An Unexpected Visit (closed for goddessofdarkness)

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Half a year ago, Zack Franklin started email and instant messenger correspondence with an eighteen year old woman in Tokyo. He’d never seen her before, but her description he found interesting. Talking with her had been interesting and entertaining, and he had come to like her very much. They’d told each other a lot, and knew each other fairly well. He was fairly certain that she was very careful about everything, and rather unemotional in real life. He also knew she lived with several other young men and women. Still, he hadn’t heard from her in several days. He lived in an old farmhouse in the midwest, on a lrage amount of property. It had a fireplace in a large living room, and several bedrooms. Unfortunately, he only had one furnished. He didn’t get many guests. He had just gotten in with a large number of groceries. He’d put them away, and then started a fire in the hearth, when he heard his doorbell ring. He shook his head, then sighed, and stood up. He walked across the living room, into the foyer, and up to the door. He unlocked it, than opened it, only to find himself face to face with two very beautiful women, both completely soaked from the rain, and carrying duffelbags. He blinked, confused, then asked The Question. “Can I help you two lovely ladies?”.

He didn't recognize Rei, as he hadn't yet seen what she looked like. He had to admit, both young women were gorgeous. He guessed their age to be in somewhere between eightteen and twenty-one. Whoever they were, they weren't dressed for the weather. They were wearing knee-length skirts and light tops, as if they had expected the weather to be bright and sunny. Of course, they were both drenched, and his mind was screaming 'let them in out of the rain, you dumbfuck', but he was a bit suspicious. Especially because they both had duffelbags, as if they were looking for a place to stay.
 
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Rei

Moving from Japan was a choice I had to make because my asshole of a boyfriend had the balls to fuck around. Coming here to America was a excelent choice..I have never seen what Zack looks like, but I knew I had to run to him. He'd understand, and accept me for who I am..I knew this. Being a cold person at times, I hate when people get emotional around me. My one and only true friend, I love her..but we have never moved the relationship up to any other then friendship..she'd be the only woman I'd ever think to sleep with. I love her body..her being a redhead helped alot too. She was hot..having great tits..and a great ass and body..I'd fuck her in a heartbeat. But I do still love guys too..maybe we can be together, all three of us...


Name-Rei
Age-18
Discription-5'5, 156..34c..long smooth legs..very fair, silky skin..light blue eyes.
 
OOC: bumped...will edit with a post once SilveryAngel fixes hers...unless Goddess posts too
 
goddessofdarkness said:
OOC Silvery will edit hers in a bit..she had to run out again..grr she's freakin nuts..lol

OOC: lol. you on yahoo?
 
OOC: it's okay, we'll wait...i think instead of editting, i'll just quote your post and do a new one, unless goddess wants me to wait
 
SilveryAngel76 said:
OOC Go ahead and do that..Goddess won't mind, she's very flexible ...

OOC: you'd better hurry though, if you want me to respond tonight...because i plan on going to bed after showdolly posts as Dytto on my Spirit King thread
 
eep...SilveryAngel has decided to drop out of this thread...Goddess, did you still have that one gal lined up?
 
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Half a year ago, Zack Franklin started email and instant messenger correspondence with an eighteen year old woman in Tokyo. He’d never seen her before, but her description he found interesting. Talking with her had been interesting and entertaining, and he had come to like her very much. They’d told each other a lot, and knew each other fairly well. He was fairly certain that she was very careful about everything, and rather unemotional in real life. He also knew she lived with several other young men and women. One of them was her best friend, even though the woman in question had stolen her boyfriend. He found that a little odd, that she'd be so forgiving, but then again, he didn't think anyone could truly understand women. Still, he hadn’t heard from her in several days. He lived in an old farmhouse in the midwest, on a large amount of property. It had a fireplace in a large living room, and several bedrooms. Unfortunately, he only had one furnished.

He didn’t get many guests. He had just gotten in with a large number of groceries. He’d put them away, and then started a fire in the hearth, when he heard his doorbell ring. He shook his head, then sighed, and stood up. He walked across the living room, into the foyer, and up to the door. He unlocked it, than opened it, only to find himself face to face with two very beautiful women, both completely soaked from the rain, and carrying duffelbags. He blinked, confused, then asked The Question. “Can I help you two lovely ladies?”.

He didn't recognize Rei, as he hadn't yet seen what she looked like. He had to admit, both young women were gorgeous. He guessed their age to be in somewhere between eightteen and twenty-one. Whoever they were, they weren't dressed for the weather. They were wearing knee-length skirts and light tops, as if they had expected the weather to be bright and sunny. Of course, they were both drenched, and his mind was screaming 'let them in out of the rain, you dumbfuck', but he was a bit suspicious. Especially because they both had duffelbags, as if they were looking for a place to stay.
 
I am puzzled for a moment, then realize that my friend Zack has never seen him. Come to think of it, I don't know if this is him, either.

I bow shyly, grasping the hand of my best friend because I am suddenly a bit uncertain. "<Greetings.> I am looking for Zack Franklin."

I hope it is him, because we are soaked and because he is very good looking. I am uncomfortable, most especially because my bra can be clearly seen through my top. I am grateful that my skirt is dark! I release the security of Asuka's hand and cross my arms over my breasts, shivering a little, waiting for an answer from this handsome young American.
 
purpleproserose said:
I am puzzled for a moment, then realize that my friend Zack has never seen him. Come to think of it, I don't know if this is him, either.

I bow shyly, grasping the hand of my best friend because I am suddenly a bit uncertain. "<Greetings.> I am looking for Zack Franklin."

I hope it is him, because we are soaked and because he is very good looking. I am uncomfortable, most especially because my bra can be clearly seen through my top. I am grateful that my skirt is dark! I release the security of Asuka's hand and cross my arms over my breasts, shivering a little, waiting for an answer from this handsome young American.

I blinked for a few moments, then realized who you are. "Rei? Rei, what are you doing here? Wait, where are my manners. Come in, please. You'll have to warm up by the fire. I don't have any dry clothes that would fit you though, so I hope you brought some. You can both change into them while I make some hot tea, and some soup if you're interested." I could tell you were a little uncomfortable, and that your friend was a little lost at the moment, but I was glad that you spoke English. Not that I couldn't speak Japanese, but sometimes I liked to use my native tongue. I ushered the two of you in, one hand on each of your shoulders, and steered you towards the fireplace, where a large faketigerskin rug was laid out. Then I headed into the kitchen to get you something warm.
 
I bow my head again and grab my duffle bag. I head to the inviting warmth of the fire, kneeling on the rug. You hear a cry of dismay, though, as I dig into my bag and find out that all of my other clothes are soaked, too. From her reaction, I gather that my dear friend is finding the same. I look at her, wondering what we will do.

I move closer to the fire, but I’m really shivering now.
 
purpleproserose said:
I bow my head again and grab my duffle bag. I head to the inviting warmth of the fire, kneeling on the rug. You hear a cry of dismay, though, as I dig into my bag and find out that all of my other clothes are soaked, too. From her reaction, I gather that my dear friend is finding the same. I look at her, wondering what we will do.

I move closer to the fire, but I’m really shivering now.

I blink, hearing a cry of dismay coming from both of you. I turn to look at you, and raise an eyebrow, watching you dig through your bag. Then I realize why. Your bags are completely soaked through, which means so are your clothes. I was afraid of something like that, as I looked out at the rain. I have no idea what I can do, though. I could probably spare a couple of pairs of boxers and Tees, but I don't know if they'll fit the two of you.
 
Asuka Langly Soryu...

Standing there shivering behind Rei, I'm thinking about the fast way we left home. Some guys are such assholes..catching Shinji with his pants down, enjoying his cock being sucked by our teacher of all people! I was in shock..but Rei took it harder. My poor sweet friend..even tho I did the same, I comfort her..I love her, she is the only girl I'd even sleep with. I've been secretly in love with her since we were both young. I fantasize about her alot, I can't help it, she's so beautiful! I peek around Rei trying to see this Zack person that Rei dragged me to..So far America has been interesting, but not as interesting as this mystery man Rei didn't even tell me about! All of a sudden she wants to go to the States, confusing as all this is I would follow her anywhere. Standing there wet and cold, I look about myself taking in the size of his home..I guess it's a big old cottage or something. Not much to see through all the rain tho.


Stepping inside, where it was so warm, I put my heavy, wet dufflebag down with a loud..thump..Looking around it I notice the fireplace.." Oh that is so beautiful Sir!" I go over to it and check it out. "Rei look, I love this!" being excited has my slightly tilted, almond shaped eyes sparkling. I move back over and retrieve my bag..taking it back to the fireplace..setting it on the chair infront of it. Taking a brush out of her bag.." Rei oh, come here..your hair is messy..let's get cleaned up..um Zack is it?" I look over at this...like American GOD! I smile teasingly at him..licking my full pouty lower lip.." We do need dry clothing..and maybe a towel?" My eyes being dark brown, they sparkle with a mysterious teasing light..I smile again...
 
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I have to smile. Asuko is such a flirt. I can easily see why... well, I try not to think about it. I smile at her and scoot up close, back to her, letting her brush my hair. I love that. Having my hair brushed is such a sensual thing for me. Gets me excited every time . . . but I can't tell her that.

I close my eyes as the hairbrush strokes my hair. My nipples harden, but I don't try to do anything to hide them, since I have the perfect excuse that I am cold. I just enjoy Asuko's attentions, keeping my little secret to myself.

Glancing up at Zack, I wonder if he has any idea.
 
purpleproserose said:
I have to smile. Asuko is such a flirt. I can easily see why... well, I try not to think about it. I smile at her and scoot up close, back to her, letting her brush my hair. I love that. Having my hair brushed is such a sensual thing for me. Gets me excited every time . . . but I can't tell her that.

I close my eyes as the hairbrush strokes my hair. My nipples harden, but I don't try to do anything to hide them, since I have the perfect excuse that I am cold. I just enjoy Asuko's attentions, keeping my little secret to myself.

Glancing up at Zack, I wonder if he has any idea.

I raise an eyebrow, watching the two of you. The lustful looks the two of you give me sends a thrill through me. As I watch you two, in your short skirts and tight, wet blouses, I feel myself harden in my pants. Then I consider. "Well, I have some spare boxers and a few oversized Tees. I suppose you could wear those. I just realized, however, that I only have one bed. You two are going to have to share it, I suppose. I'll have to sleep on the couch." I start for a door off of the living room, and open it. I go inside, and rummage around for a few moments, before coming out with a couple of pairs of silk boxers with prints on them, and a couple of big, baggy tee shirts.
 
I giggle softly as I brush Rei's beautiful short blonde locks. I love her hair..it's so bright and shiney..I love touching it, feeling it's texture. Running my fingers nimbly thru it, I brush it all out..as it dries. Catching my low lip between my teeth as I make sure I don't pull too hard. " I guess we have to wait till our clothing dry too. We can take the bed..we're used to it.." I smile softly at Rei..winking at her playfully. I giggle " Maybe we can wrestle later too!" Being a teasing and playful person, It's always been easy for me to meet people. I've always been open and playful with everyone I meet... Taking the brush I hand it to Rei..giggling " My turn!" turning around I give her my back...My long brown tresses are kinda sticking to my head..." I look like a drowned rats!" I laugh at my own jokes too.
 
I smile shyly and take the brush as my friend presents her back to me. Her hair is very tangled, so I start at the bottom. I wouldn't want to make it any less silky than it is--it is heavenly. I look at Zack as he presents the clothes to us.

"Thank you," I smile, taking them. "You should not be kicked out of your bed though. I should take the couch, or I can sleep by the fire." I give a respectful bow of my head, and continue my gentle brushing of Asuko's beautiful hair. I blush a little as I think of how good that hair would feel on my breasts, but I keep my thoughts to myself. How can I tell my friend that I want to make love to her? She would laugh at me. I steal a glance at Zack, too, and I see that he is excited.

I don't blame him. My friend is so beautiful.
 
I smile, watching as you two as you brush each other's hair. I think for a few moments, then nod. "You can use the bedroom to change, unless you'd prefer to do so in the bathroom, or somewhere else. As for the bed...It would be rude of me to force one of you two lovely ladies to sleep on the floor or the couch. You two are sharing the bed. End of story. Is there anything the two of you need?" I smile again, knowing that the brushing of hair, like the washing of it, is a very pleasurable, erotic experience. And you two look like you're enjoying yourself, so I don't really want to be a third wheel.
 
As she touches my hair..my whole body shivers..I tried my hardest to supress it but failed..and I knew Rei felt it, with her being so close to me. I look over my shoulder..I see her shy smile, and I wink at her..trying to make her feel relaxed. " I guess we get the bed then after all" I giggle at Rei. I look down a moment and notice her hard nipples thru her wet blouse..I look back up to her face which is bright red now..I turn back around so she can finish my hair..I start to imagine her beside me in bed..It'd feel so nice to cuddle with her..thinking about touching her has me slightly warm..my nipples start to harden, pressing against wet top and giving me more chills...
 
I stretch out a leg beside Asuko's, leaving my other one folded in, half monk style. I blush furiously when she turns and sees my hard nipples. I am embarrassed that they show even through my bra. I bring the brush up to the front of her head, but it catches, and I don't want to pull her pretty hair.

I crawl around, kneeling in front of her, to work on the front, standing on my knees at certain points, careful not to cause any rats in her fine locks.

"Zack, please come and sit with us." I reach out to you. "How are you, my friend?" I cannot say what I mean. I would rather say, 'handsome friend'. Sometimes I hate being shy.

"I mean no disrespect, but I must insist that you not give us your bed. It would be rude of us to take your only bed, when we are uninvited."
 
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