All the Colours of Blue

[Merelan]

Whew...... all the pain and torment of my teen years came rushing back. But then you soothed them with your colors, your cool touch. What an incredible story. Sharp and bitter, yet romantic and soft.
Keep writing please.

 

[Angel]

I agree. I absolutely loved that story.

Thanks Crazy!

 

[CRaZy]

Aww - thank you guys. As I've been saying to people in my feedback letters, this is a slightly different direction for me so I'm glad you like it. Although, I did receive one email which said it was well written but where were the damn vampires? LOL!

 

[Kessler]

Well done, Crazy. The descriptive writing style placed me at the scene. I felt I was actually there feeling her pain and her pleasure. Indeed, this story is a success. I am looking forward to your next posting. Bravo!!!!

 

[Aveun]

The story was...interesting but I actually felt a little unnerved by the constant mentioning of blue. Maybe I'm just being weird, but it seemed to lose it's powerful effect as the story pregressed. In the future it might be better to mention the color at the beginning, then perhaps at the end, instead of throughout the other story. Other than that, Brava!