SusanJillParker
I'm 100% woman
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Aileen Wuonos rewritten
I'm writing a story for a woman who was terribly abused by several men. The perfect writer to write such a story, the plot sounds like my life. Actually, the abuse that I personally suffered is the reason why she chose me to write her story.
What makes this story different from all the other emotional, physical, and sexual abuse stories is that this woman wants the story to have a happy ending. Most emotional, physical, and sexual abuse stories don't have happy endings. Most stories of men abusing women don't make it to the newspaper until it's too late.
What's different about this story is that instead of the man stalking, harassing, and terrorizing the woman, she wants me to write a scenario where she turns the table on men, lots of men. Much like the story of Aileen Wuonos, she wants to be the hunter in the story instead of the hunted. A female version of the equalizer, a white, female Denzel Washington, she wants me to write her fantasy of taking revenge on men.
With her a superhero, female crusader for all women, this could be fun and I think it could be a good story. I'm just struggling with how she takes her revenge with gun or knife. Perhaps she uses a different method each time depending on the man. Being that she's a woman and half the size of most men, I like the idea of poison.
"I made chocolate cupcakes, your favorite, just for you. Have one."
I realize that this is not a story that most men would read, the reason for me posting this here, I just wanted to get a sense of men's opinions, good, bad, indifferent, positive, or negative. What do you think?
Actually, I wish Hollywood would make such a movie with someone hot in the staring role of a female avenger praying on abusive men. They could show her being abused in the beginning and the seeking her revenge in the end. They touched about that scenario with Scarlet Johansson in Lucy with her kicking the ass of lots of men.
You may make a post here or send me a private PM.
Thank you so much in advance for your help.
I'm writing a story for a woman who was terribly abused by several men. The perfect writer to write such a story, the plot sounds like my life. Actually, the abuse that I personally suffered is the reason why she chose me to write her story.
What makes this story different from all the other emotional, physical, and sexual abuse stories is that this woman wants the story to have a happy ending. Most emotional, physical, and sexual abuse stories don't have happy endings. Most stories of men abusing women don't make it to the newspaper until it's too late.
What's different about this story is that instead of the man stalking, harassing, and terrorizing the woman, she wants me to write a scenario where she turns the table on men, lots of men. Much like the story of Aileen Wuonos, she wants to be the hunter in the story instead of the hunted. A female version of the equalizer, a white, female Denzel Washington, she wants me to write her fantasy of taking revenge on men.
With her a superhero, female crusader for all women, this could be fun and I think it could be a good story. I'm just struggling with how she takes her revenge with gun or knife. Perhaps she uses a different method each time depending on the man. Being that she's a woman and half the size of most men, I like the idea of poison.
"I made chocolate cupcakes, your favorite, just for you. Have one."
I realize that this is not a story that most men would read, the reason for me posting this here, I just wanted to get a sense of men's opinions, good, bad, indifferent, positive, or negative. What do you think?
Actually, I wish Hollywood would make such a movie with someone hot in the staring role of a female avenger praying on abusive men. They could show her being abused in the beginning and the seeking her revenge in the end. They touched about that scenario with Scarlet Johansson in Lucy with her kicking the ass of lots of men.
You may make a post here or send me a private PM.
Thank you so much in advance for your help.
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