An idea for a new story

[gystex]

I was watching "101 Most Shocking Moments in Entertainment" the other day, and came across the one about Heidi Fleiss' arrest and subsequent trial. That gave me an idea.



There are several celebrity stories on CHYOO, but one thing they all have in common is a problem with believability. Most of them don't even pretend they're plausible, we simply accept that, for instance, one might be invited to a Hollywood party that turns into an orgy, or get lucky in Britney Spears' dressing room, or get invited to a strip club featuring celebrity performers, or what have you. But Heidi Fleiss really existed, and really did provide escorts to the stars.

So my idea is this: a story wherein we assume that someone else took over the business, and is still offering high-class prostitutes to Hollywood big shots. The central character is one of the employees. One chooses one's gender and preferences first in a four-choice spread (male-hetero, female-hetero, male-bi, female-bi) and the story proceeds from there with any celebrities we wish.

And it's actually believable! Hell, I'm of a mind that something much like it is actually happening - I can't imagine that after almost twenty years, no one has stepped into Heidi's shoes and filled that market.

Now, if I were to write this story, I'd want to share the editorial priviledges. I have said before that I don't like doing m/m stuff, but I think it has a place in such a story. Likewise, I'm not thrilled about doing f/m stuff from the woman's point of view.

If someone, or mulitple someones, would be interested in sharing the editorship with me on such a tale, I will write up a first paragraph and we can have some star-studded fun!

 

[jakelyon]

Sounds Good

I'm all for it. If I can help let me know. I could handle either the MF thread chains. Sounds like fun. I agree that the problem with most of the stories is the unreality (like anything on Chyoo is real). For some reason I have a hard time getting into the celeb stories as well for the same reason.

Let me know.

 

[gystex]

Thank you, Jake. I will happily share editorship with you.

Any other takers?

 

[jakelyon]

Side Note

As a side not your AV's are nice, really enjoyed the last one, but then I have a nipple fetish. Keep putting up goods ones.

Thanks.

 

[niceguy2002tim]

hello,
first off I wanted to agree with Jake, your avs are nice. The one you currently have up is very sexy. I think I perfere the "teaser" ones that only show a part of th scene.

On to the topic at hand. As far as fan-fiction and celeb stories go, I have never been drawn to them. I don't know if this one would be different or not. I will read the introduction and a little of it, to see if I like it or not. I can't say I'd add to it, but who knows. When a story is something different than it catches my attention.

I actually tried to write a celeb story myself. However, it wasn't approved. In the story the main character was a hitman who would recieve large sums of money to do things to celebrities. The story didn't fly because it contained "non-consentual" violence. I still love the idea, and would like to be able to use it. However Chyoo won't allow that. I remember one thing that happened in the story, the hitman recalls the time he was paid to beat Justin Timberlake to within an inch of his life with an 18" double sided dildo. I still laugh over that.

Again, back to this story. Go for it Gystex. It may be another one of your hits. As, I've enjoyed your previous stories.

-Tim (niceguy2002tim)

 

[deathofcards]

I tend to steer clear of the fanfics as most of the are very dumb concept wise, even if the content is good. Green Knight's Unplanned Vacation is a good example of that.

It sounds like an interesting idea for a story Gystex. If you go ahead with it and write I'd be tempted to write for it as it deals with some of the more seedier and darker elements of society. Which is always something I enjoy writing about. Although if I do I'll more likely add to the M/F stuff as I've not made any attempts to write lesbian stuff just yet.

I also quite like your AV's I liked the one of the women in stockings, whcih you were using about 2 AV's ago I think. I've now got enough posts for an AV unfortunatly my picture is too damn big.

 

[gystex]

I'm glad everyone likes the Av's! I make them by selecting bits and pieces from my collection of downloaded lesbian porn (I have over 50,000 images) and cutting out just the crucial elements, rendering the models anonymous. Each time I use one, I delete it from my hard drive (the small cutout, not the original picture) so I'm sure that I won't use the same one twice. I have about a hundred images in the on-deck circle, and at the pace I've been replacing them online that should last for about three years.

 

[gystex]

The following is the text submitted to CHYOO for the introductory thread of "Blue Diamond Escorts". It has not yet been approved.


For two years, Adrian Jones had been working for Blue Diamond Escorts, unquestionably the most prestigious and exclusive such agency on the planet. Blue Diamond was for the cream of the crop: the richest, most powerful, most famous people in the world. Movie stars, senators, foreign dignataries, captains of industry, these were the clientele that Blue Diamond served. Just to be put on their list of customers required a security deposit that could have purchased a Ferrari.

Adrian was an escort, and after the required training period, one of the best and most promising new faces the agency had seen for some time. Already having provided companionship and (to be brutally honest) eye candy for some of Hollywood's brightest and America's wealthiest, Adrian had created quite a stir within Blue Diamond, and as such was not surprised to be called to the head office for a "Midnight Meeting" as they were called.

Still, there was some cause to be nervous, as it was rumored that some escorts called into the presence of Ms. Melinda Hayes were never seen again. However, that was far and away the exception to the rule - most came out of such private meetings with elevated standing, considerably improved commissions, and a generally more elite status among the escort corps. So, it was with mixed feelings of excitement and trepidation that Adrian rode up the elevator to the penthouse suite where Ms. Hayes lived and ran the Blue Diamond enterprise.

At the top floor a pair of bodyguards met Adrian; one male, one female, both dressed in fitted black uniforms and carrying what looked to be rifle-sized tasers. "State your business," they said simultaneously, even though they knew perfectly well what Adrian was doing there.

"I have an appointment with Ms. Hayes."

"She is expecting you. Please accompany us."

The guards led Adrian down the short hallway to the ornate double doors at the far end, which opened automatically upon their arrival. Swallowing down a nervous lump, Adrian entered the lavishly decorated suite.

"Ah, Adrian!" called a voice from the upper level. Melinda Hayes strode down the stairs, dressed in a pure white suit, obviously custom-fitted and of an ideal style that displayed her femininity without compromising her corporate attitude. "Do come in. I had a feeling from the day we hired you that we would someday be having this meeting. May I offer you a drink?"

"Whatever you have will be fine," Adrian replied.

"I prefer white wine." Ms. Hayes snapped her fingers, and a young woman appeared with two glasses on a tray. Taking one, she sat in a large and elegant chair and motioned for Adrian to do the same. "I can imagine what's going through your mind right now," Ms. Hayes said. "You're curious, wondering what this is about. Perhaps you've heard rumors that give you more cause for alarm, or you're facing this meeting with optimism. Rest assured that there is no reason for apprehension. The fact that you are here is to your credit, not your detriment. Only my finest escorts are invited to such meetings."

"I'm pleased to hear it."

"Allow me to tell you some of the history of this agency which you have not previously been aware of," Ms. Hayes continued. "Blue Diamond Escorts is, as you know, the finest agency of its type in the world today. We began as a much smaller and certainly less prestigious operation based out of Las Vegas, where we built our clientele due to our well-earned reputation of absolute confidentiality. Still, we remained essentially a small operation until November of 1998. That was when Hollywood's most infamous... shall we say, escort provider... was released from prison having served twenty months in prison for tax evasion. Do you know of whom I speak?"

"Heidi Fleiss," Adrian said.

"Of course. You probably remember the uproar that was caused at the time over her 'little black book' of clients. In the end, the only name of note that was revealed was Charlie Sheen, which didn't actually surprise a lot of people. What was not known is what happened to the full, unabridged list of clients that was never revealed to the public. That list actually came into the posession of Blue Diamond Escorts upon Ms. Fleiss' release from prison, and it is from that list that we have built this agency to the pinnacle you see today.

"Until this moment, you have been involved solely in the more public side of the company, the legal escort service that serves as a shield for our true purpose. Under this cover, we operate, advertise, pay our taxes. What I am inviting you into today is the inner circle of Blue Diamond, where we provide far more intimate services for our clients. As one of our finest escorts, you have earned this opportunity. I will be perfectly blunt: you are being asked tonight if you would be willing to make the transition from high-class escort to a member of the world's oldest profession."

Adrian was speechless.

"If you accept, you can expect a tripling of your current commissions as well as other benefits, to reflect both upon the more strenuous and exotic duties that you will be called upon to perform, and to ensure that you have considerable incentive to maintain confidentiality - which, of course, is absolutely essential considering the clients we work with. This is all I can tell you now until I have your answer, and you should be aware that you will not be permitted to leave this room until I have it. What you have heard about people disappearing after meetings such as this one is, in fact, true. If you refuse, you will meet the same fate as theirs: a generous pension, a one-way ticket to the South American destination of your choice, and... some assurance of your silence that it would be best not to dwell upon. That may sound harsh, but we cannot afford exposure.

"So, I put it to you plainly: Do you accept promotion?"

Adrian thought only briefly before saying, "I'd be very happy to."

Ms. Hayes smiled widely. "Wonderful! I'm so pleased. Now, you'll need two months of further training to enhance the necessary skills for your new job, and at least two weeks after that to introduce you around to our enhanced-service clients so that they can get to know you a bit. Believe me, the time will fly by. I think you'll find that you've made a very good decision today."

Adrian nodded and smiled, looking forward to this new opportunity.



The first four choices will be a matter of gender and sexual preference: Male or female, straight or bi. Notice that the opening thread is gender-neutral.

I was planning to write the next four threads myself. They will be fairly similar to each other, basically transitional threads that will set up the next choice, which should lead to the first celebrity encounters. Those are open to the public.

One difficulty I'm forseeing is that I thought it was possible to assign editorial powers to others - I now am not sure that is the case, or at least I don't see how to do it. If anyone can help me with that, it would be appreciated, especially since the Male-bi thread isn't likely to get off the ground without it and I would likely replace it with a female-lesbian one instead. While that would be great fun for me, it's a little redundant and I really wanted this story to appeal to as wide a range as possible.

Anyway, it should be up as soon as the CHYOO webmasters get around to it.

Cheers,

 

[brevdravis]

Whooaaaah!

Yeah, love it.

Just finished reading, and I can't wait till this is approved. I can already think of a little I'd like to add...

BTW: Gystex, I never got around to adding more to your stories because you never wrote me back regarding what was okay in your stories. So, you still totally against the idea of the twins in "doing the sorority" getting a little frisky? (Not full blown, but definate contact....)

Stuart

 

[gystex]

Re: Whooaaaah!

BTW: Gystex, I never got around to adding more to your stories because you never wrote me back regarding what was okay in your stories. So, you still totally against the idea of the twins in "doing the sorority" getting a little frisky? (Not full blown, but definate contact....)

Stuart

My apologies for not getting back with you. That must have been around the time that I got laid off, and took a two-month hiatus from CHYOOing in order to concentrate on the more vital problem of finding work.

As far as the twin's getting "frisky", I think it's a matter of degree. It bothers me to admit that after all my hardlining against the idea of incest, the idea actually turns me on a little. I could definitely handle it if they were sharing a guy between them, and they could undress each other to turn him on, and some kissing and limited tit play wouldn't be out of the question. I'd draw the line at genital contact, though.

Here's hoping to hear from you,

 

[gystex]

Here is the second thread of "Blue Diamond Escorts". It's essentially the same thread on all four initial choices, with gender-specific words adjusted accordingly. The following assumes the reader selected female.


The next two months were nothing less than a crash-course in the art of sexuality. Adrian had always thought of herself as pretty damn good in the sack, but rapidly learned that her level of expertise was something like a GED as compared to the Master's Degree she was to attain. She joined a small group of other escorts who had been similarly promoted on a charter flight to Amsterdam.

The first week concentrated solely on autoerotica. Adrian learned things about her own body that she had never imagined, discovered new erogenous zones, new ways of touching herself, new techniques for relaxing her mind, and calling forth erotic visions from her imagination to stimulate the process. The week went by in a blur of multiple orgasms, until she was a certified expert on her own body. She could bring herself to climax in seconds, or hold on the brink for indefinite periods. And she learned to get herself off under any circumstances, whether alone in a darkened room, in front of a crowded auditorium, or secretly in a crowded elevator.

Once she had mastered her own body, it was time to learn about others. Naturally that would take much longer, and she was told that it would in fact be a lifelong process as no two individuals responded sexually in the same way. However, there were some universal truths.

The next two weeks covered massage and acupressure techniques, working on both men and women. Naturally, the emphasis was on erogenous stimulation. Adrian learned how to bring her subject near to orgasm with the slightest touch in the right places, and the vital but often-overlooked skill of how to relax her lover after all was done.

Finally, the lessons turned to actual sex. Foreplay in all its forms, including practical lessons where Adrian practiced as both giver and receiver. She learned how to present herself to her lover for pleasure, how to offer it in return, how to give oral sex properly.

Then came the specializations. She took classes with a dominitrix who taught her how to be both a powerful mistress and a willing slave. She took acting classes to learn how to present herself in any number of roles: secretary, nurse, college co-ed, streetwalker, fashion model. She learned about all kinds of fetishes - some, to be honest, she found distasteful, but most of the classes were quite enjoyable.

"Finals week" was exhausting. The written tests came first, a whole day of filling in bubbles, short essays, and explaining diagrams. But they were nothing compared to the practicals. Througout the rest of the week, Adrian lost count of the number of people she had sex with; not just intercourse but any which way she could, in some positions she hadn't believed were really possible until she did them. On the last day, she gave her all in a two-hour freestyle demonstration where she simply pleased her partner as best she could while her instructors and fellow students observed via closed-circuit TV.

She graduated at the top of her class.

After a week's recuperation in Bermuda, Adrian returned to Las Vegas, where Melinda Hayes greeted her warmly.

"Welcome back, Adrian!" Ms. Hayes said, giving her a warm hug. "I hear you made quite an impression on our instructors. That's wonderful, absolutely wonderful."

"I had a good time," Adrian said with a smile.

"Well, we want you to enjoy your work. Now, I hope you don't mind, but since you're obviously doing so well we thought we'd accellerate the process a bit. Normally we would introduce you around to our more prestigious clients at this point, a process that takes about two weeks and which is, quite frankly, rather dull. However, we've decided that you're ready to jump in with both feet and get to work. I'm sure it hasn't escaped your attention that tomorrow night is the Academy Awards Ceremony. Well, Blue Diamond pretty much has a standing invitation to all the best parties afterward. I thought you might like to accompany me to one or two of them, and more than likely entertain your first paying customer that very night."

Adrian was delighted. "I'd love to," she exclaimed.


From this point on, the story is open to the reader to add new threads. Obviously, it begins with a fairly blank slate - the first two threads are almost entirely expositional stuff. I do hope that readers have the patience to get through that in order to reach the eventual juicy parts.

Anyway, once it's up, I'll spread the word on the Official Gystex Thread.

Cheers,

 

[gystex]

BULLETIN!!

I have had a simple idea for how I can create a story with multiple editors.

Introducing... Gystex2!

This new alter-ego was created solely to manage "Blue Diamond Escorts". Anyone who wishes to step up to the plate and share in the editing duties will be given the password to Gystex2's account. All e-mail alerts will continue to go to me, but if I find a thread that I do not wish to edit I will pass it on down the chain.

Naturally, anyone who wishes to be an editor on this story will need to have a certain level of command of the English language.

Anyone want to handle the male/male stuff? Jakelyon and I can do the rest.

 

[marmot]

edit role

Hi gystex,
to make someone editor of one (or all) of your stories should work like this (if it does what it says - haven´t tested it yet). Prerequisite: s/he must have contributed already to that story.

- go to My Home
- go to My Stories
- go to the story in question
- click on "view writers"
- go to the writer in question
- click on "edit role"
- update to editor for this story (or for all of your stories, if you like)

If you test, tell if it works, I´m curious!

and btw, I join the ranks of the admirers of your avs...

regards,
marmot

 

[brevdravis]

Great, thanks for the feedback.

Cool, looks like I'll be back to writing for that story again.....

I'll try not to get TOO intense with the twins.... (May steal a few Ideas from Zingibar too, but that's a little farther off....)

Stuart

 

[Zingiber]

Re: Great, thanks for the feedback.

Cool, looks like I'll be back to writing for that story again.....

I'll try not to get TOO intense with the twins.... (May steal a few Ideas from Zingiber too, but that's a little farther off....)

Stuart

Help yourself. I stole your first name for a character in my new pending story.

-Z

 

[Zingiber]

Re: BULLETIN!!

I have had a simple idea for how I can create a story with multiple editors.
...

Anyone want to handle the male/male stuff? Jakelyon and I can do the rest.

I'd be up for editing the male/bi threads. Are there some overall guidelines that you would want, to be comfortable with them being part of the story?

-Z

 

[brevdravis]

Cool....

Just as long as you don't have me screwing any animals or children....Have fun....



Actually this might be fun to see..... Can't wait. Be sure to tell me when it's approved.

Stuart

 

[Zingiber]

Re: Cool....

Just as long as you don't have me screwing any animals or children....Have fun....



Actually this might be fun to see..... Can't wait. Be sure to tell me when it's approved.

Stuart

While The Cat's Away is still pending Chyoo approval... It's up now!

In the story, "Stuart" is described a fellow who is off surfing in Australia. He lends one of the main characters a van (but what a van!) while he's gone. That's his only mention so far.

-Z

 

[Zingiber]

Any word?

Any word from the Chyoo site editors on Blue Diamond Escorts?

 

[gystex]

Re: Any word?

Any word from the Chyoo site editors on Blue Diamond Escorts?

Nope. I think I confused them by setting up the new account which didn't even turn out to be necessary. If worse comes to worse, I'll rename the story and re-submit it.