analplayplease
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- Joined
- Oct 16, 2003
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- 5
Dear Authors,
When I pull up Literotica's pages and get ready to enjoy these stories I am often disapointed when I get to lines, phrases, or situations that are not correct. Some of the things on here are minor mistakes but could make a story much better. Other things are my own preferances and things I dislike in stories overall. Please do not take the message as an attack on any particular story or author. (list below)
AnalPlayPlease2
1) The physical description of women in most stories are absurd. A women that ways 97 pounds and is 5.0 tall will not have a "curvacious body and huge DD tits." If she does, make sure you add the breasts are fake. Please make the womens descriptions more accurate or better yet don't include any descriptions and let the reader make them up him/herself to fulfil our own ideas.
2) Descriptions like "gallons of cum" do nothing for me. Men do not have gallons of cum they have a teaspoon or two.
3) I would like a Loving Husbands category added to the story index. Loving Wives stories in general irritate me though I cannot pinpoint why. Perhaps because all of the wives seem like subs and we all know that that is untrue.
4) Incest Stories (I do not gernally read) but I have a main issue with father/daughter stories. Please do not include lines such as, "I have wanted her since she started developing at 12." That line causes people to think that lusting after children is ok since "everyone in the stories thinks it." I realize incest is not condoned or reccomended however those lines frighten me more than anything on this entire site. Now, in other respects please do not have daughter dialogue saying, "I have wanted my father since I was 15." Again those lines cause people to blur concepts of when sexuality is legal. One more issue, the eighteenth birthday themes are overdone and not done all that well.
Those are my main concerns and issue with the site. I love literotica and I love reading peoples stories and having mine read. As I said before those issues are just suggestions and I myself have my own preferances. I just wantede to let authors know what I like or dislike so they can have a better understanding of women in my age bracket (18-22). P.S. I did a small survey of my friends that read around the site before I posted this. There is nothing worse than masurbating to a nice story only to be turned off by an offensive line or phrase. Please, realize I only wish to make authors aware of things that make stories less sexy..
When I pull up Literotica's pages and get ready to enjoy these stories I am often disapointed when I get to lines, phrases, or situations that are not correct. Some of the things on here are minor mistakes but could make a story much better. Other things are my own preferances and things I dislike in stories overall. Please do not take the message as an attack on any particular story or author. (list below)
AnalPlayPlease2
1) The physical description of women in most stories are absurd. A women that ways 97 pounds and is 5.0 tall will not have a "curvacious body and huge DD tits." If she does, make sure you add the breasts are fake. Please make the womens descriptions more accurate or better yet don't include any descriptions and let the reader make them up him/herself to fulfil our own ideas.
2) Descriptions like "gallons of cum" do nothing for me. Men do not have gallons of cum they have a teaspoon or two.
3) I would like a Loving Husbands category added to the story index. Loving Wives stories in general irritate me though I cannot pinpoint why. Perhaps because all of the wives seem like subs and we all know that that is untrue.
4) Incest Stories (I do not gernally read) but I have a main issue with father/daughter stories. Please do not include lines such as, "I have wanted her since she started developing at 12." That line causes people to think that lusting after children is ok since "everyone in the stories thinks it." I realize incest is not condoned or reccomended however those lines frighten me more than anything on this entire site. Now, in other respects please do not have daughter dialogue saying, "I have wanted my father since I was 15." Again those lines cause people to blur concepts of when sexuality is legal. One more issue, the eighteenth birthday themes are overdone and not done all that well.
Those are my main concerns and issue with the site. I love literotica and I love reading peoples stories and having mine read. As I said before those issues are just suggestions and I myself have my own preferances. I just wantede to let authors know what I like or dislike so they can have a better understanding of women in my age bracket (18-22). P.S. I did a small survey of my friends that read around the site before I posted this. There is nothing worse than masurbating to a nice story only to be turned off by an offensive line or phrase. Please, realize I only wish to make authors aware of things that make stories less sexy..