An editor's comments would be welcome

[geronimo_appleby]

Hi. I have submitted a few stories to the site, and have had a pretty fair response for the most part so far.
I like to feel that I have improved over the weeks and months and would now appreciate an editor's comments on my latest intended submission. It's at the intro stage, having just set the scene etc.
The story itself will be very predictable, and is being written on behalf of a third party. Due to that fact I am limited as to where I can take the story, but would appreciate a little assistance all the same.
If there is anyone who would be willing to point me (gently) in the right direction I would be grateful for an IM.
Regards.
Rick

 

[LadyCibelle]

Hi. I have submitted a few stories to the site, and have had a pretty fair response for the most part so far.
I like to feel that I have improved over the weeks and months and would now appreciate an editor's comments on my latest intended submission. It's at the intro stage, having just set the scene etc.
The story itself will be very predictable, and is being written on behalf of a third party. Due to that fact I am limited as to where I can take the story, but would appreciate a little assistance all the same.
If there is anyone who would be willing to point me (gently) in the right direction I would be grateful for an IM.
Regards.
Rick

Hi Rick,

Personally I can't involve myself in more work for the moment but I'm sure someone will see your request and answer to you. If not, send me a PM in a few days and I'll try to squeeze you in my very busy schedule.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Thanks

Ok, thanks for that.

 

[J.Q. Hack]

I glanced over a few of your stories and I liked the writing style very much. I'm a volunteer editor and if you'd like I would be more than happy to look at your story. Just contact me by PM.

Thanks,
J.Q. Hack

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Draft?

Hi, thanks for the offer. Where can I send the draft to?

 

[Winemaster]

also

I also have put together a story that is searching for editing help...


https://forum.literotica.com/...ad.php?t=325294

 

[CharlotteNCguy]

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