jes_da_man
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Howdy ya'll,
LittleOne and I were surfing Literotica, and found (If we are in any sense of the word... correct.) that authors could come here and submit
ideas, and decided to do just that by making an offer.
Below, is the beginning of an erotic story that we begun a while back... but for some reason or
another,never quite got around to finishing... and wondered if there were any brave souls with
writing experience that would like to take a stab at finishing it.
If you are interested, all we ask is that you please notify us via a private message... and
include in your submission, our participation in the creation of the story.
Of course, any necessary changes in story structure, syntax and grammar may be made, as
long as it does not alter the theme of the story. If you have read any… or all of the three part
‘The Magic’ series, then you will be well acquainted with the theme.
Links to 'The Magic' series:
The Magic
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=488713
The Magic (The Mysterious Lover.)
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=506991
The Magic (The New Birth.)
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=506991
We very much look forward to a possible completion of this story by anyone who is interested.
Any and all comments and/or feedback are welcome and appreciated (Even from the trolls... as long as they're done with crap empty minds and/or mouths.)
Sincerely,
LittleOne & jes_da_man
Lavender
Written by LittleOne
Edited by jes_da_man
Monday, June 10, 2002 - 02:33:03 PM
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She walks softly across the room... pacing.. Waiting...
Having just bathed, her breasts strain against the soft fabric of the robe she had carelessly
thrown over her naked body after the bath. The spicy aroma of the lavender drifts in the air
and from her heated body. She leans her forehead against the cool glass of the window, and
with her eyes closed, she listens for him.
In her sadness, she asks herself,."Where is he? Where is my Owlie? Will he come to me
tonight? Will he take me with him this time, or leave me behind again to long for his touch?"
Getting no answer, she moans, "God, I need him so. My body aches for his kisses." With this,
her hands begin to wander across her body, causing sweet memories of moments past.
Leaning there against the glass as she waits for him, the sensations provoked by her fingers,
caused her mind to drift off to other times. She remembers the night he took her to the inn in
the next county. They ate a fine meal and sipped on wine. Soon, she was giddy from the
wine... and resisted only a bit for virtue sake when he picked her up to carry her up the stairs
to their room. She could hear someone in the inn laughing as he made a rude comment about
squeaking beds. She blushed but did not stop him from closing the door behind him.
He gently put her on the bed and stood before her, his smile crooked and seemingly just a bit
wicked. Cat looked at her lover and waited for him to tell her what to do. But he remained
silent, and only responded by slowly removing his jacket before he turned away from her. He
walked to the door and locked it. She sat up and took the pins from her hair. Her long blonde
curls tumbled past her waist. When he turned and saw her there, the sight took his breath
away. It seemed as if a shimmering aura surrounded her... a dream. She looked like a dream.
He could not help but just stand there and admire her radiant beauty, until he finally shook his
head to clear his senses... and moved toward her. She stood and reached for her love, and he
took her in his arms.
"Cat, you are my love." he whispered in her ear.
He kissed her ear and listened to her purr like a kitten. She was so soft in his arms... the fit
was perfection. As if she was born to be in his arms. He then leaned down and kissed the
small hollow of her throat. Moving down, he spread open her dress and exposed her firm, yet
soft breasts. They were large for her small body... almost too large. But he loved them....
Cupping one in each hand he kissed one then the other. Her nipples hardened. He bit at them
gently, chuckling as she groaned. Her hands were wrapped in his hair, pulling him closer to
her chest.
His hands moved to her shoulders and slipped the dress from her body. His eyes followed the
downward motion and heard the whisper of the fabric as it surrounded her feet and landed in
a heap on the floor. When he raised his head to look at her, again his breath was taken from
him. She stood there entirely naked.
All this time she had been naked beneath the dress... while they were eating.... and on the
ride here to the inn... if he had known this ... oh God! He knew he would not have been able to
have contained himself.
Without hesitation, he quickly dropped to his knees and hungrily buried his face between her
legs, only to be engulfed by the smell of her sweet scent...
Lavender...
LittleOne and I were surfing Literotica, and found (If we are in any sense of the word... correct.) that authors could come here and submit
ideas, and decided to do just that by making an offer.
Below, is the beginning of an erotic story that we begun a while back... but for some reason or
another,never quite got around to finishing... and wondered if there were any brave souls with
writing experience that would like to take a stab at finishing it.
If you are interested, all we ask is that you please notify us via a private message... and
include in your submission, our participation in the creation of the story.
Of course, any necessary changes in story structure, syntax and grammar may be made, as
long as it does not alter the theme of the story. If you have read any… or all of the three part
‘The Magic’ series, then you will be well acquainted with the theme.
Links to 'The Magic' series:
The Magic
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=488713
The Magic (The Mysterious Lover.)
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=506991
The Magic (The New Birth.)
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=506991
We very much look forward to a possible completion of this story by anyone who is interested.
Any and all comments and/or feedback are welcome and appreciated (Even from the trolls... as long as they're done with crap empty minds and/or mouths.)
Sincerely,
LittleOne & jes_da_man
Lavender
Written by LittleOne
Edited by jes_da_man
Monday, June 10, 2002 - 02:33:03 PM
--------------------------------------
She walks softly across the room... pacing.. Waiting...
Having just bathed, her breasts strain against the soft fabric of the robe she had carelessly
thrown over her naked body after the bath. The spicy aroma of the lavender drifts in the air
and from her heated body. She leans her forehead against the cool glass of the window, and
with her eyes closed, she listens for him.
In her sadness, she asks herself,."Where is he? Where is my Owlie? Will he come to me
tonight? Will he take me with him this time, or leave me behind again to long for his touch?"
Getting no answer, she moans, "God, I need him so. My body aches for his kisses." With this,
her hands begin to wander across her body, causing sweet memories of moments past.
Leaning there against the glass as she waits for him, the sensations provoked by her fingers,
caused her mind to drift off to other times. She remembers the night he took her to the inn in
the next county. They ate a fine meal and sipped on wine. Soon, she was giddy from the
wine... and resisted only a bit for virtue sake when he picked her up to carry her up the stairs
to their room. She could hear someone in the inn laughing as he made a rude comment about
squeaking beds. She blushed but did not stop him from closing the door behind him.
He gently put her on the bed and stood before her, his smile crooked and seemingly just a bit
wicked. Cat looked at her lover and waited for him to tell her what to do. But he remained
silent, and only responded by slowly removing his jacket before he turned away from her. He
walked to the door and locked it. She sat up and took the pins from her hair. Her long blonde
curls tumbled past her waist. When he turned and saw her there, the sight took his breath
away. It seemed as if a shimmering aura surrounded her... a dream. She looked like a dream.
He could not help but just stand there and admire her radiant beauty, until he finally shook his
head to clear his senses... and moved toward her. She stood and reached for her love, and he
took her in his arms.
"Cat, you are my love." he whispered in her ear.
He kissed her ear and listened to her purr like a kitten. She was so soft in his arms... the fit
was perfection. As if she was born to be in his arms. He then leaned down and kissed the
small hollow of her throat. Moving down, he spread open her dress and exposed her firm, yet
soft breasts. They were large for her small body... almost too large. But he loved them....
Cupping one in each hand he kissed one then the other. Her nipples hardened. He bit at them
gently, chuckling as she groaned. Her hands were wrapped in his hair, pulling him closer to
her chest.
His hands moved to her shoulders and slipped the dress from her body. His eyes followed the
downward motion and heard the whisper of the fabric as it surrounded her feet and landed in
a heap on the floor. When he raised his head to look at her, again his breath was taken from
him. She stood there entirely naked.
All this time she had been naked beneath the dress... while they were eating.... and on the
ride here to the inn... if he had known this ... oh God! He knew he would not have been able to
have contained himself.
Without hesitation, he quickly dropped to his knees and hungrily buried his face between her
legs, only to be engulfed by the smell of her sweet scent...
Lavender...
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