An Interesting Fantasy Idea

[Shendude]

Here's the set up for the story:

The vast realm of Arlim is a chaotic land, filled with millions of polities, and all manner of wonders, and terrors. The peaople of Arlim are kept safe and the nations kept at peace, by the actions of Hani Jome, a heroine who possesses a mind of great brilliance, a heart of great compassion, a spirit of great courage, and (most importantly for our purposes) a face and body of great beauty.

Now, Arlim is surrounded by three great Empires of great power that exist in a state of perpetual Cold War: Oriah, Bisail, and Shir. The King of Bisail (called Bisail) learns of Hani and falls madly in love with her. In order to win her, he has a massive army invade Arlim. Then he sends messengers to Hani that if she'll marry him and become his Queen, he'll pull back his forces. If she won't, then said army will destroy Arlim and take her as a slave-concubine for his harem. Realizing that Arlim doesn't stand a chance againt the Bisailan army, Hani agrees.

However, the Kings of Oriah and Shir (called Oriah and Shir, respectively) learn of Bisail's obssesion and decide to hurt him by capturing Hani first, and send troops to attack the caravan carrying her. However, they both have different intentions towards her. Oriah intends to make her a concubine-pet. Shir intends to make her a slave-concubine, and whore her out to his army.



Incidentally, I'd intially intended this as a fanfic involving the comic book character Jonni Future. But I think it works better this way.

(P. S.: Is it unseemely for me to ask what people think of my new avatar?)

 

[Sean Renaud]

Interesting idea. I think it would work a little better if you rped it out first with somebody. Regarding the avatar I love Deacon Black's work. I wish I could find some current stuff. It is a good avatar under normal circumstances. I just think he does much better work than the one you chose.

 

[Shendude]

Interesting idea. I think it would work a little better if you rped it out first with somebody. Regarding the avatar I love Deacon Black's work. I wish I could find some current stuff. It is a good avatar under normal circumstances. I just think he does much better work than the one you chose.

I know, but I couldn't get the one I really wanted to fit. Too many bites.

 

[Sean Renaud]

ah...

 

[Shendude]

Interesting idea. I think it would work a little better if you rped it out first with somebody.

Erm, what?

 

[emap]

I think he's talking take it to the roleplaying section post your idea there get some people to go in with you and let it run. Not a bad idea, but of course it would probably go in ways you don't like much and take longer than you may wish.

 

[Shendude]

I think he's talking take it to the roleplaying section post your idea there get some people to go in with you and let it run.

Hrmm. (I wish there was a thoughtful smilie)

Erm, How do I do that exatcyl? And which Roleplaying section? There are two.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Well since it is a sexual story probably the SRP section of the site. If you are an AoL fan you might be able to just get a select group. Or even here start up the thing but close it for only a group of people, preferably one for each charachter. I'd be more than happy to help if you need.

 

[Shendude]

Well since it is a sexual story probably the SRP section of the site. If you are an AoL fan you might be able to just get a select group. Or even here start up the thing but close it for only a group of people, preferably one for each charachter. I'd be more than happy to help if you need.

Hmm, well, I'd like the help.

First off I'd need to figure out characters. Obviously, there'd be Hani, Bisail, Oriah, and Shir, but there ought to be some royal minions here and there.

 

[Shendude]

Well, I started the RP: https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=384130