Alien cat people and orgy, oh my!

[Chantal Marchon]

This was a fun story that I think I will be making into a series.

I would appreciate any feedback.

It has a little bit of bonage, a little bit of female on female sex and more.

I hope you like it!
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=37676

 

[Hudson]

Hi Chantal
I loved this story, yes at first it brought a smile to my face blue skin and so on, however you set the scene for the rest of the story and it was great, I do think you need to make this into a series as I think you have thought this through a lot and you know where to take it chapter by chapter.

Excellent read
Cheers

PS a couple of missed words through out you will pick them on a re read

 

[Chantal Marchon]

Thanks for commenting

Thanks for taking the time to comment on this story. Sometimes I type faster than I read so I inadvertently skip things, words, sections, plot lines --Ha ha. (kidding) It is hard to know when you have missed something when you are the writer. It is easy for your mind to overlook it.

 

[Chantal Marchon]

Thans for reading this story

If you read this story, please, please vote on it! Thank you. I need feedback too! I need your help to improve the story.

 

[KillerVanity]

Great read, Chantal. I just voted and I will be sending you detailed feedback shortly.

 

[Chantal Marchon]

Three Cheers To Killer Vanity

Thank you Thank you!