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[loquere]

I was editing MY story. (BECAUSE NO ONE RESPONDED TO MY REQUEST) I took out a "and" out of a speaking text.

I had the idea that know one really says, "and" out loud while their broching another subject, do they?

 

[blobfish]

I thought this was going to be another thread about me.

 

[neci]

was editing a story and well I took out a "and" out of of chracters speaking text. becuase I was like know one says and out loud while there broching another subject, do they?

just stop.

 

[Lorilei]

was editing a story and well I took out a "and" out of of chracters speaking text. becuase I was like know one says and out loud while there broching another subject, do they?

Um....you write like this and you were editing a story?

 

[Image]

was editing a story and well I took out a "and" out of of chracters speaking text. becuase I was like know one says and out loud while there broching another subject, do they?

The who and the what did where, now?

 

[Saint Peter]

...a man can paint a thousand pictures
and still not be a painter...

 

[loquere]

Um....you write like this and you were editing a story?

It's my story if you look I've asked for help but yall seem keen talking shit instead!

 

[loquere]

The who and the what did where, now?

Blah blah blah fuck off!

 

[loquere]

...a man can paint a thousand pictures
and still not be a painter...

Like I said i was searching for a editor, it's my story. Y'all have anything real to say!

 

[loquere]

The who and the what did where, now?

Did not read this over before i submitted and i think i was clear enough, so i'm still not looking it over.

 

[loquere]

Um....you write like this and you were editing a story?

Like I said it's my story. And I did not go over my post!

 

[desertslave]

It's my story; if you look I've asked for help, but ya'll seem keen on talking shit instead!

Here ya go!

There's a whole group on Lit to match editors with authors. You would have more success posting there.

 

[loquere]

Here ya go!

There's a whole group on Lit to match editors with authors. You would have more success posting there.

Yeah I know the story's seen 3 editors from the editors program. All great but i've made changes but have caught errors. It's a realy long story too i submitted it and pulled it after seeing word choice errors and other things. Like a I in a sentence that should only be there for a first person story!

 

[Image]

Yeah I know the story's seen 3 editors from the editors program. All great but i've made changes but have caught errors. It's a realy long story too i submitted it and pulled it after seeing word choice errors and other things. Like a I in a sentence that should only be there for a first person story!

They probably shot themselves after the first page. There's only so much help an editor can take...

 

[loquere]

They probably shot themselves after the first page. There's only so much help an editor can take...

My editors did a great job. I'm an awfull editor. However I'm not going to apolojize for not polishing my sentences on a forum

SO YOU SHOULD GOT HOME AND KILL YOURSELF!!!

 

[loquere]

Die!!!!!

 

[loquere]

Die.!!!!

 

[loquere]

Die!!!!.

 

[loquere]

Die..!!!

 

[loquere]

Die!!..!!

 

[Image]

My editors did a great job. I'm an awfull editor. However I'm not going to apolojize for not polishing my sentences on a forum

SO YOU SHOULD GOT HOME AND KILL YOURSELF!!!

Are you going to have a stroke?

 

[loquere]

Die!!!!!!!!!

 

[loquere]

Die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[loquere]

Die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[loquere]

Die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!