Varian P
writing again
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The first chapter of my latest story, After, posted today, and I've come begging for constructive feedback.
It's a pretty big departure for me, both stylistically, and in attempting a plot that's bigger than the immediate needs/desires of the main characters.
A word of warning; this chapter's fairly dark, with some n/c/reluctance scenes, though ultimately the larger story is about individuals defying and rising above their brutal environment.
Cheers!
It's a pretty big departure for me, both stylistically, and in attempting a plot that's bigger than the immediate needs/desires of the main characters.
A word of warning; this chapter's fairly dark, with some n/c/reluctance scenes, though ultimately the larger story is about individuals defying and rising above their brutal environment.
Cheers!