AMWF story request

[IronWill_]

Has anyone read the story "The Flag Girls Get Fucked" by Stormbringer? He is truly a fantastic writer. I was wondering if anyone could write an amwf story based on his story. Here is his story -https://www.literotica.com/s/the-flag-girls-get-fucked. The amwf genre in Literotica is really underrated and underrepresented and I was hoping if anyone could read the story and write an adaptation to the two hot white girls (Dixie and Rose) fucking Asian guys instead of black guys like they did in the story. Try not to imitate Stormbringer's style too much but have similar elements where you have the flag bikinis, mild and subtle racism, 1 on 1 sex, gangbangs, creampies, etc. I understand that since you will be taking the characters and elements from Stormbringer, you will have to ask him for approval beforehand to avoid plagiarism. Some ideas to the story would be where Dixie and Rose meet some Asian guys in Key West, Florida or somehow going to Los Angeles for a trip and ending up in Chinatown and fucking some Chinese guys, etc. It would also be funny for the Asian guys to find Dixie's confederate flag bikini offensive and that leading to sex . I will leave the story ideas up to you. In Stormbringer's original story, the two white girls cuck their white husbands with black men, so have Dixie and Rose cuck their white husbands with Asian men. Try to also have the two white girls wear shirts saying "I Love Asian Guys." In the end, try to write how both Dixie and Rose end up living with Asian guys or each dating an Asian guy and becoming pregnant with a half-Asian baby.

 

[IronWill_]

Hey guys, I have decided to change my request from an adaptation of Stormbringer's "Flag Girls Get Fucked" in order to avoid plagiarism issues. My new AMWF story request would be a hung Asian guy moving to the South (US) and moving into a house near a racist southern white family, who are angry with living next door to an Asian man (Chinese). The white husband and his sons racially taunt and insult the Asian man and he gets furious and decides to take his revenge on the white man's sexy wife. The white wife has yellow blonde hair like sand, sparkling blue-eyes like the ocean, almost 6 foot tall, and has big breasts (36DD) with a thin waist and big ass. The sexy white wife regularly wears a Confederate flag bikini along with a Confederate flag tramp stamp tattoo with denim short shorts (kind of like daisy dukes because this story takes place in the summer and it's hot in the South). The Asian man decides to sneak over to the white family's house one day while the husband is away at work and the boys are at school to fuck the sexy white wife to get revenge. The white sons first arrive home and see their mom in a Confederate flag bikini being fucked by the Asian man in their parents' bedroom bed and first are shocked and angry but then get turned on and jerk their cocks. The husband comes home last and is outraged at his wife making love to the Asian man but then gets a hard on and jerks his cock as the Asian man continues to fuck his sexy white wife and finally cums deep inside her, giving her a massive creampie. The sons were filming the sex action on their phones and the Asian man and the white wife fall asleep together in bed. The cucked white husband then cooks and eats dinner alone with his sons while the Asian man and white wife awake and continues to fuck throughout the night. The rest of the family become accustomed to the Asian man's regular visits and film him fucking her while wearing a Confederate flag bikini, and ending with Asian cum leaking out of her blonde white pussy. After regular fuck sessions, the white wife tells her family that she is pregnant and runs off to live with the Asian man.

What do you guys think? Can anyone write this story for me?

 

[Hypoxia]

What do you guys think? Can anyone write this story for me?

My eyes are bad so I can't read much of your walls of text. I gather you think only Chinese are Asians. That excludes stories with Indian, Malay, Korean, Japanese, Afghan, Tonkinese, and Tamil guys. Once you've gone Hmong, you can never go wrong.

 

[IronWill_]

Sorry for the long text haha, I basically wrote my story already. And no, I do not think only Chinese are Asians, of course not. The term Asian can be broad I know, but I just happen to want the character in the story to be Chinese. I have nothing against other Asians.

 

[IronWill_]

My eyes are bad so I can't read much of your walls of text. I gather you think only Chinese are Asians. That excludes stories with Indian, Malay, Korean, Japanese, Afghan, Tonkinese, and Tamil guys. Once you've gone Hmong, you can never go back.

Sorry for the long text haha, I basically wrote my story already. And no, I do not think only Chinese are Asians, of course not. The term Asian can be broad I know, but I just happen to want the character in the story to be Chinese. I have nothing against other Asians.

"Once you've gone Hmong, you can never go back." What does this quote mean?

 

[Hypoxia]

"Once you've gone Hmong, you can never go back." What does this quote mean?

I've fixed it to "Once you've gone Hmong, you can never go wrong." It's a mockery of "Once you go Black you can never go back." Racist twaddle.

Re your PM: Asking for writers to finish your plot usually fails; most of us have our own ideas. This forum is for floating ideas for others to twist, and maybe to prod someone to take up a mutated scheme. But "write my story" doesn't work. Well, maybe if you offer money...

How to write it yourself: Visualize your tale as a stage or video show, and blog it -- what you see, hear, feel, and thing. That's the skeleton of a written story. Now slap words onto it like clay on a sculpture's armature; scrape away any excess; smooth it till it looks good. Voila! You're an author!

 

[IronWill_]

I've fixed it to "Once you've gone Hmong, you can never go wrong." It's a mockery of "Once you go Black you can never go back." Racist twaddle.

Re your PM: Asking for writers to finish your plot usually fails; most of us have our own ideas. This forum is for floating ideas for others to twist, and maybe to prod someone to take up a mutated scheme. But "write my story" doesn't work. Well, maybe if you offer money...

How to write it yourself: Visualize your tale as a stage or video show, and blog it -- what you see, hear, feel, and thing. That's the skeleton of a written story. Now slap words onto it like clay on a sculpture's armature; scrape away any excess; smooth it till it looks good. Voila! You're an author!

Thanks. Yeah, I'm new to Literotica and thought that you could get a writer real quick, but yeah I've been thinking of writing the story myself, except I don't know if it will turn out well. Thanks for your advice though.

 

[Hypoxia]

...yeah I've been thinking of writing the story myself, except I don't know if it will turn out well.

That's much of the fun of writing. We create a setting, place a few plot points, and populate it with players... who go off and do their own thangs. I often let my characters run with a story that I need merely transcribe. They do the work for me. Of COURSE she'll do what's needed to become an Evil Queen. Of COURSE Ruth runs off with the politician and self-destructs. That's easy.

None of us were born as writers. We practice and learn. You can too. Have fun!

 

[IronWill_]

That's much of the fun of writing. We create a setting, place a few plot points, and populate it with players... who go off and do their own thangs. I often let my characters run with a story that I need merely transcribe. They do the work for me. Of COURSE she'll do what's needed to become an Evil Queen. Of COURSE Ruth runs off with the politician and self-destructs. That's easy.

None of us were born as writers. We practice and learn. You can too. Have fun!

Thanks. This is my first time writing a story like this and I hope it will turn out good.

 

[IronWill_]

Does anyone know a good setting for this story? When I thought of the South and the Deep South, the first state that came to my mind was Georgia for some reason. I'm planning to have the setting of my story in rural Georgia, maybe in a town some miles from Atlanta. Does anyone know a rural town or is familiar with rural Georgia? Also the town has to be extremely redneck. lol I know it won't be really hard to find one.

https://www.onlyinyourstate.com/georgia/move-to-georgia-towns/

 

[Yerkiddin]

What might be a problem with Georgia is the number of rednecks likely to be neighbors that might feel inclined to take negative actions against the Chinese man. They would about need to live out in the sticks a bit before it would be just the two houses for a while on a given road.

 

[yukonnights]

In regard to the location/setting. I would suggest you broaden your thinking. There are racists everywhere. What Yerkiddin mentions above raises another issue; If the story is set in a miserable place, it may become too much and hard to manage.

Just something to think about; Perhaps the "redneck" couple have relocated from Georgia for a new job in a "progressive city of your choice"—hubby hates it, but couldn't turn down the better job. What makes it worse for him is; he signed a one years lease and then finds out his neighbor is a Chinese man. He's fully convinced China is the country's greatest threat, and that all immigrants are part of a bigger plot to overthrow the good ole USA.

Now, instead of your main character having such an uphill battle in a deep south setting...it opens the door for your hero to show the wife a brighter side of life. She begins to see Racist Hubby with new eyes...thus, the more logical fall into the neighbors bed.

However you choose to do it, I encourage you to just jump in a write it. Most every author here started out just like you. It's a fun hobby, and nice creative outlet. There's a lot of online info about the basic elements of writing a short story, it's not rocket science

 

[IronWill_]

What might be a problem with Georgia is the number of rednecks likely to be neighbors that might feel inclined to take negative actions against the Chinese man. They would about need to live out in the sticks a bit before it would be just the two houses for a while on a given road.

Yeah, I've already started writing my story and I didn't really include any neighbors, only the racist redneck husband. I understand how dangerous the racist rednecks in Georgia can be but I mean this is just my first draft. Thank you for your suggestions.

 

[IronWill_]

In regard to the location/setting. I would suggest you broaden your thinking. There are racists everywhere. What Yerkiddin mentions above raises another issue; If the story is set in a miserable place, it may become too much and hard to manage.

Just something to think about; Perhaps the "redneck" couple have relocated from Georgia for a new job in a "progressive city of your choice"—hubby hates it, but couldn't turn down the better job. What makes it worse for him is; he signed a one years lease and then finds out his neighbor is a Chinese man. He's fully convinced China is the country's greatest threat, and that all immigrants are part of a bigger plot to overthrow the good ole USA.

Now, instead of your main character having such an uphill battle in a deep south setting...it opens the door for your hero to show the wife a brighter side of life. She begins to see Racist Hubby with new eyes...thus, the more logical fall into the neighbors bed.

However you choose to do it, I encourage you to just jump in a write it. Most every author here started out just like you. It's a fun hobby, and nice creative outlet. There's a lot of online info about the basic elements of writing a short story, it's not rocket science

That suggestion where the redneck couple moves to a progressive city or place and the white wife leaving her husband is interesting and I will definitely consider that idea. I have already started writing and I am sticking to my plot of the Chinese man moving in next door to the racist redneck family. Yeah I understand that racists are everywhere, not just in the South, but so far it isn't so miserable to manage. I feel like I may have made the racist redneck husband too "nice," lol. But this is only my first draft, and a lot can be edited and changed. Thank you for your advice.

 

[Yerkiddin]

In regard to the location/setting. I would suggest you broaden your thinking. There are racists everywhere. What Yerkiddin mentions above raises another issue; If the story is set in a miserable place, it may become too much and hard to manage.

Just something to think about; Perhaps the "redneck" couple have relocated from Georgia for a new job in a "progressive city of your choice"—hubby hates it, but couldn't turn down the better job. What makes it worse for him is; he signed a one years lease and then finds out his neighbor is a Chinese man. He's fully convinced China is the country's greatest threat, and that all immigrants are part of a bigger plot to overthrow the good ole USA.

Now, instead of your main character having such an uphill battle in a deep south setting...it opens the door for your hero to show the wife a brighter side of life. She begins to see Racist Hubby with new eyes...thus, the more logical fall into the neighbors bed.

However you choose to do it, I encourage you to just jump in a write it. Most every author here started out just like you. It's a fun hobby, and nice creative outlet. There's a lot of online info about the basic elements of writing a short story, it's not rocket science

Yukonnights: I'd click "like" on that post, if this forum had that! You did a good job at finding an alternative suggestion. (Something I should have done!)

 

[IronWill_]

Yukonnights: I'd click "like" on that post, if this forum had that! You did a good job at finding an alternative suggestion. (Something I should have done!)

Haha, thanks guys!

 

[Yerkiddin]

I keep forgetting there are people out there bigoted against Asians. I got my eyes checked by a tech that was from China, back when I lived in Dallas. She was kinda timid, but I found her keenly attractive, and swapped phone numbers with her on the day we met. That was a wildly sexual relationship, that was going strong and we were starting to talk about marriage when I found out she was already married. (A sad day that was!) I tried to stop all sex, since she was married, and had to quit seeing her entirely for that to happen. (She proved I had no willpower to tell her "no", if I was within arm's reach.)

I have at least one friend that completely prefers Asian women over all others, but there are rednecks prejudiced against any "race" there is.

 

[IronWill_]

I keep forgetting there are people out there bigoted against Asians. I got my eyes checked by a tech that was from China, back when I lived in Dallas. She was kinda timid, but I found her keenly attractive, and swapped phone numbers with her on the day we met. That was a wildly sexual relationship, that was going strong and we were starting to talk about marriage when I found out she was already married. (A sad day that was!) I tried to stop all sex, since she was married, and had to quit seeing her entirely for that to happen. (She proved I had no willpower to tell her "no", if I was within arm's reach.)

I have at least one friend that completely prefers Asian women over all others, but there are rednecks prejudiced against any "race" there is.

Racism against Asians is real, and usually ignored in America. The media tends to mainly focus on racism against other minorities like African Americans, Hispanics, etc. But racism against Asians does occur but the media makes it invisible. Not sure about your story of your experience, sorry to hear about that. Seems like you could have asked if she was already married. I get that people have preferences as long as they are not racist. I wrote my story featuring a sexually attractive Asian men and a sexy blonde white woman as way to uplift the position of Asian men, as Asian men are generally emasculated and seen as "effeminate" in American media and society. Writing an amwf story is one way to do that, and amwf if also a pretty underrated genre in Literotica.

 

[Yerkiddin]

I did ask if she had a boyfriend. When she asked what I meant, I thought maybe it was a translation issue, and explained "Someone you like? Someone you kiss? Someone you enjoy spending time with?", and was told "No."

When she told me about her husband, she pointed out I did not ask if she was married. I told her that in the USA, if someone asks if you have a boyfriend, having a husband is close enough to cause a "Yes", even if you don't like him.

 

[IronWill_]

I did ask if she had a boyfriend. When she asked what I meant, I thought maybe it was a translation issue, and explained "Someone you like? Someone you kiss? Someone you enjoy spending time with?", and was told "No."

When she told me about her husband, she pointed out I did not ask if she was married. I told her that in the USA, if someone asks if you have a boyfriend, having a husband is close enough to cause a "Yes", even if you don't like him.

Hmmm sounds like a cultural difference or barrier there. Good luck in the future .