they had anal sex for a few times. (the mother smiles and starts to talk how much she loves anal sex. Maybe she even gives some details about her first anal time. She could tell about the size of his dick, and how he extended her butthole with his gentle fingers)
After some time of great anal sex, they also had oral and vaginal sex .... and so she got pregnant by her own brother (even though they used contraceptives)

 

[jessy19]

Well guys!
I love your ideas! I think I can mix the two around actually! I just have to get started soon! lol Thanks guys

 

[rube]

A twist of fate...

How about she is doing the nostalgic thing in the attic and discovers their respective year books/annuals?

 

[NASCARaddicted]

just to add this to my first posting:

some months ago, I had a story idea: A young girl wanted to try anal, but her boyfriend didn't wanted to give it a try. Well, finally, she left him. She really wanted to do anal, but she couldn't find a guy who was willing (but then, she was very shy when it came to flirting, and she didn't wanted do it with just some guy - she wanted to have anal sex with someone that she trustet.)

So finally, she did it with her brother .... (I guess she seduced him, or talked him into it)

This could become a part of the original story: After the daughter found the diary, she confronts her mother and asks her, why she had sex with her brother .... so the mother tells her how she was curious about anal, and the brother was the only guy that she would trust ....

I guess the daughter never had anal sex, but she is curious, too. So the mother starts to tell her all the details. She really enjoys to talk about it ..... so she told her own daughter every little detail ....

 

[jessy19]

Ok well I thought about this one, and this is what I came up with:

A girl who is about to graduate from high school, she's just turned 18 and for the yearbook she is asked to post a baby picture of herself. She knows her mother has her baby pics up in the attic so she goes digging for baby pics. As she looks, she eventually finds one but then gets lost and keeps looking at all the cool old pics. Then she finds a book that is dated 1983-1984 or something like that.

She reads it and it turns out to be her moms diary. She keeps reading and in the diary sees every detail her mom wrote about falling in love with her brother and her having his baby which turned out to be her. She is shocked at first, but then reads on to discover that her mother had to either abort her or get out of the house. She admires her mother for having the courage to have her and live with her brother as husband and wife.

Oh and also the young girl keeps bumping into an old couple who keeps staring and smiling at her. AT the end she discovers it's her grandparents who want to see their grandbaby. So they make up with their children and the grandaughter and all live happily ever after? Does that sound too weak?

 

[sirhugs]

Ok well I thought about this one, and this is what I came up with:

A girl who is about to graduate from high school, she's just turned 18 and for the yearbook she is asked to post a baby picture of herself. She knows her mother has her baby pics up in the attic so she goes digging for baby pics. As she looks, she eventually finds one but then gets lost and keeps looking at all the cool old pics. Then she finds a book that is dated 1983-1984 or something like that.

She reads it and it turns out to be her moms diary. She keeps reading and in the diary sees every detail her mom wrote about falling in love with her brother and her having his baby which turned out to be her. She is shocked at first, but then reads on to discover that her mother had to either abort her or get out of the house. She admires her mother for having the courage to have her and live with her brother as husband and wife.

Oh and also the young girl keeps bumping into an old couple who keeps staring and smiling at her. AT the end she discovers it's her grandparents who want to see their grandbaby. So they make up with their children and the grandaughter and all live happily ever after? Does that sound too weak?

I'm a sucker for happy endings, especially if they involve sex.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

Jessy, this sounds really great.

especially the part with the grandparents ..... after all the years of stalking to get a glimpse of their grandbaby.

Finally, the grandparents accept the fact that the mother and her own brother are a loving couple. Especially due to the fact, that they still love each other, after they lived together for 18 years.

 

[rube]

I like it

Better when the stories end with a big warm fuzzy.

 

[sirhugs]

Re: I like it

Better when the stories end with a big warm fuzzy.

or a big hard in a nice fuzzy?

 

[snooper]

<Hanging head in fear of being hit>

Sorry to throw spanners into works, but there's a snag.

How is it that she didn't inquire, when young (seven or eight) why she had only two grandparents when everyone else had four?

My kids did, and were later (ten or so) were shown the graves of the missing relatives.

 

[sirhugs]

Re: <Hanging head in fear of being hit>

Sorry to throw spanners into works, but there's a snag.

How is it that she didn't inquire, when young (seven or eight) why she had only two grandparents when everyone else had four?

My kids did, and were later (ten or so) were shown the graves of the missing relatives.

why fear bludgeoning? best point out these gaps while the writer might still fix. Presumably, some tale was told about dead ancestors in a far off land ( thus unable to show the graves). Both my grandfathers were dead before I was born. One is buried thousands of miles away ( saw a marker when I was 8). The other, is a mystery- old army discharge papers ( Russian, WW I) and a name in a wedding announcement is all I know....

 

[NASCARaddicted]

Re: <Hanging head in fear of being hit>

Sorry to throw spanners into works, but there's a snag.

How is it that she didn't inquire, when young (seven or eight) why she had only two grandparents when everyone else had four?

My kids did, and were later (ten or so) were shown the graves of the missing relatives.

Another thing is: The grandparents never got close to the incest kid. So, this incest kid never had contact to something like grandparents. The incest kid never really knew what grandparents are (even though some of the friends of the incest kid had grandparents)

 

[snooper]

An aside:

Since my only sister lived on another continent, my kids hardly knew her while they were young. At about six or seven tears old, one of my sons was asked at school to write about "My favourite Aunty".

His offering started:

My favourite aunty is grandma.

 

[sirhugs]

An aside:

Since my only sister lived on another continent, my kids hardly knew her while they were young. At about six or seven tears old, one of my sons was asked at school to write about "My favourite Aunty".

His offering started:

My favourite aunty is grandma.

your kid is now a successful porn writer?

That line could start a fine incest tale in itself.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

An aside:

Since my only sister lived on another continent, my kids hardly knew her while they were young. At about six or seven tears old, one of my sons was asked at school to write about "My favourite Aunty".

His offering started:

My favourite aunty is grandma.

totally off topic, but: what about kids that have no aunt ? They couldn't write anything about aunts.
Sometimes school/teachers are really stupid.

 

[sirhugs]

totally off topic, but: what about kids that have no aunt ? They couldn't write anything about aunts.
Sometimes school/teachers are really stupid.

perhaps they can write about ants?

actually, there's a story idea: Johnny ( or Jill ) grew up not knowing any aunts, until Dad's long lost suster, who ran away from home years before shows up......or it could work as mistaken identity

 

[NASCARaddicted]

perhaps they can write about ants?

actually, there's a story idea: Johnny ( or Jill ) grew up not knowing any aunts, until Dad's long lost suster, who ran away from home years before shows up......or it could work as mistaken identity

not bad:

Dad's sister run away for some reasons. She did something really stupd/dishonorable, so the family never talked about her - she almost became forgotten.

Maybe the sister became drug addicted and worked as a whore. Or maybe she got pregnant when she was just 15, and run away from home ....

Now, years later, she returns. Or, the brother runs into her, in a shopping mall, just a few miles away from home.

 

[snooper]

totally off topic, but: what about kids that have no aunt ? They couldn't write anything about aunts.
Sometimes school/teachers are really stupid.

This was in a part of the world where everyone has aunties. Not necessarily relations, but all close female friends of the family were referred to as "Auntie whoever". It's a dialect thing.

Also originally posted by NASCARaddicted
Dad's sister run away for some reasons. She did something really stupd/dishonorable, so the family never talked about her - she almost became forgotten.

One of my cousins ran away from home because she did something unthinkable: she joined the Royal Ballet as a dancer. Going to the Sadler's Wells school was apparently acceptable, but being paid for appearing on stage was a real no-no in the late 1940s.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

One of my cousins ran away from home because she did something unthinkable: she joined the Royal Ballet as a dancer. Going to the Sadler's Wells school was apparently acceptable, but being paid for appearing on stage was a real no-no in the late 1940s.

Sounds interesting.

I had another idea about "separated family members". Maybe there was a war, and the brother thinks that his sister is dead - so he never searched for her. But his sister ain't dead. She is alive ... but she believes that her brother is dead .... so she also doesn't search her brother.

 

[snooper]

I had another idea about "separated family members". Maybe there was a war, and the brother thinks that his sister is dead - so he never searched for her. But his sister ain't dead. She is alive ... but she believes that her brother is dead .... so she also doesn't search her brother.

This does happen. Last week there was a news story on UK television so it must be true of a Jewish brother and sister who were separated by the Nazis in the late 1930s and each had believed the other dead, until the Wiesenthal centre reunited them after 65 years. Sadly there was no mention of any plans for incest.

 

[sirhugs]

This does happen. Last week there was a news story on UK television so it must be true of a Jewish brother and sister who were separated by the Nazis in the late 1930s and each had believed the other dead, until the Wiesenthal centre reunited them after 65 years. Sadly there was no mention of any plans for incest.

thats because it's still taboo in the mainstream press

 

[snooper]

thats because it's still taboo in the mainstream press

The mainstream press demands the "right" to be told EVERYTHING, no matter how secret, NOW.

I think we should be allowed to read anything they know!