Another Brother/Sister Halloween Mix-Up Story

[HeyAll]

The Halloween mask mix-up thing is pretty popular, especially with incest. So here's another one if anyone wants it...

Ashley is a smart girl. She's a sophomore in college. She's in a fraternity, which she doesn't really like because the leader is a slut, and has them do degrading sexual things for fun. However, the sorority leader's dad is a powerful businessman, and Ashley might be able to get a good job with him, if she's in the sorority. Plus Ashley may have opportunities for more scholarships and so forth.

The sorority leader plans on having a Halloween event where the members wear masks, and fuck a guy from a male fraternity. (or something like that) It's anonymous, and it's used to climb ranks in the sorority.

Ashley hates this idea, but she's already friendly with the leader, and she doesn't want to lose her big job opportunity with her dad. So she reluctantly agrees, thinking, "No one is ever going to know."

Rob, Ashley younger brother, is new to the college. He joins the fraternity at the very last minute because he heard from a friend that they're going to fuck the sorority girls. Rob becomes excited because he's never been popular with girls. Later, he's shocked when he discovers that it's the sorority his sister is in. But he continues anyway, thinking he'll just avoid his sister and fuck someone else.

Later, the brother and sister talk at a family event (or whatever) and the brother can't help but think his sister is sexy. He's shocked that his sister would do such a slutty thing. Ashley has no idea her brother is involved with the other male fraternity.

On Halloween, the sorority girls wear masks, and they look for male's wearing the fraternity sweaters, and a mask.

Rob is dressed in a fraternity sweater and a mask, coincidentally, his sister taps him on the shoulder and asks him to come to her dorm room. She says it's only for a moment, with the mask on, then he has to leave. Rob scared as hell, and he figures that if he admits who he is, it's going to be even more embarrassing because they'll both know they were involved in slutty acts.

So he agrees by nodding.

Ashley takes him to the room without talking, because she hates doing it. Once in the room, she drops his pants and gives him oral.

ect...

Thoughts? Ideas? Takers?

 

[stlgoddessfreya]

If she doesn't want to do it but the sorority leader is pressuring her, it doesn't make much sense to go up to her room - otherwise she could just show up to the first part of the party then go up there and do homework, then come down the next day and talk about all the things she did and no one would be the wiser. I think there either needs to be some public aspect to the sex, either with other people watching or other people watching you go into a room with someone and there's some counting system for what you do while you're in there.

I think it might be better if the brother hears about the party and sneaks in dressed as one of the frat members even though he isn't. If he's found out, the real fraternity brothers are going to beat his ass, so he has to accept when his sister asks without revealing his identity. Maybe he's mistaken about what sorority his sister is part of (they all sound the same to him) or he assumes that the stories about what's going to happen at the party are wildly exaggerated and his straight-laced sister would never do anything like that.

 

[Hypoxia]

I can't comment on the usefulness of the college setting because I know nothing of frat+sorority politics; I do know that some such orgs are sexually integrated, so men and women may both be members of Phi Upsilon Sexto or whatever. Did you intend this?

I *will* say that 1) although the Hallowe'en mixup trope has been widely (ab)used, numerous variations can still be written, and 2) I have never believed the can't-tell-it's-my-sister/brother trope, not unless 3) they've been separated during developmental years, and/or 4) one or both are stoned or drunk.

That said, the accidental-incest trope still works in stroker stories. Minimize sibling recognition by giving them full-face masks that alter voices, scented with something to mask body auras. Throw in some story device that enables the siblings to recognize each other later -- like, all partiers were ink-stamped in different places, and the sibs see the stamps and realize their hookup. (Maybe first-timers are stamped on each knee; scholarship students are stamped on the right side, full-tuition students on the left; etc. Each person is stamped uniquely.)

That still makes it a fairly common type story. To spice it up, how about... consequences? The party's unstated purpose is as a Greek status-boosting fuckfest. The Rob doesn't know it was Ashley, not immediately anyway, and right after the BJ (which was the worst he's ever had because his sis was a mouth virgin) he complains to the frat leaders about the incompetent bitch. They order Ashley to try again, practicing on each of the leaders before returning to Rob.

That's all I can think of at the moment. Good luck.