angel above

[fairiesecrets82]

i dress up
like a christmas toy

smokey eyes
and sexy lingerie

but im not good enough
...you say

i try so hard
why wont u let me be

i scream so loud
why can't u hear me

no one hears me-
but my angel up above

today is different from yesterday
i can feel it coming

i hear it in ur voice
i see it in ur eyes
u want to feel me between my thighs

i submit to you
cause i think ur sorry

but when ur done
u fight with me

what the fuck is with you?
why are this way?

do u love me?
or do u despise me?

what have I done to u?
nothing but what u have asked...

i give you my love...
i give you my passion...
my heart, my soul

and what do i get?
ur lies, ur rejection

i try so hard
why wont u let me be

i scream so loud
why can't u hear me

no one hears me-
but my angel up above

 

[fallengoddess82]

Very good poem... i wonder who its about ? lol...but either way i think its one of the best you've written, & not just b/c its about me, lol.

 

[fairiesecrets82]

just in case anyone is wondering...she means that the poem is about her and her husband.....i wanted to see if i could write about someone else's feelings....lol u had to let it be known didn't ya?

Very good poem... i wonder who its about ? lol...but either way i think its one of the best you've written, & not just b/c its about me, lol.

 

[BooMerengue]

i dress up
like a christmas toy

smokey eyes
and sexy lingerie

but im not good enough
...you say

i try so hard
why wont u let me be

i scream so loud
why can't u hear me

no one hears me-
but my angel up above

today is different from yesterday
i can feel it coming

i hear it in ur voice
i see it in ur eyes
u want to feel me between my thighs

i submit to you
cause i think ur sorry

but when ur done
u fight with me

what the fuck is with you?
why are this way?

do u love me?
or do u despise me?

what have I done to u?
nothing but what u have asked...

i give you my love...
i give you my passion...
my heart, my soul

and what do i get?
ur lies, ur rejection

i try so hard
why wont u let me be

i scream so loud
why can't u hear me

no one hears me-
but my angel up above

Do you want constructive comment on this poem or did you just want to post it?

 

[champagne1982]

Do you want constructive comment on this poem or did you just want to post it?

Hi Boo! How nice to see that all is well in Mississippi!

I'm not sure what fairiesecrets wants from the forum. This is her second thread in as many days, so I guess I'll just wait and see.

 

[fairiesecrets82]

Hi Boo! How nice to see that all is well in Mississippi!

I'm not sure what fairiesecrets wants from the forum. This is her second thread in as many days, so I guess I'll just wait and see.

it doesn't matter to me....whatever people would like to say about it....i just like to be heard