R. Richard
Literotica Guru
- Joined
- Jul 24, 2003
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What Anonymous said:
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Comments:
I hate giving bad feedback, I really do but your story resembled grade
school writing, which was clinically written. The woman is being raped
and it could have been an arousing story but I was left thinking 'who
cares'.
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What I think I means (Your feedback is definitely solicited here):
I hate giving bad feedback, I really do. However, your clinically written story resembles grade
school writing. The woman is being raped and it could have been an arousing story but I was left
thinking, “Who cares.”
Again, your feedback is definitely solicited here.
OK, Literotica fans, I have over a hundred stories currently posted. Probably (but not certainly)
this feedback refers to one of the last dozen or so stories I submitted.. However, to which
story the feedback refers remains a mystery.
The feedback charges that my writing resembles grade school writing. Talk about the marijuana
calling the kettle black! (Make that the pot calling the kettle black!) The feedback is so
poorly written that I cannot even tell for sure exactly what it says. I suspect that the feedback
was written by someone on too much marijuana. (You didn’t think I could tie it all together
did you? Ah, ye of small faith!)
R. Richard
This message contains feedback for: R. Richard
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous
Comments:
I hate giving bad feedback, I really do but your story resembled grade
school writing, which was clinically written. The woman is being raped
and it could have been an arousing story but I was left thinking 'who
cares'.
*DO NOT hit the REPLY button to respond to this email.*
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
What I think I means (Your feedback is definitely solicited here):
I hate giving bad feedback, I really do. However, your clinically written story resembles grade
school writing. The woman is being raped and it could have been an arousing story but I was left
thinking, “Who cares.”
Again, your feedback is definitely solicited here.
OK, Literotica fans, I have over a hundred stories currently posted. Probably (but not certainly)
this feedback refers to one of the last dozen or so stories I submitted.. However, to which
story the feedback refers remains a mystery.
The feedback charges that my writing resembles grade school writing. Talk about the marijuana
calling the kettle black! (Make that the pot calling the kettle black!) The feedback is so
poorly written that I cannot even tell for sure exactly what it says. I suspect that the feedback
was written by someone on too much marijuana. (You didn’t think I could tie it all together
did you? Ah, ye of small faith!)
R. Richard