another huge cock story

[gdavis]

I just read the beginning to the Governor and his intern, but I'm not really going to criticize the story since I stopped reading it, but the overabundance of monster cock stories. I don't know how many stories I start only to come to the part where the guy is carrying around an enormous member, which causes the story to just become silly.

Maybe some women and some men just interested in fantasy find these stories appealing, but its such a common characteristic in these stories, it is beyond a cliche, it is just plain tired. I'm being half serious, but maybe there should be a separate category for this genre, so I can avoid the trap.

 

[BlackShanglan]

I have to agree with you on this topic. I prefer a little realism in my reading, and I get tired of the "monster cock" (and corresponding "basketball-sized tits") stories. Mind you, as one who likes a good "transformation" tale, I'm open to the thrill of radically mis-sized endowments, but so often there is nothing else. The disproportionate sexual equipment is too easily substituted as shorthand for any real build-up of desire or sexual tension, and it turns into the "magic cock" or "magic tits" story in which the revelation of said equipment is regarded as instantly irresistable regardless of context. It's tedious when authors skip the elements of a story that develop tension and interest and instead try the quick fix of "but look at the SIZE of it!" I've seen some stories in which huge endowments of various sorts were given delicious meaning, depth, and power, but the vast majority of such stories do seem to be of the "shortcut" variety.

Shanglan

 

[OhMissScarlett]

I have to agree with you on this topic. I prefer a little realism in my reading, and I get tired of the "monster cock" (and corresponding "basketball-sized tits") stories.
Shanglan

I find it hard to believe many of these stories in which there happens to be a room full of men with 12" inch cocks. I'm not saying it's not possible, just highly unlikely. Like many Lit authors, I fell into the trap of giving a mug shot break down of my characters' attributes in my first story and I just cringe when I look at it now.

 

[J.Q. Hack]

I couldn't agree more. Monster cock and basketball-sized tits appear in too many stories and often times the story becomes just plain ridiculous after that. One top of that every male character that is given a gigantic dick seems to know exactly how to use it and the women he is with, except for some initial uncomfortable stretching, easily take foot long dongs.

However, there are a few stories I have read on here where the characters are given disproportionate body parts and they have worked. These stories are done best when there is build up that doesn't focus on the member and involve some sort of awkwardness on the guy's part with the huge dick, i.e. that he is embarassed by its size or even if the story involves some sort of drug testing gone wild.

 

[BlackShanglan]

Hack, I agree. I have read some "transformation" type stories that focus around the effects or consequences of the body parts that were rather hot - i.e., semi-non-con stories about making people into creatures dominated by their sexual attributes, in which the underlying horror of this was part of the thrill. Or, as you point out, the more simple recognition that a huge endowment presents some problems. Either of those sorts of tales can be quite interesting. It's just the "look a monster cock/tits, now I don't have to do anything else to establish character desire" trope that I find tedious.

Good point on character ability to accomodate those huge organs, as well. I inevitably roll my eyes and pass on to another story when (as seems inevitable) the woman deep-throats the monster without pause despite repeated assurances that it really is astoundingly enormous. How silly.

Shanglan

 

[human_male]

I agree it's unrealistic but what's the point writing about the silly little average dicks that most of us have? Lots of men like small tits but how many women like small dicks?

Ello Scarlett

 

[BlackShanglan]

I don't object to the author creating a fantasy in which his/her physical interests are catered to, but the focus on cock size to me often undoes other elements of the story. Of course, one can take that with a grain of salt; I think I'm correct in saying that in my seven posted stories, you won't find a numerical description of any physical attribute, whether male or female, or even height.

It's not that I don't think size or appearance matter; I think I give about enough to let people know how the viewer feels about his/her sex partner. I just find personally that what makes the scene erotic is how the characters move to physical intimacy and how they experience the act - which I don't think is well-conveyed by a recitation of relative length and girth. These are details in a larger picture, unless you're writing from the POV of someone with a fetish for such things. Even in the latter case, you need the underlying context of the fetish to make it work.

If the writer really has a "thing" for huge cocks or massive tits, I don't object to him/her indulging that; I just get frustrated when it's either taken to silly extremes (every woman in the story has DD breasts) or is used in place of character development or real attention to building sexual tension (male character has 10 inch cock; no other event is then deemed necessary for women to beg him for sex).

The last thing I would say is that there is a middle ground between writing about male characters with huge cocks and writing about those with small ones. I personally prefer those in which the focus of the story is on action; in that case, we don't really need the specific length of the endowment, which can be assumed to be whatever the reader likes. It's more important what it does, or what it looks like, or how it tastes, etc. etc.

Shanglan

 

[OhMissScarlett]

The last thing I would say is that there is a middle ground between writing about male characters with huge cocks and writing about those with small ones. I personally prefer those in which the focus of the story is on action; in that case, we don't really need the specific length of the endowment, which can be assumed to be whatever the reader likes. It's more important what it does, or what it looks like, or how it tastes, etc. etc.

Shanglan

Shanglan has pretty much summed it up. A story should paint a picture for it's reader and that cock should spring out at you in technicolor, no matter the size. For a story to arouse me, it has to be somewhat realistic, even if it's a fantasy story. A story should transport you, not make you say "Oh, give me a break,". I have written about large endowments, but only if they caused a problem for my characters and I'm not going to get into that whole "it's not how big, but how you use it" argument.

Writing historical fiction really broke me of any inclination I had to write about specific measurements. Nothing would be as shocking to readers of historical fiction than to say my main male character was 5'0" tall, which in 15th century Europe was very possible. Also, many units of measurement from that time period are no longer used. We should remember that not everyone in the world knows measurement in inches, centimeters or whatever.

 

[carsonshepherd]

What kills me...

are the gay stories where the studs have a 12" cock or whatever. I'm so sure. If I saw something like that coming toward my ass, you can bet your sweet balls I'd run screaming away. Of course... there are some people who have giant cocks (I am not one of them)...and they're really only good for knocking down drywall... I suppose a person could get used to that, carefully and over a long period of time with about ten gallons of KY, and therein might be an interesting story plot for someone. I personally would not want to do the research and "feel the role" for that one.

 

[OhMissScarlett]

In the immortal words of Bart Simpson, "Ouch, quit it!"

 

[BlackShanglan]

In the last porno flick I watched, they chose one of the most over-hung men I have ever seen to do an anal scene. This was well beyond knocking down drywall; I'm convinced that he could have managed cinderblock. It did not look at all enticing. All I felt was sympathy, empathy, and a certain horror for the person on the receiving end.

Ms. Scarlett, I really must read more of your material. I love a good historical story, and like you I prefer my descriptions evocation, not numerical. I just can't get excited about the number 10 or 38DD, no matter what they're attached to. Show me, show me, show me ...

Shanglan

 

[cloudy]

I read, or started to read, a story on here a couple of days ago where one of the characters had an 18 inch cock.

Now, excuse me, but even though I understand that these stories are mostly fantasies, that was just a little bit much, ya know?

I don't get it, either, y'all.

 

[BlackShanglan]

Sure it wasn't a donkey? No, wait ... bestiality is out here.

Sure is wasn't a jackass?

Shanglan

 

[smoochypig]

Maybe it should be donated to the Red Cross. From the sounds of it such an erect member would be more than sufficient to replenish the blood banks. Evidently not with type 'O' though.

 

[OhMissScarlett]

Sure it wasn't a donkey? No, wait ... bestiality is out here.

Sure is wasn't a jackass?

Shanglan

Maybe Cloudy had just taken a peek under your AV, Shanglan

 

[BlackShanglan]

Maybe Cloudy had just taken a peek under your AV, Shanglan

*laugh* This reminds me obliquely of ...

A day working the phones at the animal shelter, when a woman called to report that she'd found a lost dog. I asked (as per usual) if it was male or female. She replied that she did not know. I asked if she could check. She answered, "How?"

(Swing it three times 'round your head while dancing naked in the light of the full moon?)

I suggested that she "check the undercarriage." She declined, although whether out of distaste or genuine anatomical perplexity, I cannot say.

On a related note, on the drive to what was my dog food supplier, I often passed what I fondly refered to as "the world's happiest donkey." Let us simply say that on most days, whether alone or in company, he was fairly clearly male. Visual confirmation of gender possible from a good 200 yards.

Shanglan

 

[OhMissScarlett]

*laugh* This reminds me obliquely of ...

A day working the phones at the animal shelter, when a woman called to report that she'd found a lost dog. I asked (as per usual) if it was male or female. She replied that she did not know. I asked if she could check. She answered, "How?"

(Swing it three times 'round your head while dancing naked in the light of the full moon?)

I suggested that she "check the undercarriage." She declined, although whether out of distaste or genuine anatomical perplexity, I cannot say.

On a related note, on the drive to what was my dog food supplier, I often passed what I fondly refered to as "the world's happiest donkey." Let us simply say that on most days, whether alone or in company, he was fairly clearly male. Visual confirmation of gender possible from a good 200 yards.

Shanglan

I bet that would draw a lot of tourists if your town advertised "the world's happiest donkey". You just have to look, there's no shame in it, lol.

 

[eric shawn listo]

quote:

Guilty as charged...

But ya know, there's no difference from my fetish then there is from people into anything. I write size-related erotica for those who like it, and I'm happy that they do.

I do agree with you size needs a genre though...I've been relegated to "Fetish" and quite frankly, fetish is just too broad a category for something so basic as size fetishes.

I was wondering if the Queen had seen this thread. But since her over-sized elements are integrel to what she writes, she should be forgiven. (plus she does it very well) She makes a good point about the "Fetish" category though. There is also no other place for stories, say, about over-sized ladies. (BBW's)

I guess I agree with over-all views. Certainly a "nice above average and very thick dick" and "an over-flowing handful of breast" are enough for most stories. But I can't see "he pounded my virtually non-existant tits with his hard three inch man meat" either.

esl

 

[BlackShanglan]

I was wondering if the Queen had seen this thread. But since her over-sized elements are integrel to what she writes, she should be forgiven. (plus she does it very well)

See, I have no problem with that. I don't mind at all reading a story that celebrates and makes enticing a fetish for whatever floats the author's boat. If for some reason the fetish really, really squicks me, I might not finish the story - but I would never say that it was badly written simply because I disliked the content. I think that there can be great stories about the joys of fetishized body parts.

My <whiney, grumpy> complaint is with stories in which this is not the case. These are stories that aren't really about a fetish for huge cocks, or tits, or whatever; they just throw in handfuls of enormous statistics without really making them part of the plot or bringing any interest or excitment to them. I actually read one recently where all three men in a gang-bang had cocks that ascended in exactly one inch increments, as if they were in a dildo catalog or something. I wish I could say that this had been done for comic effect, but no - dead serious. And there was no other characterization or description for any of them. Now that is just tedious. It's not that huge cocks can't be exciting - it's just that they're not magically exciting to the point that the words "twelve inch dick" should be expected to stand in for the hard work of actually building sexual tension.

In my horsily humble opinion

Shanglan

 

[OhMissScarlett]

I actually read one recently where all three men in a gang-bang had cocks that ascended in exactly one inch increments, as if they were in a dildo catalog or something.
Shanglan

Didn't you know that you could mail order men to such exact specifications?! I hear the postage is a real bitch.

 

[eric shawn listo]

SizeQueenSupreme wrote:

Oh now you've done it, hee hee. I"m gonna write a comedy story in my typical style, but use the kind of language you used there. It will be the best thing ever...

Go for it, V!! It'll be smashing.
I think everyone's pretty much ion agreement here. Keep it real--or keep it unreal. Just make the right pieces meet where they should.

esl

 

[BlackShanglan]

Well you're more then fair, I hope you didn't think I was criticizing your complaint.

*laugh* We really are setting world records for Internet politeness. I, of course, posted my last out of anxiousness lest *you* be offended by *my* comments. Shall we agree that you're brilliant and I'm charming? Or would you rather be charming and I brilliant?

And I like my men Horsy...

I am entirely at your service.

Shanglan