Alien Abduction Ideas

[causeway25oclock]

I had an idea for a story, or rather a couple of ideas, for a story with themes I'd like to read, but don't particularly have the confidence to write myself, so I figured I would put my ideas here and see what people thought.

The basic idea is that a young couple, college aged, are abducted by aliens for breeding purposes. They are both subjected to a variety of sexual experiences; in particular, I was thinking the man could be anal probed while the woman watches, causing her to grow aroused, and is then impregnated by some sort of alien creature. Alternatively, or perhaps additionally, the man is somehow "impregnated" himself, perhaps by an alien creature laying eggs in his rectum which then hatch into symbiotic larvae.

 

[flexus]

Interesting idea. Maybe a bit older couple, around 30 would be better.

 

[causeway25oclock]

That could certainly work, yes.

 

[Hypoxia]

This young couple -- where are they abducted, and who are they? Queer Korean siblings taken from a Jamaican nude resort? Blond WASPs snatched from a Wichita prayer meeting? Late-term cancer patients vacuumed-up from a Mayo Clinic garden? Libyan cat-burglars roping into the Louvre? A random whore and trick in 1990s Auckland? Context matters.

 

[pollyannaowt]

A kinky Briori fan-fiction?

"The 37's" Star Trek Voyager S2E1 (from Wikipedia)

On stardate 48975.1, the crew of Voyager follows an ancient SOS to a Class L planet whose atmospheric interference requires landing the ship to investigate. On the surface, Captain Janeway leads an away team to discover the source of the transmission: a Lockheed Model 10 Electra with an alien generator added to sustain the SOS...

Janeway learns that the Briori visited Earth in 1937 and abducted some 300 humans, bringing them to the Delta Quadrant to use as slaves. The humans later successfully rebelled against the Briori, who fled and never returned. Fifteen generations later, there are more than 100,000 humans living in three cities on the planet. The last eight un-revived humans in cryostasis were believed dead by the others, who came to revere "the 37s" as "monuments to [their] ancestors..."

 

[pollyannaowt]

The Human Subjects Institutional Review Board said we are in compliance

Wikipedia's "List of Bermuda Triangle incidents" has some information and links to more with regard to over 900 persons who supposedly disappeared in the Atlantic Ocean.

Scientists at a prestigious university on a distant planet have been forbidden the use of test subjects native to their planet. Being more highly evolved than mere earthlings they have no greater ethical qualms with kidnapping us, than we have with using lesser species.

 

[SimonDoom]

Hypoxia, in his typically whimsical way, raises a very good point. Context matters. For the story to really work well the alien abduction experience must change your characters in some way, so you should consider who they are at the beginning of the story and who they are at the end and how they are changed.

For instance, suppose they are both young (over 18 of course) and the girl is a virgin and the guy wants to get into her pants but she rebuffs him and he doesn't even know if she'll like sex. He's a bit of a jerk and thinks he can do what he wants with women.

Once abducted he becomes an alien's sex slave and learns to be submissive. Meanwhile the young girl goes crazy with alien sex and learns she really likes sex, but only with the aliens and not with the former boyfriend.

It could go in infinite different directions. But think in terms of the characters, not just in terms of the abduction.

 

[causeway25oclock]

There are a couple different ways it could go, yes.

I think the most interesting idea, for me, would be one of two options. Either a fairly straight-laced, picket fence couple, with an office working husband and a housewife. They get along well but have a fairly stagnant sex life, until the abduction. He turns submissive and she turns dominant, but by the time they're released their relationship is stronger than before.

The second one is more like SimonDoom's idea; a jerk jock and a nerdy girl, which ends with her domming him.

 

[landiek]

Hypoxia, in his typically whimsical way, raises a very good point. Context matters. For the story to really work well the alien abduction experience must change your characters in some way, so you should consider who they are at the beginning of the story and who they are at the end and how they are changed.

For instance, suppose they are both young (over 18 of course) and the girl is a virgin and the guy wants to get into her pants but she rebuffs him and he doesn't even know if she'll like sex. He's a bit of a jerk and thinks he can do what he wants with women.

Once abducted he becomes an alien's sex slave and learns to be submissive. Meanwhile the young girl goes crazy with alien sex and learns she really likes sex, but only with the aliens and not with the former boyfriend.

It could go in infinite different directions. But think in terms of the characters, not just in terms of the abduction.

I like this idea. Landi

 

[landiek]

I was involved in a story called Humans are the Alien Creatures

It was both futuristic and primitive but the humans were part of a zoo exhibit

There was only two characters but it was one thread I had hoped to resurrect

 

[Nezhul]

I think, that you should write them out all the same.
You'll never have confidence writing unless you start writing.
My first writing attempts are literally physically painful to read. But today, people seem to like my stuff.

So don't be discouraged - just write. Try to copy the style of your favorite author, don't forget to check spelling and orphography with MS word and listen to its suggestions - it's not right every time (especially in cases of long sentences like this one here), but it's a good thing for a newbie to try and keep it simple and listen to its corrections.

 

[causeway25oclock]

It isn't the quality of my writing that I'm concerned about, so much as it is my ability to finish what I've started, honestly.

 

[LWulf]

I think the movie Heavy Metal did the scenario well enough. A congressman, and a stenographer are abducted by aliens (two cocaine-like junkies) who flubbed the pickup and the congressman gets dusted. However, the stenographer, a huge boobed, red-headed, Jewish girl becomes the love interest of a puny android. She loves the sex, but wants him to be circumcised and meet her mother, before they get married.

Cue "Heavy Metal" by Don Felder

 

[Magineer]

Space - the Final Farce...

Can't wait to see the first 'humans abduct aliens' story...

... just think of the fun Captain Kirk and his jolly crew could have with all those tentacles...

... where no man has gone before..?