Every now and then, while reading the wonderful stories here at Literotica, I run across one that makes you stop and say, "Holy shit! What an incredible story."
I've read some really fantastic work here and have enjoyed the majority of it, but upon reading Sue D'nim's work, I had to take a breather.
There's nothing wrong with reading (or writing) a story about sex, but when you're in the erotica genre and find someone writing a great story that happens to include sex, you've found a real treasure.
"Fantasies" by Sue D'nim is just such a story. True, the main focus of the story is sex, but it is not what I consider a vital part of the plot. It is a necessary part of the plot, but far from essential.
"Fantasies" begins in the bedroom of a man who has begun fantasizing about a girl who used to sit across from him on the bus. This girl - this fantasy - becomes real, feeding on the energy of his imagination and lust.
The man discovers the true nature of his fantasy girl only when he has fallen victim to her motives. As a non-corporeal victim of her energy sapping wiles, he must find one who would fantasize about him in order to regain some semblance of the life he once had.
I gave this story the highest rating based on story, plot, imagery and mechanics. I highly recommend it.
Jason
I've read some really fantastic work here and have enjoyed the majority of it, but upon reading Sue D'nim's work, I had to take a breather.
There's nothing wrong with reading (or writing) a story about sex, but when you're in the erotica genre and find someone writing a great story that happens to include sex, you've found a real treasure.
"Fantasies" by Sue D'nim is just such a story. True, the main focus of the story is sex, but it is not what I consider a vital part of the plot. It is a necessary part of the plot, but far from essential.
"Fantasies" begins in the bedroom of a man who has begun fantasizing about a girl who used to sit across from him on the bus. This girl - this fantasy - becomes real, feeding on the energy of his imagination and lust.
The man discovers the true nature of his fantasy girl only when he has fallen victim to her motives. As a non-corporeal victim of her energy sapping wiles, he must find one who would fantasize about him in order to regain some semblance of the life he once had.
I gave this story the highest rating based on story, plot, imagery and mechanics. I highly recommend it.
Jason
